Tyrant king
MemberCompsognathusAug-08-2014 7:34 AMA oxalia is hunting for hadrasaurids he has his babies with him and he's teaching them how to hunt.but all of a sudden the herd stampedes. Then the oxalia is confused sat to why this is happening. the answer comes in the form of tarbosaurus and he is unusually aggressive and charges .... But he is 50 meters away and the oxalia rears up and cocks his hand back, ready to swipe. All is silent then a hadrasaurid runs between them and the tarbo collilides with it but he continues running but the oxalia smacks the tarbo upside the head and tarbo roars in pain as blood pours from the wound then attacks, biting down on oxalias snout but he slashes as much as he can until he lets go and when he does he quickly retaliates and rams into the oxalia making him fall overand he tries to bite the downed spinosaurid's neck but he kicks out at the tarbo and he now has three huge gashes on his side , but he sees something moving in the bush. It is the babies!!!!!! And he charges over but oxalia bites his ankle giving the babies time to escape but tarbo steps on his head in then he races after them and easily catches up and bites down on one. The mist horrifing thing a parent can ever hear. The squealing then crunching of the baby thaw tarbo gets up and charges and leaps on the tarbos side and begins slashing away but the tarbo quickly falls over and the oxalia stomps on his head androars in victory !!!!!!!!
WINNES!!!!!!OXALIA!!
Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusAug-08-2014 8:06 AMI was rooting for Tarbosaurus, oh well.
For future reference, refer to past fights and use them as a base for yours. They'll give you a good idea as how long to make them, what kind of format to use, etc.
Tyrant king
MemberCompsognathusAug-08-2014 8:11 AMOk thanks and i saw whole bunch of tarbo vs oxalia fights and tarbo wins so I wanted to change it up
Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusAug-08-2014 8:12 AMUnderstandable :)
Hiphopananomus
MemberCompsognathusAug-08-2014 8:15 AMI was rooting for Tarbo, but not bad.
I recomend you take Rex Fans advice, as he is one the best writers on the forum.
"Somewhere on this island is the greatest predator that ever lived. Second greatest predator must take him down."Roland Tembo"
"Jurassic park: The Lost World"
Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusAug-08-2014 8:19 AMAw, thanks, haha
Carnosaur
MemberCompsognathusAug-08-2014 8:19 AMGood job with this. I recommend reading through it once you're through with writing it. If it takes a little bit to read, you can guarantee it's gonna be a good read for your fellow sci-fi members! That's what i do at least..Looking forward to the next
Nature doesn't deceive us; it is we who deceive ourselves.
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexAug-08-2014 8:23 AMNice fight, was rooting for Tarbo though.
Also, take Rex Fan and Carno's advice. They're probably the best writers on these forums that are still here (DinoFights was the best and that won't change).
Jack of all trades. Master of none
Silver_Falcon
MemberCompsognathusAug-08-2014 8:24 AMEase off on the exclamation marks. I understand what you're trying to do with them, but just one will suffice. Also commas, <-that thing. They can save lives.
Good fight though, pleasantly surprised by the victor.
Here, have a waffle (-'.')-#
Tyrant king
MemberCompsognathusAug-08-2014 8:26 AMWhen I'm on a computer it will be MUCH better I promise it will have size estimations strength weakness and the personality if the particular individual and also have pictures of the combatants
Carnosaur
MemberCompsognathusAug-08-2014 8:27 AMDinoFights' blows ours out of the water, there's no question in that....actually, i'll put one up today i think...will start working on it now
Nature doesn't deceive us; it is we who deceive ourselves.
Hiphopananomus
MemberCompsognathusAug-08-2014 8:28 AMYeah, I also recomend you read MrHappys and Carnos fights as well, all their fights are also among the best on the forums!
"Somewhere on this island is the greatest predator that ever lived. Second greatest predator must take him down."Roland Tembo"
"Jurassic park: The Lost World"
Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusAug-08-2014 8:34 AMI'll be interested to see them.
Carnosaur
MemberCompsognathusAug-08-2014 8:35 AMyou have potential! if you have any questions feel free to PM one of us writers :)
Nature doesn't deceive us; it is we who deceive ourselves.
FACT DUDE
MemberCompsognathusAug-08-2014 10:03 AMSome better punctuation would help, but decent fight though
FACT DUDE
MemberCompsognathusAug-08-2014 10:06 AMNo prob dude
Allotitan
MemberCompsognathusAug-08-2014 11:03 AMGood fight rooting for Tarbo though.
Take everyone's advice it really helps. Proof is from my first dinosaur fight to my latest one. Which about 3 fights ;) but you can really see the difference the advice makes.
I always hoped to be just as good as DinoFights too. :) He really is the master.
When life gives you lemons, don't make lemonade. Tell life I don't want you're damn lemons, and then squeeze them into life's eyes!
Carnosaur
MemberCompsognathusAug-08-2014 11:23 AMClick that link^ he's a legend here..no longer active, but his fights blow mine out of the water.
Nature doesn't deceive us; it is we who deceive ourselves.
FACT DUDE
MemberCompsognathusAug-08-2014 11:35 AMHes not? I liked that guy
Carnosaur
MemberCompsognathusAug-08-2014 11:42 AMhe hasn't posted in almost a year i think..he always had somethin pretty neat to say, his fights were pretty cool too...hopefully he comes back some day
Nature doesn't deceive us; it is we who deceive ourselves.
FACT DUDE
MemberCompsognathusAug-08-2014 11:57 AMYouve not been here quite a year yet have you? So i dont think its been quite a year yet, getting close, but not quite
Tyrant king
MemberCompsognathusAug-08-2014 11:58 AMive been hear less then a day and i just made a fight but it got DELETED!!!!!!!!!!
Carnosaur
MemberCompsognathusAug-08-2014 12:23 PMyeah, i think i came here no too long after he left..maybe..
@predator x- which fight?
Nature doesn't deceive us; it is we who deceive ourselves.
Tyrant king
MemberCompsognathusAug-08-2014 12:32 PMi just made a lynthorax vs tetraphoneus but i think it got deleted
Carnosaur
MemberCompsognathusAug-08-2014 12:39 PMah nah, it goes through a screening process as to avoid spam on our website. One of the staff will approve it soon enough
Nature doesn't deceive us; it is we who deceive ourselves.