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Deltadromeus
MemberCompsognathusSep-09-2013 9:55 PM
Ladies and Gentlemen, Dinosaur freaks of all ages, put your hands together for Battle of the Titans! The battle arena is Dinosaur Park before everything went haywire. Its previous fight was Carnotaurus vs Magungasaurus. Without Further adu,
Fight!
5/8/13
Dinosaur Park Video Surveillance System
Area 2 Carnivore
Section 7 Carcharodontosaurus Pen
Camera 42
The Carcharodontosaurus in Dinosaur park is checking out his 16 foot tall metal fence. He sniffs the air, trying the smell the fence and failing. Then he smells something. An escaped cow has just past by his pen, but the Carcharodontosaurus thinks that its the fence making the smell and he instantly goes into hunting mode. The Carcharodontosaurus backs up from the fence, then runs forwards and slams into it. Knocking the metal fence over and breaking out of his pen. The Carcharodontosaurus then leans down and bites the metal fence. He finds that the fence wasn't making the smell, and that is doesn't taste like cow. The Carcharodontosaurus growls in frustration, then he realizes that he is somewhere new, even though he isn't even out of his pen. The fence was thin, but the metal covered the entire 16 feet, and didn't let anything from the outside world come into view for the Carcharodontosaurus.
At the Surveillance room, Bob notices that the Carcharodontosaurus fence is flashing on one of the several monitors in the room.
"Hey Bill, come over here," said Bob, looking at the monitor showing the fence.
Bill walks over to Bob and says, "The Carcharodontosaurus must have broken out of his exhibit.""Bob, what do we know about Carcharodontosaurus?"
Bob replies, "Not too much. Carcharadontosaurus is a new addition. This one is Carch, and he's around 42 feet long and 7 tons. We have several Carcharodontosaurus, but our Carch seems to be the only solitary one and the most troublesome too."
Bill says, "How do we know its Carch? It could be any one of them."
Bob replies, "Its Carch alright. I rewound the tape and the Carcharodontosaurus looks just like him."
Bill says, " Well if it is Carch, then that means the other Carcharodontosaurus are on the other side of the exhibit. We can at least barricade the fence until it is fixed, but that still means Carch is on the lose."
Bob, still looking at the monitor, says, "We can only hope that Carch doesn't cause any trouble."
Carch the Carcharodontosaurus was walking through the woods surrounding his pen when another smell hit him. It smelled like.. like... then he placed it. It smelled like Aegyptosaurus, but just a bit different. He runs towards the scent and finds that it is behind a fence. Carch doesn't hesitate to slam into the fence. He slams into the fence three times before it finally gives, and then he sees what was making the smell. A Saltosaurus, not Aegyptosaurus, in the ground dead. As Carch walked into the exhibit, he could feel the temperature change. It was a lot drier than he likes. Also, Carch notes that there aren't many trees except for a thin forest closer to the end of the paddock. Carch walked over to the Saltosaurus and was about to dig in when he smells another big predator. Carch looks up and sees a Tyrannotitan walking toward him, perfectly calm too. Carch doesn't like the arrival of the Tyrannotitan and realizes that it killed the Saltosaurus. Carch gives a loud roar at the Tyrannotitan, who was very close now. The Tyrannotitan just looks at Carch, not afraid of the Carcharodontosaurus several feet longer that he is. Carch becomes annoyed. He is used to steeling food from other dinosaurs slightly smaller than him just by roaring. He was the owner of a huge territory and was feared all over the swamp and forest he lived in. Even the Spinosaurus was cautious around him. How dare this other dinosaur stand up to him.
Back at the Surveillance room, Bob says, "we better call the security and get the dinosaur control team out"."
Bill replies, "the only problem is is that we don't know where Carch is."
Bob, looking at a new flashing thing on the monster says, "I think we do. The Tyrannotitan cage has just been broken, and looking over the video, it seems our friend Carch is the one who did it."
