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Season 1: Episode 4, The Kill

Deltadromeus

MemberCompsognathusJuly 02, 20131277 Views7 Replies
The Utahraptors are worried at the large sound, then they hear the cry of a lost sauropod. They forget their fear and run to meet this possible meal. As they get close, the Utahraptor find that it is an adult Sonorasaurus. Our male quickly comes up with a plan of attacks and tells it to the other 19 Utahraptors. The male Utahraptor quickly runs to the sauropod and jumps up on to the sauropod's back, then he proceeds to slash at the neck of the sauropod from behind. The other Utahraptor quickly follow the leader and jump onto the sides of the sauropod's side, driving their claws into it. Several other Utahraptor claw at the sauropod's leg. The Sonorasaurus is taking a beating from many Utahraptors, and is losing blood fast, but is not too affected by this. The Sonorasaurus was surprised when the raptors came charging in, but is now over that. It swings its tail, hitting one on the tail, and nearly hitting another. The Sonorasaurus rears up on its hind legs trying to shake our raptor off, but he holds firm. When the Sonorasaurus comes down, it lands on a slow raptor and kills it instantly. The Utahraptor back off, now being more cautious. Our Utahraptor, from his perch on the Sonorasaurus's back, jumps onto the neck of the sauropod, clamping his teeth just behind the head, and holding on to the neck for dear life, even though it is near the ground because of his wieght. The other Utahraptor viciously attack the lowered neck, hoping to cut a major artery or slash open its trachea. Our raptor hops down from the sauropod's neck, but is still holding firm on it, just in a different position with his head right above the neck, and aligned with his body, not turned at an angle. The sauropod swings its tail and hits the mate of our male Utahraptor. Seeing this, he gets mad and lifts his leg up, and kicks it forwards, driving deep into the neck of the Sonorasaurus. Cutting several major arteries and slicing right through the trachea. Killing the sauropod. Our Utahraptor looks at the body of the mate he worked so hard to get, and gives a death cry. Then he goes over to the body of the dead Sonorasaurus and starts eating it, he is quickly joined by the other Utahraptors who take several days to finish the carcass. A couple months later, our male Utahraptor, very lonely at the death of his mate, is eating a dead Iguanadon when he hears something. He turns around and roars. Out from the foliage comes three Dienonychus, coming to steal his kill. They all try to flank him, but he caches one's neck in his jaws and shakes it around. Then he pushes it to the ground, unclamps his jaws, and stomps on the Dienonychus. With only two remaining, he turns around in time to see one jump onto his back and drive its claws into him. He roars and shakes the Dienonychus off. As he is about to kill the Dienonychus, the other one comes and bites his arm. He quickly yanks it out if the Dienonychus's mouth, causing even more damage. Our Utahraptor uses his other arm to slash at his Dienonychus opponent, driving his long claws into its neck, and it punchers the trachea, making the Dienonychus fall and start gasping for breath. The last Dienonychus is now up and goes for the Utahraptor's throat, but he slams his body into the charging Dienonychus, causing the smaller raptor to stumble back. The Utahraptor gets in close to the Dienonychus, and kicks his leg downwards through the leg of his opponent. This creates a long gash in the leg bone of Dienonychus and severs major tendons, causing him to fall as well and bleed to death. After making sure they are dead, he proceeds to eat the carcasses of the Dienonychus. He did not, however, make it out of the fight unscathed. He took quite a lot of damage, but he will recover.

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Deltadromeus
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As always, I'd love to hear your opinion, thanks =)

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Pretty good. He lost another important thing in his life I see. A mob of 20 Utharaptors seems unlikely, but like my Spinosaurus vs Aegyptosaurus fight, you need to add some additional creativity here and there. Not bad.
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When you're fighting a sauropod, and there is already a large number of Utahraptor nearby, and they see that there are more, they could team up to kill a sauropod.

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Possibly. If they did, it would be more like an unorganized mob, rather than a cooperative pack. That's just my opinion though and like I said, every story needs a little added creativity.
"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names." ―Alpha-98
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As usual, great work :)
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Rex fan, not criticizing, but the Utahraptor proved he was the best, and when you do that, people normally follow you. Utahraptor had an early, dormant pact hunting part of the brain, Utahraptor most likely just never used it. Or at least I think they did.

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Great story, even you could put names to the characters (such as red dragon for example :p)

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