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MemberCompsognathusJan-11-2014 3:05 PMHello Ladies and Gentlemen, if you recall FBR Revelations Part I, I left you on a cliff hanger, well, Heres the answer to the cliff hanger in the three part series...
Also, due to the spike in new members, I have the URL to Part one right HERE
With out further ado, Here is FBR revelations Part II...
Enjoy!
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Atlanta Cruz climbed a large tree, a .50 caliber BMG* sniper rifle slung across her back, she positioned herslef up on a large branch, she had liked climing trees, a smile blossomed on her face, childhood memoires flooding her mind. Her mother Nima Cruz had told her about these dinosaurs... On her tribes islands, she always wanted to avenge them some how... this was how...
"Cruz, Are you in position yet, these bastards are tearing up everything down here!!!" colby yelled over the comm
"yes sir, im in position, Waiting for your mark"
"Light em up"
"Afirmative sir"
she lined up the crosiars of the scope with her targets head.
Breath in.
Breath out.
BANG
A large bang sounded across the island, she ejected the shell from the chamber.
'1 down'
The bullet had rushed from the chamber directly towards the heart of the rex, The bullet hit right In the middle of a rib on the rexes right side, the rexlowered itself to the ground, feeling the sharp pain in its side. The Spino feeling merciful today, turned to look at where the projectile came from.
"Confirmed kill sir?" She asked over the comm
she recieved only a static hiss
The rex stood up, looking through the scope, Atlanta watched the slug from the shell simply fall off the chest cavity of the prehistoric beast. She had made a difference though, she had certainly periced the rib itself, As she noticed the small blood stream pour from the hole, maybe if she was lucky it had broken the rib. The rex turned to view her, As did all of the prehistoric creatures, the guns shots silenced, The comms went silent... except for one word...
"Shit"
Atlanta imeadiatley looked for a way down from the giant red wood. When you screw up in a snipers position, as taught by all forces, you get out of there, before they locate you. Atlanta frantically searched, she couldnt get down the tree, she turned to look at where the predators were. They were over 30 meters away, and closing...
She had no option, she was going to die in this god for saken tree... Or....
She came to the far side of the trees huge branch limb, she quickly secured everything she had on her, and jumped.
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Colby watched as she ran to jump, If she survived she would be easy picking for the creatures, who at the moment were more interested in her then the operation team. He frantically looked around, Beside him, a few feet away, laid a machine gun nest, the gunner lay, being operated by a medic, beside his weapon. Colby reacted fast, he picked the gun up off its tri pod and ran, Ignoring the protests of his fellow officers and soldiers.
He ran, right up behind the beasts, and laid down in a prone position and deployed the tripod, he opened the chamber and shoved the ammo belt into the chamber, he slammed the chamber shut, and opened up. The 50. caliber machine gun shook as its ordnance flew from the barrel, hitting its targets, The raptors turned and aproached the gun.
Colby aimed, The gun hiting and missing its targets, as they darted foreward, the rex and spino were caught off gaurd by the bullets hiting them, they turned away from there main target, and turned after colby. The raptors were meters out whe he finally brought down one, it was gray with a feather crest upon its head. The gun jammed as the next raptor darted towards him, 'Perfect, just perfect...' he thought, time slowed down, he watched as the raptors sicle shape claw reflected a glint of light, He watched Atlanta fall from the tree, He watched the t rex roar in slow motion at him, he watched... Just watched, He knew his life was soon to end, he accepted his fate, it might not be a regular soldiers death, but he accepted it, he would die with honour, protecting his Men, His friends, his brothers in arms...
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Atlanta felll from the tree, her body bent to the shape of the tree limbs. The metal padding in her combat uniform held some blows at bay, the rest to the blunt of her body crashing into it... Her 50. BMG was in worse shape, Even though she had used it on many missions overseas, She had taken the lives of many highstakes targets on top secret missions with it, She had it as her only friend when her chopper was shot down years ago. The barrel of the rifle was bent and crooked, the scope had been indented inwards, the eye pieces shattered, The firing mechanism was in pieces, the welds broken, pieces falling down as she fell, shells fell from the clip, The large rounds faling with her. In slow motion, until she hit a branch, things would spedd up, then slow down, it repeated this for what felt like an etirnity. Before she hit the ground, she watched as her commanding officer open up on the creatures, she watched the gun jam and the raptors jump, the only thing different from what he could see, was the man with the gun behind him.
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BANG *click* BANG *click* BANG *click* BANG *Click*
Colby listened as he heared a shot gun cycle through its rounds four times. He looked up, sensing he had been spared from his fate.
Above him stood a man, In a forest green digital camoflauge, A SPAS 12 modified with tactical inhancements ejected its last round, The man grabbed Colby by the shoulder of his combat vest and pulled him away to safety. Colby felt as if, he was bleeding.... It was a strange, sensational feeling, it coarsed through his body, and made him fall unconsious.