Bill says back, "we just gave the Tyrannotitan his food, so I think that Carch wants it. Two large theropods normally fight to the death over a good food source.""Bob, what do we know about our Tyrannotitan? I'd bet that if Carch and he went head to head, I think Carch would win."
Bob tells Bill, "Our Tyrannotitan is fairly peaceful. He lives alone, and really likes Titanosaur. His teeth are thicker than the other Allosaurs, and he even has better eyesight. Defiantly much thicker too. He's around 39-40 feet long and easily 7- 7.5 maybe even 8. He doesn't like to stand on the scale for long. So, how much are we betting here?"
"Hmm, I'll bet you 10 dollars that if there is a fight, Carch will win," replies Bill.
Bob says, "oh ya, well I'm betting 20 dollars that Tyrannotitan will win."
"You're on!" They reply in unison.
Carch is staring at the Tyrannotitan, confused as well as annoyed. Nothing back in Africa would be so calm around him. He inspired terror thorough his territory. He was thinking this when a large object slammed into his side, knocking him over and on the other side of the broken fence. Carch gets up, dazed by the sudden attack. He looks and sees that the Tyrannotitan hit him, and his annoyance and confusion change to anger. Carch gets up and walks over the fence again. The Tyrannotitan runs at Carch and slams into him. Carch once again falls, and looks at the Tyrannotitan. He me standing at the edge of the fence, but not over it. Carch realizes that the Tyrannotitn isn't even putting up a fight, he's just keeping him out of his territory. That turn Carch's anger into sheer rage. Carch gets up and runs full speed at the Tyrannotitan. He slams into the other Allosaur, and the Tyrannotitan gets pushed back. While pushing up against the Tyrannotitan, Carch starts to slash at his opponent's neck with his long hand claws, leaving shallow, but painful gouges. This makes the Tyrannotitan angry, but not for long because the Tyrannotitan turns his body and Carch stumbles to the ground. Carch is now very, very angry, and he lunges for the Tyrannotitan even as he is getting up. Carch catches the Tyrannotitan's upper thigh in his jaws and bites down as hard as he can. Carch then opens and closes his jaws rapidly, effective mauling the Tyrannotitan's leg. The Tyrannotitan screams in pain, the. Gives a very sudden jerk, freeing himself from Carch's jaws. Before Carch has time to react, the Tyrannotitan turns around and bites down on Carch's lowered neck. The Tyrannotian puts a lot of his weight on Carch's next, foreign it to say low. Then the Tyrannotian shakes his head back and forth, his thick, teeth leaves large gouges. Its Carch's time to roar in pain, but he is soon cut short when the Tyrannotitan slams Carch's head into the ground. The Tyrannotitan lifts Carch's head up, only to slam it back down again. The Tyrannotitan repeats this three more times before Carch manages to escape his opponents strong teeth and most of all, powerful bite. Carch stands up then jumps back as the Tyrannotitan snaps at him. The Tyrannotitan is getting. Ready to bite again when Carch runs forwards and slams the side of his head int the Tyrannotitan, turning its body to one side and exposing his side. Carch wastes no time and bites down on the Tyrannotitan's side, then he pulls back with a huge chunk of meat. The Tyrannotitan roars in pain at his wound, which is already pouring blood. Carch swallows his 129 lb chunk of meat he tore off and then bites the Tyrannotitan's side again.
In the surveillance room, Bill and Bob have been watching the fight very closely, both hoping for their dinosaur to win.
Carch has the side of the Tyrannotitan in his large jaws and is shaking his head like mad. The Tyrannotitan roars and tries to turn. When he finally does, Carch stays where he is and rips a huge amount of meat off of the Tyrannotitan. The Tyrannotitan roars and clamps his jaws around Carch's arm. Tyrannotian then bites down with nearly 4 tons of force and crushes the arm like its a toothpick. Blood pours out of the wound and into the mouth of the Tyrannotitan. Carch roars, but the roar son turns into a high pick scream as Tyrannotitan rips the arm off.
