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Clash of the titans:first fight

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MemberCompsognathusNovember 01, 20131254 Views7 Replies
this is my first dinosaur battle! in the forest a tyrannosaurus looking for food.in a small glade he find a dead brachiosaurus.the rex is hungry so he start to eat from the carcass.a few minutes later something hit the rex's right side and the rex fall on the ground,and he only saw a big shadow.he get up and look around,but the shadow is disappear.a few second later the rex feel pain in the right side,and in the left arm.he soon realize that he,s left arm is broke.suddenly the shadow return and bite the rex's neck from the right size.the rex recognize the shadow.its a giganotosaurus.the rex pull his neck to the left,but he's lucky that he's main artery left intact,but the giga made a very deep,bleeding wound.after that the giga attack the rex's damaged right side.the t.rex try to fight back,but from the fall he still stunned.the t.rex grab the giga's tail.the giga roar because the pain,but the stunned t.rex can't make much damege.after the giga attack the rex's leg.the t.rex still try to fought and now it try to grab the giga's nek,but use it's speed the giga run away,and disappear between the trees.the rex think that he's scare away the giga,so he start to eat again.but the giga doesn't run away,just run to the other side and again hit the rex,but now the rex's left side.the stunned rex again fall on the ground but now he dont get up easily.while the t.rex try to get up the giga start to bite the rex's stomach.the t.rex roar cause the pain,kick the giga's head,get up and walk away.he survive the encounter,but he get some serious injury.but the giga doesn't attack him because he thought that he do enough damage,so he don't need much just wait and follov the rex. one week later... the rex's wounds are infected,and he become very weak.he dont eat so mutch.a wef second later the t.rex collapses from exhaustion.a wef minutes later the giganotosaurus find the death t.rex,and he start to eat it. the winner is: [img]http://supermonsterfightclub.webs.com/Giganotosaurus.jpg[/img]
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DinoSteve93
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Hmmm... I liked the way you kept Giga in shadows. However I think Giga won too easily, and that the fight is very short. But these are just my thoughts.

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Sniper
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Yeah the fight was short.i try to fix it,but that's just my first dino vs dino topic.
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DinoSteve93
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Well, for a first fight, it is something ;)

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Sniper
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I update the fight.
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Interesting fight, not bad, but not great either. Giga did win a little easily, it was interesting to see the Giga stick to the shadows though. A little hard to follow though, you're Hungarian(?) I believe is what you said in your first comment.

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Sniper
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Well yeah.im a hungarian and i know that this fight is not the best,but it's also hard to write down the things as i think.this is why it seems that the giga win easily.and the translater also translate wrong.
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Lord Vader
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That's fine. People always improve with experience. If you need any tips for writing fights, look at the details in some of Rex Fan's and Deltadromeus's fights.

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