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MemberCompsognathusJul-08-2014 7:36 PMTeaser 2?
Whats Jurassic Apoclypse?
Who's this bloke posting awesome stuff?
That can all be answered through PM. As for the First Teaser, It should be posted on my Scified site. Just go to my Profile and Scroll down to that "My Sites" Space. Please Leave comments and Suggestions, Don't forget to follow the site for some FBR stuff...
This Series should come out some time in July or August... (Shit, This summers gone by fast...)
Today... I've got you a poster, and a Continuation of the Last teaser.
First the poster.
*Insert Poster here*
Now, I plan to have this story, Be a horror story. Not like Frickin', Paranormal activity, But this man surviving against These man made Monsters.
Now, To the teaser.
In a broken down Concrete Shed with a Tin roof, Somewhere on an Abandoned Island of Isla Nublar, Something stirred. The Shed stood alone, Camoflauged with bits of peeling paint. The Tin roof was once Blue, Bits of blue remained... But, Very little. The blue had been replaced with a Red Rust.
A forest Green Combat helmet rocked on the floor, thrown aside after hours of Constant running.
Slowly, The figure sits up.
"God damn, I need to exercise more..." The Man says. His Green Combat Uniform is soaked with blood in several Different Places.
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I looked up at the roof of the Shed. It looked worn down, And dented. Sitting up, A fully took in the shed. It was rather big. About 5 Metres by 3 Metres. In the corner there was what looked like a blood splatter. Bits of Machinery, A few pumps, And some Equipment.
I groaned as I got to my Feet. I was sore All over. I was Bruised and cut in so many places. I grabbed my Bag from the corner, And wrapped all of the severe wounds. As I cleaned, I noticed my Badge that Read "Gen. Ops" With a logo of a Dinosaur roaring was soaked with mud. I sighed and peeled it off, Stuffing it into my breast pocket.
I checked my M-16, It was covered with mud dirt and blood. Instintictly, I cleaned it off, And checked the Firing mechanism.
I had 1 spare clip left, I had wasted the Rest of them while Running away... I had managed to loose my Custom Colt pistol some where during the night. I cursed for my mistake. What bothered me is I had put it in it's holster the night before.
Raising my Assault rifle, I slowly opened the door.
The shed was a small clearing, A path, Presumably a once Gravel road, led to it. I let out a sigh of relief and shut the door. Hearing it fall off its hinges, I spun around and Looked at it.
The door had gone through hell throughout the night. It was shreaded by Claws, There was dents everywhere, and What looked like Blood. The small clearing was Trampled with Three toed tracks, Similar to that of a bird.
Instantly I recognized them as Dinosaur tracks, But in all of my years, I'd never seen anything like them before. I squated beside one. Instantly I Estimated the animal was Above ten tonnes, Definatley Carnivorus.
I heard a Clicking coming from the surrounding bushes. It was an Organic clicking. It was followed by a hiss.
"Shit shit shit shit shit shit," I said, I turned and sprinted down the gravel road. My Combat boots landing Feet apart from eachother. I was in a dead sprint for what felt like two hours.
I finally stopped when I noticed I was lost.
I swore aloud. This was the last thing I needed. I needed rest from the Long sprint I just went through. Tired, I slumped to the ground. As I laid there in a Crumple on the Gravel road. I noticed a large white Building off in the distance... I remembered that from when I had finally convinced my Family to go here, And from the Mission breifing.
It was the Visitor centre.
I picked myself up, on my hands and knees. However, As i picked myself up, I heard the crunching of gravel.
I spun around to meet the face of a masked Assaliant, And the butt of his gun.
Then, I was shrouded in darkness, As I rolled down the hill. As I dipped out of consciousness, All I remembered, Was a loud thumping. And a terrible roar.
Dunn Dunn Dunn...
*Note, I am redoing the Poster for this. However, the Banner will remain.*
Be sure to check out my Scified site for the First Teaser.
Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way
JRR
MemberCompsognathusJul-08-2014 7:45 PMwow paden this is great, i also liked the first teaser
Primal King
MemberCompsognathusJul-08-2014 7:47 PMVery nice. Love the motto: "If you can't see it... It's already too late." Mind if I use it for my sig? I'll give you credit of course.
