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celeste - a life .....part one: the meeting

Dynamosaurus Imperiosus/ Raptorexxx 700

MemberCompsognathusSeptember 10, 20131038 Views8 Replies
so i have been thinking about a story i wrote but i didnt know weather to post it or not but i got inspired by the story of longclaw and here it is it is a bright and sunny day on isla sorna (which has now been evacuated) and a young tyrannosaurus called celeste, is just around 1 month old playing with her 2 brothers while the rest of the pack is out hunting. she and her pack live in a large clearing the edge of a forest. but just a few minutes later a family of acrocanthosaurs appears outside the clearing, she and her brothers instinctively stay still in the shadow of a tree as they know acros have bad depth perception, but the wind is blowing towards the acros so they instantly pick up the scent of the tyrannosaurs and dash towards them, just as their about to kill the juveniles 2 large male trexes appear from the bush behind the juveniles. knowing they are risking their 2 babies life they run out of the clearing just as the rest of the trex pack is entering, even though they dont clash one of the males chases them to the end of the clearing, and in the panic one of the 2 juveniles gets trampled and killed. the other juvenile stops and roars in sadness but has to keep running with family if they want to reunite with their whole pack alive. meanwhile celeste is enjoying the meal her pack brought her but she notices the both her mom sue and her brother stan are missing. she looks outside the clearing only to see her mom roaring in pain because of the death of her oldest son who died from a triceratops attack so that is it for part one hope you enjoy the whole series!
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I think I will enjoy it :) I think it's cool that you used the names of T. rex specimens for the T. rex in your stories!
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Well, it would be good, in fact, all the story's/fights would be really good if it was easy to read. I'm just going to assume that you haven't read the story of Cleo or Fight to Survive. Those are two story's and I'd recogmend you read them. You can learn alot from reading other people's writing.

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thnx for the advice deltadromeus (one of my favorite dinos by the way lol) and im going to edit it right now
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Deltadromeus is a really cool dinosaur. The Story of Cleo is about a Deltadromeus, so I,think you'd really like it.

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hey i just finished editing it so i you want to re-read it please refresh your page and im going to cleo right now
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Deltadromeus
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That makes the story so so so much better. I now take it that a triceratops was a the edge of the clearing and killed Stan, I think.

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Not bad, not bad at all. BTW raptorexxx, I'm the one who wrote The Fight To Survive. Just so you know who did it ;)
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Not Bad. A little hard to follow, but not bad.

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