The blood pouring out of the place where Carch's arm was made Bob throw up. Bill stepped away from Bob, and the other employees just left the room.
Carch roars and turns at a great speed. He swings his arm and hits Tyrannotitan right in the snout. Then he rips his arm back and leaves a very large gash on the side of Tyrannotitan's snout running all the way to his nose. Tyrannotitan roars and shakes his head, trying to get the blood off his face. Tyrannotitan roars again and charges Carch. Carch, being more agile, easily sidesteps and bits down on Tyrannotitan's side. He then shakes his head around and tears of another large chunk of meat.
"No!" exclaimed Bob as he watches Tyrannotitan being bitten. "Ty, you have to turn and fight!"
"Ty?" Bill asked.
"That's the name I just gave the Tyrannotitan," replied Bob, still watching the fight on the monitor.
Tyrannotitan, Ty, roars and turns away from Carch very quickly, sending his tail slamming into Carch. Carch stumbles but catches himself quickly. He then retaliates and bites the snout of Ty. Ty shakes his head, and barely manages to get his snout out of Carch's jaws. Ty pulls his head back, then swings it and hits Carch's head square on. Carch is little more than dazed by that, and soon attacks. He lowers his head and headbutts Ty with as much power as his legs can make. Ty is pushes back and is sent off balance. Ty gets his balance back just as Carch is about to lunge. Ty makes a split second action and just as Carch lunges, Ty slams into the Carcharadontosaurus and knocks him over. Then Ty bites down on Carch's shin and lifts his head slightly. Carch can feel his bones starting to crack, and then lashes out with his other leg. His leg hits Ty's neck and dig deep into the flesh. Carch rakes his claws across Ty's neck and keeps kicking. Ty gives a very quick twist and breaks Carch's Tibea and fibula nearly in two.
Bill watches in horror as Ty breaks Carch's leg bones, and Bob whoops with joy at that site.
Carch is in extreme pain, but he manages to get up and then lunges for Ty's neck. He catches it, and shakes his head from side to side, leaving very deep gashes in Ty's neck. Ty roars in pain and manages to shake Carch off, then he runs out of the exhibit they where fighting in, and Carch painfully follows. Normally Ty wouldn't be able to outrun Carch, and even though Carch has a broken leg, he is still faster.
Bill and Bob switch from camera to camera watching the chase, not realizing that Ty is leading Carch right towards them. After a while, Carch has almost cached up to Ty, but Bill is watching the monitor, he feels the ground shake. Bob feels it too, and they look at each other with terror in their eyes. Carch slams his side into Ty, and he trips. Bob and Bill just have time to run away from the monitor to escape the falling body of Ty from crushing them. Ty painfully gets up and looks at Bill, then Bob. Carch walks over and looks at the two humans to, hunger showing in his eyes. Both Carch and Ty try to bite Bill, and Carch gets the top half of him while Ty grabs the bottom half.it becomes a tug of war until Bill is split in half, blood spilling everywhere. Bob looks in horror as his friend is eaten, and he is frozen to the spot as Ty looks at him. Carch finishes his part of Bill and slams into Ty, knocking him over and crushing Bob in the process. Ty painfully gets up and shakes the crushed Bob off of his side, then he looks at Carch.
It is obvious that both Carch Ty are tired. Ty and Carch are both breathing hard and bleeding heavily. Both of them have sustained many deep wounds and lost lots of flesh. On Ty, you can see some of his ribs, and you can see part of Carch's skull. Ty roars as loud as he can and charges Carch. Carch leans into the charge and catches Ty's shoulder. Ty roars in pain as his small arm is cut up. Ty pulls back, Carch's teeth making long gashed in the arm. Carch bites down on Ty's neck and rips a huge piece of meat out. Ty copies that move and tears a large amount of meat from Carch's neck. Carch is about to bite Ty's neck, but Ty gets their first, and once again raps his jaws around Carch's neck. Ty bites down on Carch's neck with as much force as he can. His teeth have very strong holds on Carch's neck, and even though Carch shakes around, Ty never lets to. Carch finally is feeling the effect of Ty's powerful bite force of 4 tons. The edges of his vision are starting to blur, and he is losing oxygen. Carch's windpipe is slowly being crushed, and now darkness clouds his vision. Ty is about to give up, his jaw is now very tired, and he himself is starting to see spots and darkness is at the edges of his vision.