"If you can't see it... It's already too late."
-Jurassic Apocalypse (by Paden)
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MemberCompsognathusJul-08-2014 7:50 PM@catzilla
Thanks! I never intended to Have a second teaser, The First tease wasn't even supposed to be the back bone for it... But It just kinda happened.
@Primal King
Go right ahead! It'd be the first Time Any of my work Had ever been used as a persons Sig. *Sighes*
I live a life, I promise.
Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way
JRR
MemberCompsognathusJul-08-2014 7:54 PMim surprised no one has ever made a story with all the regulars as protagonist's and antagonist's
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MemberCompsognathusJul-08-2014 8:01 PM@Catzilla
When I first started this, That was the Intention.
Now, I'll reveal a little bit about it, IN the first teaser, Mostly the back story, I mention my Squad is in Costa rica. Now, The squad I was with Nublar 1, Is mostly killed off, My squad has to come as search for survivours.
They find much more However.
Theres a Lot I've done on this forum, That was the Beggining of something.
Every single story on here, one way or another, Can trace their stories Origins, To FBR. Prior to when I came along, There was no Written Fights, Using actual science. But a Bunch of fan boys screaming at eachoter of the internet.
My first FBR Got Abovea 250 Comments. Only around 15 Of them were Positive.
Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way
JRR
MemberCompsognathusJul-08-2014 8:10 PMcan you give me a link to FBR 1 plese
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-08-2014 8:11 PMNice teaser, but I find it funny that the DWC was about the unseen beauty of dinosaurs and now they are man made MONSTERS... Hehe heh...
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
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MemberCompsognathusJul-08-2014 8:18 PM@Catzilla
Uh...
That requires A fair bit of explaining, PM me and I'll share the link with you (Can't find it at the moment)
@Raptor 401
Never noticed the Connection there 401... Good job.
Also, I've decided your Idea is going to be the next one, As I've somehow Developed an Idea writers block...
Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-08-2014 8:20 PMYah, it was the first thought that came into my head once I read "Man-made monsters"
"Can't we see how these creatures are beautiful?"
Good, I want to see how I can do!
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
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MemberCompsognathusJul-08-2014 8:27 PMWell... This is around Four years after the park has been shut down (Inferring it happens).
With D-rex as a super predator, Everythings screwed over, It's more like the DInosaurs from TLW Book.
We will see some Beauty in them, But this is intended to be a thriller.
Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-08-2014 8:29 PMWell, I will look forward to it, was just making a small joke. Off topic question, but how do you pronounce your username? Is it
Pay-then
or
Paw-then?
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Primal King
MemberCompsognathusJul-08-2014 8:45 PMThanks Paden! And am I in it? Just curious.
"If you can't see it... It's already too late."
-Jurassic Apocalypse (by Paden)
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MemberCompsognathusJul-08-2014 9:22 PM@RAPTOR401
I get that question a lot in real life.
You pronounce it as it's spelled.
Like this-
Pa(y)-Den.
Tis rather Simple.
@Primal King
As, THe story has not been drafted yet, You can be in it if you'd like...
Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way
Primal King
MemberCompsognathusJul-08-2014 9:45 PMI'd love to be in it. You should give me some interaction with a Tyrannosaurus. ;)
"If you can't see it... It's already too late."
-Jurassic Apocalypse (by Paden)
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-08-2014 10:10 PMThanks, I never knew Paden was your real name... Is it?
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Something Real
MemberTyrannosaurus RexJul-09-2014 1:30 AMX_PADEN_X - Wow! That was incredibly neat! I'm greatly looking forward to reading the rest. Thank you very much for sharing this with us! :)
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexJul-09-2014 3:49 AMNice job as usual Paden. Looking forward to the release, and seeing more characters.
Jack of all trades. Master of none
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MemberCompsognathusJul-09-2014 7:08 AM@Raptor-401
Yes, Paden is my real name, I abreaviate the last name for Security reasons.
(Or is it..)
Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-09-2014 10:00 AMHmm... Interesting name...
Of course, don't reveal your full name in public.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Sci-Fi King25
MemberAllosaurusJul-09-2014 2:36 PMHm. This is interesting. Good job!
“Banana oil.”- George Takei, Gigantis: The Fire Monster