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Atlanta, got up she watched the man pull colby to safety, she had watched as cobly recieved a sycle claw to the stomach...
She grabbed her crimpled rifle, she walked, she was disorieneted by the fact that she had jsut fallen over 150 feet in the air from a tree... She ran, as the dinosaurs to notice to her, falling over more then once, she picked up the machine gun as she entered the compounds security walls, The same forest green man came and helped her to safety.
As atalnta looked back she watched as the tyransaurus rex was in a stand off with the spino, dead raptors littered the battleground, with abandoned equipment, and some wounded soldiers being carried to safety like herself.
The Man looked down at her, he told her something, but she couldnt understand it. Her eyes were caught on the name tape over his right breast pocket... "M-Muldoon?" she asked as she slipped from consciousness.
Atlanta re awoke on A black hawk helicopter,she was being tened to by a woman in a black uniform. She had dim recollections of what had just transpired, she looked out the window, and watched as the compound ignited in flame and explosions. Some memories returned to her memory, she winced in pain.
"Please, remain still, This wont take too long, Atlanta" She said
"H-How do you know my name, What happaned?" Atlanta asked
"Please, Atlanta just stay still, Your questions will be answered when we get back to the fleet"
Atlanta looked over the chopper, the doors had been shut, A red light and the windows illuminated the room, She noticed many wounded people laying on stretchers, and many old friends, She noticed colby laying down, Men and Women in Blakc and blue uniforms were assisting him, She saw Yoder, and Morales... They looked like they had been through hell and abck, they were sitting on a bench across from her.
"Atlanta...Atlanta... Atlanta..."
The voice calling her out got very distant, She fell, she began to dream as she fell, she was emraced in warmth as she dreamt. Slipping from consciousness.
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"-- I've never once seen anything like it before sir, A normal fall like that would kill a person, somehow shes still alive...."
"Well, that is good, I can't say it was the best descion to jump, but it was reasonable"
"Prefered to if it was bad muldoon?"
"He's got you there sir"
"Shannon I deny your permisision to speak"
"---Jerk"
Laughter awoke Atlanta, her eyes droopy with sleep. A women With her black hair in a braid turned to her.
"Well good to see your up, we had to sedate you, if you feel dreary, just get up and walk around a little atlanta." The women said
Atlanta sat up and turned on the bed she was on, she was in an officers quarters hooked up to a machine. Colby was on Crutches, the man who had saved them was propped up against the wall.
"You didnt answer my questions" atlanta said in a sarcastic tone to the woman
Shannon burst out in laughter remembering their converstaion, Atlanta remembering Shannon from somewhere...
"Well to answer your questions, Im shannon, We went to school together, Old friends, You fell from a tree, got banged up pretty bad, Your currently on the carrier USS Rosenvelt..."
"Now I remember, thank you shannon, its good to see you again..."
"I believe you and Muldoon ahve met already" colby asked gesturing over to the Liuetenant in the corner
"Your lucky, the chopper was about to leave... I noticed A uniform in the tree, and sure enough you were there..." muldoon stated, walking into better light, Muldoon was one or two years older then colby, He had brown hair and a familiar Hat in his hands. Like all hats of importance, this one told a story, It wasnt One of the modern hats with a plastic snap back thing in the back, No, this hat had been on an island like this before, Its only difference was that it had 3 rounds clipped to the side of the hat. The hat was the same worn by the austrailian military... It was the hat of a game warden who would make it home, But didnt live long enough to see his song hunt down animals like his father...
There was a certian sadness to Muldoon, Like he had seen all this before... But a toughness of an unmatched Story and vengence.
"Muldoon, Might I ask who you are?" Atlanta asked sheepishly
"I suppose it is the correct thing for you to know your rescuer. My name Is Kenya Muldoon, Son of Robert Muldoon Who died at the hands of your mothers adversary" He glared slightly at Atlanta, but stopped realizing this was a different person then the person who took his father away "Nedry Has been dealt with, his Associates Dealt with, Except for you... But, from recollections from a friend of mine, Jess harding, Your not as bad as I thought... I Moved to canada when I 17 joined the military when I was 18, Got accepted into the Elite Force of JTF2... and here we are..."
"You must understand Kenya, It was not my mothers doing..."
"I know, but I wanted some peace, We can settle these matters another day, You need your rest, your being re deployed on the next chopper out..."
"Thanks you Guys, I do owe you one muldoon, Why dont we talk about it when this is all over... "
"Sound plan, lets get going guys" colby said motioning for the door
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"Would someone Like to explain, How the top operation forces Ended up getting beat by a bunch of giant FREAKING LIZARDS!!!" There was a man in a white uniform yelling on the bridge of the carrier.
