Elite Raptor 007
MemberCompsognathusFeb-01-2014 1:30 AMAlright, Let's See our Competator :
Baryonyx :
Lenght : 30 Ft Long
Weight : 1.7 Ton
Description : Baryonyx is one of the few known piscivorous (fish-eating) dinosaurs, with specialized adaptations like a long low snout with narrow jaws filled with finely serrated teeth and gaff-hook-like claws to help it hunt its main prey.
Deinonychus :
Lenght : 15 Ft Long
Weight : 80 Kg
Description : Deinonychus was far from being one of the largest dinosaurs, but it was one of the most skillful hunters - one of the thugs of the dinosaur world. It always walked on its back legs and was armed with sharp claws and teeth that could rip into prey with alarming ease.
Let's Sit Tight And Enjoy The Battle :
In a lake in Isla Sorna, a Large Male Baryonyx is searching for food, wandering over to find a good spot, but it stumble upon a pack of 6 Deinonychus, leaded by an Alpha Male And Female. feel threathened, the Spino Roar to confirm it's spot, but the deinonychus was't afraid. in desperate, the Baryonyx than attack the Group of Raptor, but they're scattered away, cornered the Spino. in desperate, the spino than attack the youngest member of the pack, kill it with a single bite in it's head.
the rest of trhe spino than jump onto it's back, sink their moon claw deep into the Male Bary's back, the spino thrashes, causing the alpha female to fall down and break her leg. the Spino knows it, than attack the Alpha female. injured her with his 30 Cm claw. ripping her gut, the Alpha male see it,than jump's over to the Spino's neck, sink his large moon claw into the Spino's Neck. the Spino thrashes, Making all of the Raptor, accept the alpha male falled down.
the Alpha male still holding the Spino's neck, piercing in to it's throat, making the blood flowing in to the Baryonyx's Lung, the rest of the pack jump also at the Baryonyx's back, helping the Alpha male, the weaker and weaker Baryonyx, finally falling down with a lot of wound and a respiratory failure. the alpha male looking into the Spino's Head Wacth pitfully as the Baryonyx Dying, after 15 minuites struggling, finally The Large Spino's Died.
Winner : DEINONYCHUS 4/6 Remaining
The Power of the Pack make this Raptor won.
Primal King
MemberCompsognathusFeb-01-2014 1:46 AMPretty good! I would just make it longer and more detailed. Also you might want to shave off the rough edges. Other wise good!
"If you can't see it... It's already too late."
-Jurassic Apocalypse (by Paden)
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexFeb-01-2014 4:28 AMGood fight. Punctuation mostly is where you have to have work on.
Jack of all trades. Master of none
Carnosaur
MemberCompsognathusFeb-01-2014 11:40 AMFigured Deinonychus would win, no way even a large Spinosaur could take on 6 of them.
Nature doesn't deceive us; it is we who deceive ourselves.
Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusFeb-01-2014 2:02 PMNot bad. I was rooting for Deinonychus.
Elite Raptor 007
MemberCompsognathusFeb-03-2014 4:11 AMyeah ! it was almost impossible for even a large Spinosaurus to take down a pack of this Amazing Raptor