Deltadromeus
MemberCompsognathusApr-12-2014 6:41 PMI was walking for the entire night. Slowly and cautiously, I could see well, but the Velociraptor pack could see better. Its now morning, and I'm starting to get hungry. I look around. I'm in a thin forest, trees are common, but not dense. This is the kind of territory I like. However, I already have a great area with lots of herbivores. I'm still looking when, in the distance, I spot a Therizonosaurus. I've always though those things to be funny. Not on the menu, but funny.
I walked over to the large beast, just staring. The Therizinosaurus looked down at me from the height of his his long neck. He knows that I am potential danger, but isn't in to worried. Obviously the his size puts him at an advantage, plus the fact that I'm not making any aggressive movements, he resumes his eating.
I watch for a bit, then wander off. Hoping to find food. Several hours later, I find another forest, and a sweet surprise. There is a Deinochierus dead ahead, and it hasn't seen me. I creep towards the giant purple feathered mass of meat. I'm downwind, and as make no sounds when I walk.
About twenty feet away, I charge. Running at a full sprint, I leap onto the side of the slowly reacting monster. My target, the sail. Its contains most of the blood that goes to its brain and body. Its a blood cookie basically. When I (expertly mind you) land on the side of the Deinocheirus, I drive my toe claws deep as anchors, and then simply reach up and cut into the small amount of flesh that the sail is made of.
Blood comes spurting out of the wound, and I get showered in it. I hop off, and let my few slashes do the dirty work for me. The Deinocheirus tries to attack me, but I'm to quick. In only an hour, the feathered animal is a carcass. I eat as much as I can of it, and then just stay with it until nightfall. I explore the area a bit too, but I don't venture far from my "hard earned" meal.
Hi
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MemberCompsognathusApr-12-2014 10:55 PMGood Chapter. (I think you should explain more about "yourself" From third person, then Dive into the story, I was confused by the first chapter...)
Good job.
-Paden
Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexApr-13-2014 3:34 AMGood chapter again Delta.
Jack of all trades. Master of none
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MemberCompsognathusApr-13-2014 5:14 AMNice chapter.
Keep in mind that many people have died for their beliefs; it's actually quite common. The real courage is in living and suffering for what you believe in. -Brom-
Deltadromeus
MemberCompsognathusApr-13-2014 6:30 AMWell Paden, I was kinda trying to keep a fist person, "I talk when its time to describe myself." Just to keep the unknown there.
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