The billed prey-creature had not been enough. Though she'd been fortunate when it had unknowingly stumbled so close to her nest, the prey-creature had been little more than leathery skin stretched taught over bone - another survivor from the instance in which the light had consumed the horizon and changed everything within and beneath the sky. However, it's time upon the darkening world had come to a swift and violent end, drawn to a close by a single crushing bite to the base of its skull delivered by her killing maw.
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She'd had no concept of the mercy she had just imparted; all that mattered was the continuance of her own life. There was nothing else beyond that. Thus she had consumed her prey with quivering zeal even as its body continued to spasm, tearing what little flesh was to be had upon the prey-creature's bones and lapping eagerly at the rivulets of blood that flowed from the gaping rents opened by her almost frenzied feeding. Her starving and pitifully-thin body thrilled at the nourishment, but it was woefully little compared to what she'd have gladly consumed in a single feeding during the days before the strange cold and dark had begun to claim everything in her world. Even so, her hunger drove her, and she gladly stripped the prey-creature down to the limits of its bones, breaking and cracking away at even them for the life-sustaining marrow held within.
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She had to survive. That was the only thought within her mind - born of the absolute need to protect her unborn son that even now slumbered fitfully within the small and fragile egg over which she maintained her unending vigil. She would never leave him; the demand of the tenuous motherhood with which she'd been graced overrid all other need - commanded nothing less. Though it had taxed her nearly to the point of exhaustion, she'd even dragged the prey-creature back to her nest before she fed - so intense was her need to be within reassuring sight of her son at all times. Such was the nature of her life now: a constant struggle to bear her one remaining child into the world amidst the others which she had failed to protect from the strange predator she could neither see nor smell.
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So there she laid, her massive form encircling the nest like some living wall of intent purpose as she kept her broad, scaled chin poised carefully atop the last of her precious eggs - taking comfort from the warmth held by the small life therein. Though her thin form shivvered from time to time due to the menacing cold and silence, two things she'd never before faced, she knew she wasn't alone in the dimming lands. The day would soon come in which she and her jealously-guarded son would at last know one another with their eyes.
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Keep in mind that many people have died for their beliefs; it's actually quite common. The real courage is in living and suffering for what you believe in. -Brom-
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Amazing I can't wait to read more! Great detail and word choice! Keep it up! :)
The giant gate that read Jurassic Park was ruined. The gates where torn off and their where pieces of them all over the ground. Muldoon saw herbivore foot prints maybe Parasaurs or the Trike herd W
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I don't know what to say....SOMETHING REAL, you know I respect more than perhaps anyone else on this forum and the reasons for this are just above! Great story! Haha, can't wait for the next instalment
How far can we push nature before it pushes back?
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It has been said in the comments section of one of the chapters of my story that I am probably the best writer on this site. If I was, you have me clearly beat. Your style is amazing.
One aspect that I really think stood out for this story is the first-person perspective, but even more than that, you don't give the creatures any names from the binomial nomenclature system. Creatures don't think of themselves as the names that we humans classfied them as. They simply see their kind as "their kind."
Another aspect: the ambiguity and implications. You never said what the female creature guarding her nest was (although we can guess). You never said what catastrophic ruined the landscape (although we can guess). This mystery enhances the reading experience.
Well done.
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You guys are awesome! It's positive feedback like this - knowing that you've been entertained - that makes it worthwhile! I'll be certain to have another for you close to the end of the coming week. :)
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JPCARNOTAUR - Thanks! It's always exceptionally pleasing to hear that I've produced something that was fun to read! I'm definately pleased you found my choices to be well-made! :)
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EVAN123 - Thank you so very much! That means a great deal to me. I'll do my absolute best to live up the respect you've chosen to give me - I promise! That, and I'll be sure to have the next installment out as soon as possible! :)
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ALPHADINO65 - That's high praise indeed, my friend! I'm extremely pleased that you fancy my style of characterizing the creatures within the scope of this small series - it's always quite compelling to hear that I've made good choices! Thank you so very much. I'll do my absolute best to not let you or anyone else down. :)
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Oh ya, JP-fans would be more fitting seeing as we are on jurassic world forums! Haha, yup trust me to not even remember what site I'm on!
How far can we push nature before it pushes back?
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