FBR Jurassic Park 3 Alternate Ending

This is the side FBR written and edited by Deltadromeus. I've been given the all clear to put it up by Paden, and I hope you enjoy it. This is the alternate ending for Jurassic Park 3, and really how it should have ended. I hope that this will give you more patience for FBR 4 (even though I'm thinking about sending some raptors after Paden if he doesn't get FBR 4 up really soon). Well, you may as well know about the competitors in the blue corner we have.... Spinosaurus! [img]http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120510122930/jurassicpark/images/3/38/Jurassic-park-3-spinosaurus.png[/img] Spino is one of the baddest animals on the island. Though he mostly eats fish, anything that gets too close is going to be killed. He has killed a T. rex and two Yangchuanosaurus, all at different times of course. There is only one on Isla Sorna and none on Nublar. It quickly killed the Baryonyx that was bred with it and even as a young dinosaurs broke out and killed many people. It has a large sail and an overall bad temper. One thing to know is that it is sixty feet long, but refuses to be weighed and its full bite has never been learned, but we think that it could be four tons or more. And on the red corner... Velociraptor! [img]http://images4.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20130315233016/deadliestfiction/images/6/67/Two_velociraptors_.jpg[/img] They are the second smartest dinosaurs in Jurassic Park, and only are surpassed by Troodon. It is believed that the "Big One" was as smart as the Sorna Troodons, who aren't as smart as the ones on Nublar. They have toe claws 6 inches long, and hand claws 2 inches. They have great depth perception, and have great vision even while running. If let out into a field, they could run up to 55 mph, and will play games of tag just to condition their legs. The males are up to 13 feet long and 7 feet tall, while the females are 12 feet long and 6.5 feet tall. Despite the size difference, the females lead the pack and are much more aggressive. What else is there. Hmmmm, don't tell me. Oh right, Fight! "Give, me, the, eggs" says Amanda Kirby under her breath. Dr. Grants takes the raptor eggs out of the bag and hands them to Amanda. Amanda pushes the eggs towards the alpha female raptor. Dr. Grant sees the Velociraptor resonating chamber that was in Billy's bag and gets an idea. Dr. Grant takes the resonating chamber out of the bag and is about to blow through it when a loud roar pierces the air. Dr. Grant recognizes the roar immediately. So does Eric, Amanda, Paul, And Billy. It is the Spinosaurus. The raptors hear it too, and are about to grab the eggs and run when the Spinosaurus bursts into the clearing. The humans and raptors scatter, leaving the eggs behind. The Spinosaurus unknowingly steps on the eggs, and the retreating alpha female sees this. Those were her eggs, and all the fury that a mother can ever have when her child is killed comes to her in double. The alpha raptor screams the attack call. The rest of the pack is momentarily confused. They are thinking, "Hello, have you lost your mind. That is a Spinosaurus. A Spinosaurus means death!" Despite this, they are loyal, and charge into battle. Now it time for the Spinosaurus to be confused. "Why are these little things attacking me?" it is thinking, but its mind then says,"don't care, just kill." The raptors run at the Spinosaurus. One of the males jumps onto its side, then another, then another. Female raptors are attacking the Spino's side, and soon, all but one raptor is on the Spinosaurus's side, all driving their claws into it. The humans have run to one side and are watching the fight from behind a tree. "Wow." Says Dr. Grant," Their attacks are so coordinated." "Why are they attacking the Spino?" Asked Billy. "Didn't you see? The Spinosaurus stepped on the raptor eggs." Eric replied. "Why isn't the alpha attacking? She is the one that was going to take the eggs," wondered Amanda. The alpha female wasn't attacking the Spinosaurus, just walking around it as her pack sank their claws into its side. "She's planning," says Dr. Grant. The Spinosaurs finally shakes a raptor off, and then, before it can get up, the Spino brings his arm down on the raptor like a hammer. The blow instantly kills it. This is what the alpha female was looking for. She runs over and hacks at the face of the Spinosaurus while it is low enough for her to jump to. Her claws rake across one of its eye, gouging it out. The claws also slash its nose, taking out smell on that side as well as sight. The Spinosaurus roars and shakes his head, hoping that if he gets the blood of of his eye, he will be able to see. No such luck. The Spinosaurus gives a violant shake of his body and sends another raptor falling off. The Spinosaurus turns to where it is and is about to bite down on it when the alpha female jumps onto the Spino's neck, sinking her teeth and claws deep into its neck. The alpha female grabs locks her jaws on the top of the Spino's neck, and then starts to wildly slash at its neck, leaving deeper and deeper gouges. The alpha female is now letting her anger out. She is ripping through flesh. Digging deeper and deeper, the neck of the Spinosaurus is becoming very bloody. The Spino roars in pain and tries to shake the alpha raptor off. He manages to shake a Velociraptor off his side, but it quickly jumps back on. As does the raptor he shook off and was about to bite. Finally, the alpha female lets go. The Spinosaurus tries to bite the alpha, but she is too quick and dodges the attack. The Spino still has five raptors on his side, and he doesn't like it. The Spinosaurus sakes until two