Carch can feel the amount of pressure on his neck weaken, and he shakes his head more and more. Ty knows that his exhaustion is too great and that once he lets go of Carch, he will die, if not by Carch then by sheer exhaustion. Ty gives one last powerful bite stronger than anything he has ever done before. Carch feels the sudden surge of power before it hits, and he is scared. Then the bite comes, and crushes Carch's neck. The Carcharodontosaurus died instantly, and he drops to the ground. Ty feels victorious for the few seconds before he passes out and falls to the ground.
Later that day, the workers of Dinosaur Park had Ty back in his exhibit, but the pack of Carcharodontosaurus from Carch's pen had escaped. It seems like nothing was broken, but the employees didn't know just how wrong they where. The Carcharodontosaurus pack had damaged the Oxailaia's pen and enraged it.
The next day, the Oxalaia broke out and rampaged throughout Dinosaur Park, overall destroying it and letting all the dinosaurs out. The workers were quickly overwhelmed and killed. Luckily, there was a fence surrounding the entire park to make sure no dinosaurs get to the outside world, and that fence is never broken.
As for Ty, he lived and fought until old age killed him, and even when he was dying, he remembered his fight with Carch, and once again in his long, dangerous life, he felt victorious.
Pictures Record of Ty
[img]http://2.bp.blogspot.com/_JZcYwQVaoNI/TKNVf5tNqjI/AAAAAAAAAB8/tHhCWLZ3ShA/s400/Tyrannotitian_color.jpg[/img]
Picture Record of Carch
[img]http://images.fineartamerica.com/images-medium-large/carcharodontosaurus-guards-its-kill-mark-hallett.jpg[/img]
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Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexSep-10-2013 6:20 AMGood fight. Bill and Bob didn't seem too responsible.
Jack of all trades. Master of none

DinoFights
MemberCompsognathusSep-10-2013 10:19 AMGreat fight! I wasn't sure who would win. You truly did a great job on the fight.
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Eustreptospondylus
MemberCompsognathusSep-10-2013 2:41 PMGood fight kinda was rooting for the carcharodontosaurus but it was entertaining nonetheless!

Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusSep-10-2013 2:54 PMNice. I was rooting for Tyrannotitan.
Frankly, I would have fired Bill and Bob. They just sit back and provide commentary when deadly theropods break out? Some workers.
"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names."
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Deltadromeus
MemberCompsognathusSep-10-2013 3:00 PMWell they made nice mid fight snacks don't you think? Also, what did you think of my format. Not telling you who will fight until later?
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Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusSep-10-2013 3:04 PMGood. Keep us in suspense, haha
"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names."
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Deltadromeus
MemberCompsognathusSep-10-2013 3:12 PMI'm thinking about doing another one, it might be up in a week or so. Maybe less.
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tyrant963
MemberCompsognathusSep-10-2013 3:41 PMOh very responsible worker they are. they just let 2 large carnivores fight to the death so responsible

Deltadromeus
MemberCompsognathusSep-10-2013 3:51 PMGreat, I'm glad so many people like it. I've decided that I'm doing another one.
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Dynamosaurus Imperiosus/ Raptorexxx 700
MemberCompsognathusSep-10-2013 3:58 PMthat its pretty awesome and accurate! good job

DinoFights
MemberCompsognathusSep-10-2013 6:26 PMCan't wait for the next!
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