Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-14-2014 1:55 PMSorry this took a while, it took me about an hour to write because I wanted to make it cool, nice, detailed, did some research on Gigantosaurs and T-Rex's. Please when you comment try to not prove anything wrong, please just enjoy.
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Chapter 4
Captain Paden K. gave a little laugh as saw Storm run away from the battlefield. He ran away, and the second he ran out of the field, he evaporated. That was one of the rules, though Captain K.If you tried to exit the battlefield you would be eliminated, and evaporate into a million particles. Storm had forfeited, and he was officially eliminated from the fight, The Fight.
You see, nobody really knew or had even thought about it, but amongst all the fighting, Cpt K. had been watching every single move of each fight. After all, he simply had the best of the best. He could have easily killed Ozzy and Scarface when they passed him, but he was curious to see the fighting. He didn’t want to give the audience, or whoever was watching this, a boring show. He wanted to have it so that the last two contenders, besides him, would fight to the death, and when the winner of that fight had been standing, he would want to shoot it down.
Boy that would be cool. And now here he was. He watched from a distance as Rexy and Scarface were roaring at each other. They were preparing a fight, The Ultimate Showdown.
Cpt K. let out a laugh. He imagined the thought of the dinosaur who won, roaring a triumphant roar, roaring in victory, and then him shooting him down.
“This is going to be fun…’ Said Cpt. K. “I guess I’m just going to stand here and let things just flow, for a bit. I’ll try to give the winner a chance to declare their victory.
So he stopped thinking and talking, and set his eyes on the fight, the spectacle of this whole contest.
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Rexy was now just some yards away from Scarface. They looked at each other eyes. Only one dinosaur was going to walk out of this, only one was going to walk out of the clearing alive, and eat Cpt K.
Rexy and Scarface were pretty much the same size and weight. The only problem was that Rexy had a bite force of 7 tons, while Scarface had a bite force of 2 tons. Giganotosaurus had faced a T-Rex before, and he knew he had to be careful on not letting Rexy bite him.
Rexy charged, but Scarface sidestepped. Rexy missed and stopped, but Scarface already charged and bit Rexy form the back as hard as he could. Rexy let out a scream in pain. Rexy wriggled his way out of Scarface’s bite, and Rexy went to bite Scarface’s neck. Rexy was ready to crack Scarface’s neck bone, but Scarface wiggled his neck out of Rexy’s bite and took a few steps back. He looked again into the eyes of Rexy. Scarface then charged at Rexy, and Scarface bite Rexy’s neck, putting as much force he could do with his own bite force. Rexy felt the pain, but he had experienced worse before. Rexy, being just a little bit heavier, pushed Scarface to the side and rammed him against a tree. Scarface release his grip and roared in anguish.
Then, as if from nowhere, the whole clearing was surrounded in a ring of fire. They sky turned black, with red clouds. Around the ring of fire came out a fence, covered in spikes.
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Cpt. PK gave out a little laugh. Whoever the hell was controlling this simulation decided to add some “fire and spice” into it. He had to admit it looked pretty awesome. He jumped down from the tree he was on, and landed on the ground. He quickly ran about 3 yards away from the fire and climbed a tree that was safely away from the fire. He sat on a branch and watched from where he was.
This was gonna be GOOD.
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Rexy and Scarface roared at each other, after a couple of minutes was sent in confusion after the fence and the fire came. They got their eyes adjusted from daytime to nighttime. They roared again, as they prepared for round 2.
Then, after a couple of seconds, Scarface and Rexy charged at each other.
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Please comment!!!
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Huge-Ben
MemberTriceratopsJul-14-2014 2:01 PMNice raptor. Very good story there man. :)
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Huge-Ben
MemberTriceratopsJul-14-2014 2:02 PMSo when do you think the full battle between the two will be done?
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Huge-Ben
MemberTriceratopsJul-14-2014 2:04 PMTake your time with it, and put a lot of thought into it, usually makes for a better story. :)
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Huge-Ben
MemberTriceratopsJul-14-2014 2:06 PMNeed assistance i could help out as i myself am developing the story to my godzilla graphic novel i am working my butt off of on. :)
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Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-14-2014 2:08 PMIt's okay! I usually do fights and stories by my own, excdept for spoof posts. I hope you do good on that. The final chapter will be my 2000th posts, so I am afraid this will be my last comment responding to you because I wnat to save my last 15 posts responding to other people and few other discussions.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Huge-Ben
MemberTriceratopsJul-14-2014 2:09 PMThe sooner the better. XD
Nah it's fine i understand raptor. :)
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Hiphopananomus
MemberCompsognathusJul-14-2014 2:10 PMNice, GO Scarface!!
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MemberCompsognathusJul-14-2014 2:29 PMgreat chapter raptor, looks like the Finally will be AWSOME, cpt.K seems to be a cheater :)
x_paden_x
MemberCompsognathusJul-14-2014 2:35 PMAwesone.
I enjoyed this a lot.
There may be a moving up in the next FBR Update...
Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-14-2014 2:35 PMI know Catzilla! Trust me the finale will be epic!!! And Paden isn't cheating!!!
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-14-2014 2:37 PMGlad to know that you enjoyed this Paden! I knew you would! Hope FBR goes fine, still.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexJul-14-2014 2:57 PMNice job. I've got a feeling Capt. k is going to win.
The whole "particle" thing seems very, game like. Like a simulation. You die, but you don't actually die. That type of deal. I think if you said it was like that, people might have been a little more open to putting characters in here. That's How I see it at least.
Looking forward Paden.
Jack of all trades. Master of none
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-14-2014 2:59 PMWell it is a simulation. Mind you, these things still feel pain. These characters all died gracefully, and I tried to make them have a drmatic death, not graceful, just dramatic. Paden has a very good chance.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Spinosaurus Rex
MemberCompsognathusJul-14-2014 3:08 PMI like this one a lot, cant wait to see what the last chapter has to offer.
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-14-2014 3:13 PMYou will see hopefully tomorrow!!! When I get the chance I will mak eas epic as possible.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Gojira2K
MemberCompsognathusJul-14-2014 4:17 PMGreat job. Really great.
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Sci-Fi King25
MemberAllosaurusJul-14-2014 4:47 PMExcellent. My money's on Rexy.
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MemberCompsognathusJul-15-2014 7:26 AMCan't wait for the next one. I'm rooting for Rexy.
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