"Sir, you must understand, These creatures are more advanced for combat then the fire teams, they've litterally had Billions of ye--" Jeanson started leaning up against one of the consoles, A cup of tea in his right hand
"No you dont understand, These are lizards, and they need to be treated like that"
"Sir, Even if you are captain, you are not commanding this mission, The UN is then Captain Colby Then me, then you, You are but to deliver us to the destination, we are to take care of the objective!!!" Jeanson barked back at his supierior
"That is Insubordination Officer, I will not have that on my warship"
"He is doing his orders Sir" Colby yelled from the door "He is your supierior right now, The UN selected him out of the canidates from The SAS To be second in command, You are but dirt to him right now, And I can court marshall you for interfeering with the mission objective..." Colby limped across the bridge on his crutches.
"These "lizards" are not the be underistimated Mr.Rel, Because the moment you do so, your dead..." muldoon stated Looking out from the bridge "We underestimated them, And now we have two men dead and twenty who need to be evaced to a better hospital ship, We need to be more prepared..."
"Who let you on the bridge!!!" The man screamed
"Mr.Rel, you need to calm down or you will be removed from commanding the ship due to being comprimised.... Do you understand" Jeanson asked setting his tea aside
"Understood" he said hanging his head, he left the bridge.
"How do they always have people like this end up in high ranking positions..." Shannon asked, sitting down at a console with a large brief case.
"I dont know, They start to think their unbreakable after a few years in a position... We need to prepare, Is that the UAV predator Console?"
"Yes sir" shannon said with a chuckle as she popped open the case, and turned it on, The officers and crew on the bridge gathered around
"So this is currently on the flight deck right now?" one sailor asked
"You bet! Shes ready for take off," she stepped aside and let one of the UAV operators step in to fly
The UAV roared of the carrier Within minutes it was above the island. They went over the compound, it was still lightly on fire, The raptor carcasses were gone, and no remains of either rex or spino...
"What happend?" shannon asked
"Well, another predator probably came and ate the Raptor carcasses and the Rex and Spino probably left to lick their wounds, but dinosaurs cant do that because its impossible, I imagine maybe another predator right under your noses probably took the carcasses...." a sailor stated who was at the helm, everyone turned and looked at him "What? Did you never have a child hood?"
they returned to looking over the UAV, They Tried to find the rex and spino, They didnt find them, They only found a single stegasaurus, a mysterious crashed wreckage of a most likely trailer, and the wreckage of a Plane...
"Whats are plan sir" Shannon asked looking at him
"We prepare..."
Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way
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MemberCompsognathusJan-11-2014 3:07 PMOh yes, and Just for Mr.Happy, regarding the gun debate...
Expect more Dinosaur Duel in the next part... and an FBR to follow that...
Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way
DinoSteve93
MemberCompsognathusJan-11-2014 3:22 PMMan, that's really, really long to read for a single post. Otherwise, it's awesome. I love your writing skills, and I love this mini-series, if I can name it so.
Great job Paden! ;)
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Carnosaur
MemberCompsognathusJan-11-2014 3:30 PM
Pretty good, really well-written...Great job!
Nature doesn't deceive us; it is we who deceive ourselves.
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexJan-11-2014 3:53 PM
I don't see anywhere to mount a scope on that, a revolver has cylinders (non removable), so bullets wouldn't just fall out of it unless it was open, and I doubt a barrel that short would bend.
May I recommend:
McMillan Tac 50
Barrett M82A1/M107A1
Or the Accuracy International AS50
Jack of all trades. Master of none
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MemberCompsognathusJan-11-2014 4:26 PMI do apoligise DinoSteve, I really do, I didnt think it was that long until I posted it... The next chapter will be a lot shorter...
and Mr.Happy if I was being chased by T-Rex, I wouldnt take the revolver either, But, I decided for clarifacation on the rifle it was going to be the BMG 50., I posted the revolver as a joke, I dont think it would actually function as a revolver.... If you have anymore corrections or suggestions i'd be obliged to hear them
And thank you for your replies it really means a lot!!!
Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way
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MemberTyrannosaurus RexJan-11-2014 4:38 PMI highly doubt that is a legit thing, but you never know (that would kill the wrists though). I figured it was a joke, but the technical stuff is still worth posting. Which would you choose anyway?
Tac 50: 5 round bolt action
M82A1/M107A1/AS50: Ten round semi automatic
I personally would take either the M82A1 or the Tac 50.
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MemberCompsognathusJan-11-2014 5:34 PMProbably the M82A1
Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way
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MemberCompsognathusJan-12-2014 1:05 PMCool. I'm all for a long battle/story, but this one was a touch on the long side. But good nonetheless.
DinoSteve93
MemberCompsognathusJan-12-2014 1:32 PMOh, don't worry Paden, you don't have to apolagize... I like long stories... that's just loger than I expected. ;)
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