Ultra Predator
MemberCompsognathusJan-13-2014 3:14 PMInto the Abyss
The night is over, as the sun rose over the clearing the carcuses of the blood suckers burning in the sun light. The king was staring out to sea over what's left of the fleet of ship “ It seems 2 have survived the night from whatever was attacking it. It seem two have survived the night. I must go and save those ships.” After saying that the king walked into the water toward the ships, 10 minutes later the king made it to the ship swimming around it a couple time he started to push the ship back to shore. Then all of the sudden we saw the serpent head showing up behind the king, then wrapping around the king and dragging him under the water the king vanished from sight. The ship drift towards the shore the people on board set down the board and walked out of the ship, dazed and confused they feel over in shock after the night they just had I would not blame them.
Donovan showed up after all the people have exited the ship then he spoke to Aristion “ Where is the king we have the tail plate read to go.” Aristion using his sign language to tell him where the king vanished at. Donovan looked at the sea and whispered to one of his guy and then he ran off talking to us once more he told us “We have a attack-class submarine of the coast here and we should be able to find the king from whatever took him by surprise and hopefully free him from it’s grasp.” After that I walked toward the jungle and so did aristion then we laid down and waited for the king to return to finish our journey.
Caption Donovan View
Walking toward the beach as the submarine appeared donovan walked toward the pilot of the submarine and told him “ Have we made the upgrades to the submarine to withstand the pressure.” The pilot told him “Yes.” Donovan continued “How about the weapon,” the pilot said again “Yes.” Donovan finished with “ How about the viewing platform.” The pilot nooded and walked away. Heading toward the opening of the submarine, he stopped and turned towards the jungle where the dinosaurs walked towards wonder how long have these creatures lived again. Turning back towards the sub he entered, looking around at the interior of the ship it was secretly built and is the largest submarine in the U.S army and in the world it is even bigger than the typhoon class submarines.
Caption donovan on your mark, looking at on side and then the other he nodded at the helmsman. the the helmsman said “ Attention crew we are getting ready to dive.” after his command we dove straight away heading to unknown territories. The helmsman asked me after a couple hours “ Sir we are almost to the bermuda triangle what should we do.” Think about it for a few minutes I told him “Full speed ahead.” five minutes later we came across a deep abyss.
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DinoSteve93
MemberCompsognathusJan-13-2014 3:35 PMGood chapter. You have improved significntly from the last 0ne. Well done. :)
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Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexJan-13-2014 4:35 PMGood job. Much easier to follow with paragraphs.
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