Evan123
MemberCompsognathusApr-13-2014 2:44 AMOkay, so I've had an idea for a new story but I was looking for your advice before I start to really develop it!
heres a brief synopsis:
The story focuses on doctor Amelia Warner who is hired by Patel to oversee the production of dinosaur specimens for the highly advanced park being set up on Isla nublar (year 2026). She works incredibly hard and devotes herself to the job, she is overwhelmingly happy when the park opens to the world without a flaw! Things go downhill from there however when Amelia notices the most recent hatchlings do not exactly match the species they were labelled as! She runs many tests in private and discovers the leaders of Patel had accquired DNA strands that were not recognised but labelled them as species that were already introduced into the park. She confronts them about the issues but the response she gets is far from what she expected! As the parks defence systems fail before the new animal species, Amelia threatens to expose them! Things turn ugly and Amelia is left fighting for survival with a group of tourists while being hunted down by her corrupted employers!
comment as you wish! Thanks for reading.
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexApr-13-2014 3:31 AMInteresting. Sounds like a good story.
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MemberCompsognathusApr-13-2014 5:26 AMYeah, this could be a really good story.
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JP Carnotaur
MemberCompsognathusApr-13-2014 6:10 AMGreat idea for a story I would defiantly enjoy reading it!
The giant gate that read Jurassic Park was ruined. The gates where torn off and their where pieces of them all over the ground. Muldoon saw herbivore foot prints maybe Parasaurs or the Trike herd W
Deltadromeus
MemberCompsognathusApr-13-2014 6:33 AMThisThis'd could be awesome! If ymaligning to do it, i give a huge GO AHEAD
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Gojira2K
MemberCompsognathusApr-13-2014 10:00 AMThis sounds really good. Can't wait to read it.
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Evan123
MemberCompsognathusApr-13-2014 10:03 AMThanks guys, I will definitely go ahead and develop it more. You can expect to see the first chapter in the coming weeks!
