Dynamosaurus Imperiosus/ Raptorexxx 700
MemberCompsognathusApr-26-2014 6:48 AM2 days after the attack and the Pack is still puzzled by what would even dare attack them. Suddenly the pack starts moving towards the river ahead; Al is confused as he is too afraid to stay behind like the last time. He follows them only to find thousands of ceratopsians heading towards the river from the opposite direction. He is shocked he had never seen such a large herd before, he stays back and watches. 1 hour later the pack is nowhere to be seen and the Ceratopsian herd is just about to start crossing…until suddenly the pack spring out of the bushes and starts slaughtering them, the confused ceratopsians dash towards the river only to find out it’s flooding. The herd is cornered between the terrifying jaws of the pack and the angry wrath of the arctic tundra, the pack is actually pushing them towards the river in order to drown them. Yet the Albertosaurus are not the only things hunting the ceratopsians, suddenly a pack of the unknown creature leaps out from the bushes on the other side slaughtering those who made it. Al quickly hides remembering the ordeal 2 days earlier he screams to war them, yet both packs seem to not actually notice each other…. Until the creatures smell blood, the individual which attacked them earlier characterized by a giant scar on his left eyes raises his head slowly from his kill, smells the air, and doesn’t look to the pack yet he looks directly to where Al is hiding. Al, terrified starts crying for help until his cries are interrupted by bloodcurdling screech from the creature which looks directly at him and snaps his jaws. Meanwhile the pack’s hunt is interrupted by the screech, the ceratopsians see the perfect chance to escape yet there small brains mislead them into pushing each other the river drowning most. The Albertosaurs roar and ignore the other pack, continuing the hunt the albertosaurs all manage to feast before dawn. The other pack suspiciously starts retreating. Al sleeps in his hiding place to the sounds of wailing animals and struggling victims. The next day he wakes up to see the horrors of yesterday and they are far more than a herd of dead animals
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexApr-26-2014 6:59 AMGood chapter and suspenseful ending.
Jack of all trades. Master of none
UCMP 118742
MemberCompsognathusApr-26-2014 7:16 AMGreat chapter. Loved the ending.
Keep in mind that many people have died for their beliefs; it's actually quite common. The real courage is in living and suffering for what you believe in. -Brom-
Dynamosaurus Imperiosus/ Raptorexxx 700
MemberCompsognathusApr-26-2014 1:49 PMUr definetly gonna love the next chapter then
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusApr-26-2014 2:42 PMLiked the ending the most.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!