more raptors are shaken off. The Spinosaurus steps on one, and kills it. The other is grabbed by the Spinosaurus's jaws, and thrown far. The alpha female attacks again. She jumps higher than the rest of the raptors and drives her claws into the sail of the Spinosaurus. She then starts shredding the sail. Blood comes pouring out as she rips the thin area of flesh and skin apart. The Spinosaurus gives another violant shake and the alpha is thrown off. The remaining raptors jump off while they can, and circle to the other side of the Spinosaueus. The Spino catches one in his claws, using his fishing technique. That raptor is quickly killed. The other two raptors jump onto the side of the Spino and starts hacking away at it, angry at the death of their pack mates. The alpha gets up and jumps onto the shoulder region of the Spinosaurus. She drives her claws into the flesh, and starts tearing out chunks of meat with her mouth. The Spinosaurus tries to shake her off, but the alpha female holds firm, determined,to kill the Spino for crushing her eggs. Finally, the Spino's arm goes limp. A major tendon has been severed, and the arm is now practically useless. The Spinosaurus tries to shake the raptors off. The alpha female jumps down at the last second, but the other two raptors are thrown off. The Spinosaurus swings his head, and hits one of the raptors as it gets up. The blow sends it flying across the battlefield, and the impact kills it. Only the alpha male and female raptors are left standing. The male runs in, and as the Spino tries to bite it, he moves to one side. The Spino sees the raptor moving for his bad arm, and before it can think, its body is moving. The Spinosaurus swings his arm and hits the male raptor hard. The combined momentum of body and arm we As enough to kill him almost instantly. The flying body lands at the feet of Amanda, who was watching the battle in silence with the rest of the survivors. She gives a little shriek, giving away their position. The Spinosaurus turns its head to the new noise, but the alpha female raptor, enraged at the death of her pack, kids, and mate goes into a blind rage and attacks the Spinosaurus. She runs in and jumps onto its side, sinking her teeth and claws deep into it. The Spinosaurus roars and transfers his attention back to the raptor. The Spino shakes, and manages to throw the raptor off. As she gets up, the Spinosaurus closes in on her. The Spinosaurus swings his good arm, but the female raptor dodges it. The Spinosaurus swung his body when he tries to hit the female raptor, and its bad other arm comes swinging around at great speed. It hits the unsuspecting raptor, who is sent flying into a tree and breaking many bones. The Spinosaurus goes over to the injured Velociraptor. He then gets his jaws around her, s d bites down, but not hard enough to kill her. He then swings his head around, and the momentum of the raptor makes it slide around in the Spino's jaws, its teeth leaving long streaks of ripped flesh. Finally, the Spinosaurus lets the poor raptor fall to the ground, still alive. While this was happening, the humans had heard a voice from a distance. It said, "Dr. Grant? Dr. Allen Grant. The remaining humans run out to the voice screaming, "That's a very bad idea!!" Then, out from the water, the American Navy comes. Eric is about to say something to Dr Grant, when a roar comes out from the forest where the Spinosaurus was. It had heard the calls too. The little human party looks at each other, and start sprinting off to the Navy cars. Amanda stumbles and falls, but Eric and Paul pull her up and keep running. By the time they had reached the Navy, the Spinosaurus was on the beach. When the leader of the section of Navy sees the Spinosaurus, looking like hell with all its blood and tattered sail, The commander of the Navy starts to say, "Holy-,"but is interrupted by Dr Grant when he says, "We need to go now." The Spinosaurus has other plans. It charges into the ranks of Navy soldiers. It leans down and snatches up a person and eats it in one bite. The commander yells to his troops, "Fire at will!" Loads of bullets are shot into the Spinosaurus, but its layer of scales and very dense muscle protects it, or at least slows down most bullets. One bullet, however, passes the skin, the muscle, and hits a rib, breaking it. The Spinosaurus, in excruciating pain from all the bullets, feels that one shot more than the rest. Though its brain is small, it doesn't have much trouble figuring out where the bullet came from. It was from the commander. The Spinosaurus closes the distance quickly and hits the commander with a blow from his good arm. Sending him flying into the water, where his corps is eaten by a Shonisaurus, cloned by Ingen. The Spinosaurus walks off with his line of human casualties trailing behind him. He makes it to one of the underwater tank like things and slams his good arm into it. Denting some of the metal. He then puts his foot on top of it, and in one sudden jump, puts all his weigh on the foot, crushing the vehicle. With the commander dead, Dr. Grant yells, "Stop! Cease Fire!" The Navy people are unsure of what to do. Listen to Dr. Grant, a high honor person who is being rescued, or their dead officer. The second in command comes over to Dr. Grant and says to him, "With all due respect sir, what the hell do you think you're doing?" Dr. Grant replies, "It's is just another animal. A very endangered animal. We shouldn't kill it. It would be like bombing the last of the Java rhinoceros. What we need to do is retreat." The second in command officer looks at Dr. Grant, and then yells, "Retreat!" to the fighting Navy. They pull back into the water very