Comments (Page 786)

Cool dinosaur. Comical looking or not, I'd rather not mess with it.

Thanks guys. I didn't plan on doing more originally, but maybe we all could. I think I might write a Mosasaurus vs Basilosaurus fight sometime. Everyone else, feel free to write some aquatic fights. 

(Thanks for your help MrHappy. Appreciate it)

I totally understand. But thanks so much! I really appreciate the kind words!

Very nice, Well done.

Unfortunately, The deadline has passed, And this entry can't be tallied.

I think you did an excellent Job, Truly well done. 

But, I'm sure you can make the next one, I'll add a longer date on to it.

Regards

-Paden

Thanks! I was trying to do it the best I could. Appreciate it!

Damn that was good. It may have broken the one day rule, but damn that was good.

I was going to try but I didn't do it...

Thanks everyone! It will be coming soon!

Thanks Lone! Appreciate the kind words!

Yeah, it is difficult to nail an animals shading. Especially a Dinosaur. Esp. a Tyrannosaurus. Its definitely hard.

dibs on park biologist!

Crap! I was going to post today. Oh well, I'll post it anyway. You can decide if you want to count it in.

Dibs on the Head Keeper. FYI

They'll most likely be great. You might also wanna check out my battles on my site.

Park staff, eh? DIBS ON PARK MANAGER!

Looking forward to the results, and the next one. JW staff you say? I call dibs on game warden.

Thank God it's not Steve Carell...

@Something Real

Sorry about that, I intended to post this at midnight, But... I didn't feel like staying up until then.

I'll put better Deadlines on the next one *Wink*

-Paden

never gunna happen. not in the first movie.

the most they'll get i think is a cameo or a reference. At the end of the day it would be good if they did get a mention. But i have a feeling neither will.

New characters is good anyway, as long as its explained why they are there, kinda contradicting the sentence before but maybe that could be where a connection is revealed to a previous character. Trevorrow is clearly using bits from the original as the pics leaked show old cars etc, so i cant see why their wouldnt be any character connection at all! well i hope there is .

As for the film didnt they say its going to be like a lord of the rings style storytelling in parts! where the film ends on a cliff hanger and you wait for the next part a year later? I swear iv heard or read that somewhere. Im behind that actually, it allows stories to be more in depth. Id quite happily watch Jurassic World for 9 hours in a marathon!!!!!!

just my ideas obv ur entitled to agree or not :) all the best let me know what you think.

Yeah, we definitely should more of these. And everyone's was incredible. 

i'd like to say it now, all of you who entered are story...they were pretty damn good. I look forward to stories like this in the future 

thanks guys!

Can't to see who wins.

Thanks John. I'll try to do more like this.

dam i just want jeff and Sam :(

Excellent work Primal!

I love to see line art done by talented artists like yourself and DinoSteve.

ps I know and appreciate the amount of time and effort it takes too! ;) 

Well done. Hope to see more like this soon.

Nice work. The approach was a good choice.

It just keeps getting better. Thank you and well done.

Excellent. It was fun and believable.

Being believable as part of the original franchise is something rare and to be commended. You have done it so excellent job and I hope to see more like this.

That was really good. Enough emotion and personality to give charater without anthropomorphizing, giving a sence of real. Hope to see more like this down the road.

I'm really starting to like this cast. We are getting some fresh new characters. I really hope thier wardrobes are as good as Alan, Ellie, Ian, Grandpa, Tim, Lex, Muldoon ex... If you look at the original character wardrobes they all wore a different color, and it just made the characters pop, and very reconizable. 

There was a total of: Five Entries. 

I must say, Some of the stories, Were kinda sad/dark. But did get to the point, Of how The animals, In containment, Would be Depressed, and Bored. 

I think the next challange, will be... Something about you being the staff in JW... 

:)

looking forward to the results

Great chapter. Thats all to say. Fantastic. :D