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That's OK. Neither can I, haha.

I regret to inform you that I can't draw worth a sh!t.

I agree with Rex Fan on this one. I was also rooting for Syntarsus.

Hmm, it would make sense for them to have merchandise ready to go. We shall see.

Nice. It's all starting to take shape.

I like the petting zoo idea. Perhaps they have one in the new park. Microceratops, Dryosaurus, Hypsilophodon, and maybe a few other species could be involved.

Good fight. I was rooting for Syntarsus. I do think it would win in real life too. It was better suited for combat than Oviraptor. It's teeth and claws would have been a dangerous combo.

Good fight. Wasn't rooting for either though. 

I do have a question about Past and Present. Should I replace the African Buffalo with a Grizzly Bear? Wanted to get your opinions.

Thanks for the comments Lads...

When people comment, it's how a writer usually gauges how good the story is going....  It also works as a way, that the writer knows, he/she did not just spend, Two hours, wasted....

nice fight, was rooting for Giganotosaurus :)

Theres a chance... The scene with Lex and the baby trike was planned for the film, The baby was made, but the scene was scrapped...

It could come back,I  don't really see how they'd fit that in.... 

Thanks guys, I will definitely go ahead and develop it more. You can expect to see the first chapter in the coming weeks!

This sounds really good. Can't wait to read it.

This was a great fight.  I feel a little sorry for the Triceratops crashing into the tree.  Shows how dynamic a fight can be.

I can not wait to this film after so many years of waiting Jurassic Park returns :D

I like that idea. It could be like a petting zoo dino. Along with defer others.

ThisThis'd could be awesome! If ymaligning to do it, i give a huge GO AHEAD

Well Paden, I was kinda trying to keep a fist person, "I talk when its time to describe myself." Just to keep the unknown there.

Great fight Mr.Happy. I was rooting for the Giganotosaurus. 

Great idea for a story I would defiantly enjoy reading it!

The stock is an ATI six position collapsible stock, and I'm assuming that fore end is also aftermarket. The heatshield and ghost ring sight look after market as well. 10/10 Would use daily.

Paden, I looked at the pictures from what Alien posted. That was a modded out 12 gauge between the seats, not an M16.

You can see that the fore end would slide back, you can see the tube mag that is standard on pump actions, you can see the magazine cap on the tube, and that box mag is too big for an M16 because it would need to hold 12 gage shells. I'm guessing that's an 8-10 round mag, with an 18.5" barrel. My guess is either a Remington 870 or a Mossberg 590/500. 

I was rooting for the Triceratops, but it was still a freat fight. I'm seriously pumped for the rest of LS.

Yeah, this could be a really good story.

I agree with Mr.Happy on this.

Very well done.

Nice chapter.

Good chapter again Delta.

It would be interesting. Maybe not much more than a chew toy for the predators, but it could be interesting.

Interesting. Sounds like a good story.

Good work as usual Paden.

I think it's definitely a possibility seeing as they are supposed to be taking parts from the different novels that have not been used so far in the films, like what they did in jp3. They would be a super addition along with dinosaurs such as carnotaurus and many more hopefuls!

Good Chapter. (I think you should explain more about "yourself" From third person, then Dive into the story, I was confused by the first chapter...)

Good job.

-Paden

Yeah, i had written it out to where anky took the brow horn off with his tail...but i scratched it. The Tyrannosaurus pair was also a last minute addition, for some dramatic effect ;)

Glad you liked it, man. I enjoyed writing this, considering doing another like it soon.

I completely agree with the list. Can't wait for your fights RexFan.

I guess MuldoonLives did get the message to Trevvoror...

(Thats on set at JW)

Cheers

-Paden 

Carnosaur, thank you for this fight and considering my suggestion.

Here are my reasons for suggesting an all-herbovire fight, and specifically Ankylo vs Trike.

1.  A change from the all-carnivore battles.  I love those fights, but I see no reason why the rare herbivore fight can't be posted.

2.  Some of the most dangerous fights (in my opinion) are between herbivores of different species.  I have seen some brutal elephant-rhino fights, and Ankylosaurus and Triceratops were the heavy-weight herbivores of the Cretaceous Period.

3.  Ankylosaurus has the toughest armour and a lethal weapon, but Triceratops is the larger creature, with a tough beak and horns that could go through flesh like a hot knife through butter.  I wanted to suggest a battle in which it was armament vs armour.  I wanted to see how those hrons would hold up against the tank armour and club.

4.  I remember hearing Dr Bakker say that Triceratops was the most dangerous Cretaceous herbivore because of it's size and head.  I agree, but when it comes to which one has the fewest weaknesses and the hardest to kill, I gotta go with Ankylosaurus.  All of Triceratops' main weapons are up front, so once a T-rex gets around the head, the Trike is dead meat.  But with an Ankylosaurus, the enitre body (except for the underside) is covered in tough armour, and all it has to do is get low to the ground and swing it's club at a Tyrannosaurus when it's close enough.  So while Triceratops may have been the most dangerous, Ankylosaurus was definitely the toughest.

And yes, herbivores need a VERY good reason to fight each other.  The breeding season and limited resources like water or territory are the usual reasons, so you are justified for the context of the fight.

My one complaint is that the Tyrannosaurus pair came in too early.  I wanted both the Ankylo and Trike to do some real damage before one of them was picked off.

Either way, this was a well written fight, and I'm not complaining because I didn't write this fight (although I might in the future), so I have given a critique.

Cool fight, I expected the two Teretephoneus to wreck the Metriacanthosaurus, but still great fight.