quickly, but the Spinosaurus gets one more person in his jaws. While all this was happening, the alpha female raptor was unconscious, dreaming. She dreamed that se was in a land filled with meat, foliage, the unarmed human here and there, and all the raptors that died by the Spinosaurus were here too. So where her eggs, but as she got closer to them, they got farther than she got closer. Then everything started to move away. She was back awake now, and she was thinking to herself. She was thinking, "I've failed. My pack is killed, two of my eggs are killed, and I'm in no condition to help my other eggs. If I dead right now, and go to that paradise in my dreams, it won't matter." When the Spinosaurus had hit her, it had not only broken her physically , but also mentally. Her maternal instinct is telling her that she failed. That it is just time to die. She is in absolute agony, but right now, is oblivious to the pain. She is talking to herself in a little protective bubble, nothing from the outside world can get in. Then something does get through the bubble. A picture. A picture of the Spinosaurus stepping on her eggs. Then another picture. Of the Spinosaurus killing her pack. Then her mate. All the pain of this hits her harder than any physical pain ever could. That pain, becomes anger. More anger than can be held in a body of a Velociraptor. The Velociraptor looks at the area where her eggs were, and sees the crushed developing Velociraptor. Her anger doubles, and then triples. She screams as louder than she has ever screamed before. So loud that in the copper, Dr. Grant, Eric, Amanda, and Paul can all hear it. So loud that it even scares the Spinosaurus. The Velociraptor runs at top speed towards the Spinosaurus. She makes it to the Spinosaurus, who has been severely weakened by the bullets. The Spinosaurus tries to its her, but the raptor dodges. After dodging, she gives a quick hack at the Spinosaurus's neck with one arm. The Spinosaurus isn't going to give her the pleasure of showing her it hurt. He swings his body, but the raptor dodges both the good and bad arm. The Spinosaurus tries to kick her, but the angry mother Velociraptor moves out of the way. The Velociraptor jumps onto the section of neck where she was attacking before. She sinks her teeth and claws into the Spinosaurus. The Spinosaurus lets out a defaning roar, but the raptor still holds strong. The Spinosaurus is snapping his jaws and turning his head, trying to grab the tail of the raptor with his jaws. He snaps his jaws closed, and finds the tail of the alpha female Velociraptor in his mouth. The Spinosaurus tries to pull the Velociraptor off, and the raptor can feel herself losing her grip. As she is abut to be pulled off and into the jaws of the Spinosaurus, she gives one last kick with all her might. It goes right through flesh, and her big toe claw sinks into the spinal cord of the Spinosaurus. The Spino can feel his spinal cord being severed, then he feels a different pain. The Velociraptor brought her toe claws down on the Spinosaurus's jugular, and has made a huge gash in it. The Spinosaurus falls to the ground, letting go of the Velociraptor, who falls with him. The Spino is dead, but miraculously, the Velociraptor survived the fall. Most of her bones are broken, and all she can do is lay there, waiting to recover. Epilogue: A family of T. rex are walking along the beach. There are the parents, and a young T. rex, who has grown quite a bit scince he was in San Diego. They look at the Spinosaurus carcass, and then the still living raptor. They piece together a good explanation, thinking the raptor killed the Spino. Out of respect for the raptor, the family of Tyrannosaurs stick around the carcass and protect the healing raptor. They eat some of the Spinosaurus, but they leave the best parts for the mother raptor. When she finally wakes up, and is feeling better, she sees a young T. rex standing over her. She gives a quick yelp, and another squeak when the T. rex brings her food. In the raptor world, that is a saying, "lets be friends." She looks over to the rest of the T. rex family. They just look at her, expectantly. She looks at the meat again, and looks up at the adult T. rex. They give a little nod like they are training a child to eat. She takes a bite, and is surprised to find that Spinosaurus tastes like crocodile. She had had crocodile once before, and she liked it. She looks up at young T. rex, who is obviously happy. When the Velociraptor can walk, and the Spinosaurus carcass is gone, bullets spit out, the T. rex family starts to move on. As the Velociraptor stays near the shore, the young T. rex looks back at her and call her over. The Velociraptor is confused. Is the T. rex saying that she has been accepted into their family? Then the mother T. rex goes over to where she is and nudges her in the direction the T. rex family is going. The nudge knocks the light Velociraptor over, but she knows it was a friendly "were going that way, you don't want to be left behind" nudge. The female Velociraptor is part of the pack of T. rex and helps on their hunts. The Velociraptor is happy with herself, and her current life. A different raptor pack has taken the territory of the Velociraptor living with the T. rex. They take care of the eggs there, and soon, the pack is full of baby Velociraptors. All descendants of the pack that fought a Spinosaurus. Winner.... Velociraptor!! [img]http://i1.ytimg.com/vi/83N2iDplJZo/hqdefault.jpg[/img] This was the alternate ending, I hope you like it. The Jurassic Park Velociraptors where the deadliest dinosaurs to ever kill someone, having killed more people than T. rex, Spinosaurus, and Troodon combined.