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Hmm, If its anything else the dinosaurs, Their will have to be smaller amounts of it...

Fair?

All who were loyal to me in battle hold power. All who are not, shall be destroyed. Also MrHappy, that's a great idea.

Destroy what, us!?! You can't we have too much power to be defeated. My dinosaurs and dragons will destroy you. If you are not sure what dragon's I have here are pictures.

Bewilderbeast, I have two.

http://img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20140411155630/howtotrainyourdragon/images/0/02/Bewilderbeast_Battle.png

Red Death, also have two.

http://img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20140131021031/howtotrainyourdragon/images/c/c5/Rd.jpg

If its a battle you want...

Its a battle you'll get, The DAF Shall Remain Stead fast in our goal to defend, and destroy...

I believe so. The ones who likely won't have power are the guys we defeat. It's us who were in it before the war who have power.

Mr. Happy being an officer do I hold power?

Tyrant, I have a Compy army 10 000 strong, AND Terrance and Thorn. For short, I'll call them TNT, and their nickname shall be "The Dynamite Duo." 

Delta, when we take over, can the first order of business be free high speed internet for everyone?

I'm the real Tyrant! I won't bow down to you! You won't win this battle!

Big mistake, Tyrant.

So did I Mr. Happy.

Emperor Delta, I just want to know, am I a power holder?

Okay, if we are going other weapons besides Dinosaurs, then I bring dragons to the party. Mr. Happy I will back you up with my Bewilderbeast's and Red Death's.

My two Bewilderbeast's 

http://img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20140411155630/howtotrainyourdragon/images/0/02/Bewilderbeast_Battle.png

My Red Death. There two of them.

http://img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20140131021031/howtotrainyourdragon/images/c/c5/Rd.jpg

It has been said in the comments section of one of the chapters of my story that I am probably the best writer on this site.  If I was, you have me clearly beat.  Your style is amazing.

One aspect that I really think stood out for this story is the first-person perspective, but even more than that, you don't give the creatures any names from the binomial nomenclature system.  Creatures don't think of themselves as the names that we humans classfied them as.  They simply see their kind as "their kind."

Another aspect:  the ambiguity and implications.  You never said what the female creature guarding her nest was (although we can guess).  You never said what catastrophic ruined the landscape (although we can guess).  This mystery enhances the reading experience.

Well done.

I don't know what to say....SOMETHING REAL, you know I respect more than perhaps anyone else on this forum and the reasons for this are just above! Great story! Haha, can't wait for the next instalment 

Star Wars weapons? Really? How to counter that? Oh, I know. Do you believe in ghosts?

Amazing I can't wait to read more! Great detail and word choice! Keep it up! :)

Ok, cool. Ah, the Horror Mouth. Not our finest moment here, haha.

I like them all. I saw the Big Al one when I was really little, and I cried at the part when he died. I was 7 or 8, so that was a while back as I am 15 now.

Thanks guys. If the Spino wasn't so arrogant, he probably would have lost anyway, but not without doing more damage than what he did. I try to make theses fights more realistic than a bloodfest.

Great fight. I kinda hope we see another Rex and Spino fight sometime during Jurassic World to settle this disagreement but it doesnt look likely. Who knows maybe their will be another big fought with Rexy and a Giganotosaurus or Charcharadontosaurus.

Thanks MrHappy. That's exactly why I did it in this chapter. It was unexpected.

Good chapter. I was expecting something bad to happen to Lunar, but not this soon,

Thanks. Synca just can't catch a break.

One thing I like about this story is the humanizing emotions that your characters portray.

I feel so bad for Synca.  Losing your girlfriend is hard enough because of a break-up, but losing her because she was killed is beyond words.

Continue writing these excellent chapters please.

Ah, delta! Mr. Happy told me to contact you at the soonest moment.

It's not defeat if you go down fighting.

Just remember, overconfidence is the most dangerous form of carelessness ;)

I do, Delta. Thank you for letting me join your army. I will not disappoint you.

Well, T.rex could lift up to 450 pounds or so. I see Spinosaurus lifting about 700+ pounds or so.

Rex Fan, the rest of Scified didn't worry me. I've got MrHappy. But you however. You will pose some challenge to defeat. I look forwards to meeting you in battle. 

It's hard to pick exact documentaries, but I like JFC, WWD, CBD, DP, and PD a lot.

The slogan of the 414th Legion...

"A good soldier is always prepared to die for what's right. A great soldier is always prepared to live for what's right."

I like it. Never saw most of them however. I've watched Prehistoric Park, JFC (Favortite is the T.rex killer.) Chased by dinosaurs. Chased by sea monsters, and walking with dinosaurs. As well as the most educational of them all, JP 1, 2, and 3 ;)

Cool fight. I like how Spino was arrogant. If he wasn't, well, he was a good fighter, and could have done even more damage than he did.

Amazing. Just, amazing. Madam, you are a wonderful writer.

*sigh

Resistance is futile. Leuitenant 9097, get Private93 some guns. We also have a new member. Seargent Titan. And Officer 2k, I beilive you will find that the dark side is more fun. 

Nice fight. You can guess who I was rooting for ;)

My army(the 414th Legion) is preparing for battle. The vehicles are getting a last minute cleaning and the dinosaurs are being prepped for battle. We are ready when the word is given. The troops have been loaded onto the cruisers and they are ready for deployment.

Incredible. There are no words to describe how amazing this. Can't wait the rest.

Paden, my troops are human clones, but we have dinosaurs for them to ride into battle. Primarily Allosaurus', Albertosaurus', and Deltadromeus'. These species are used for their large size, but also speed. We do have a few Tyrannosaurus' and Trikes, but these are used more for support. My ARC Troopers(Advanced Recon Commandos) utilize Utahraptors for their stealth missions, along with the usual vehicles. Dinosaurs allow my men to have a greater range of mobility in hostile environments than most vehicles, but don't pack as much fire power.

Mr. Happy, I am a Officer.