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MemberAllosaurusSep-23-2015 12:49 PMSorry for the delay, the site was down.
Part 2: Nequit Dominum the Unstoppable Lord
*Five Years prior to The End*
A lone Spinosaurus unknowingly crossed what would today be the Atlantic Ocean, in hopes to see new lands, he was curious. He entered North America, and from there he proceeded north-west, hoping to find a nice place to settle down. In took some time but he made his way towards what would be Montana. He had no idea what he would be seeing. As this Spinosaurus stumbled along, he noticed a predator he had never seen before- Tyrannosaurus, a female! He watched from afar as the beast battled a pack of four Allosaurus over a Alamosaurus carcass. From his covering, he noticed two of the Allosaurus began to bite the creatures leg slipping it up on his back, he didn’t know whether to save the creature- or run for his life.
The Tyrannosaurus swung her mighty head around killing two of the Allosaurus with her un-matched bite, but the remaining two clawed her from the back, weakening her strength. The Spinosaurus pulled a risky move, and attempted to kill the remaining Allosaurus.
The female Tyrannosaurus looked back and watched as a creature she had never seen before charged from the bushes, she believed this to be the end of her Tyranny- she had no idea. The Spinosaurus bellowed scaring away the Allosaurus with his sheer size, from their he turned back and looked at the Tyrannosaurus, analyzing it closely; the female Rex stood up, she didn’t attack the Spinosaurus, instead she watched him- and he watched back.
For the rest of the day the Spinosaurus followed the Rex, attempting to see what she ate, and hoping for a guide in this new world he was now in. This Tyrannosaurus had lived the majority of her life lacking a parent to help her hunt, survive, her instinct was not even keen when it came to understanding her own species. She survived the majority of her childhood on large bugs and animals like Purgatorius, when she reached a reasonable height she began to hunt beings like Protoceratops and Ornithomimus. Weeks had passed and the Spinosaurus still followed the female, mating season had begun, and he was far away from any Spinosaurus.
The female Tyrannosaurus sees a herd of Edmontosaurus grazing in the distance, she signals to the Spinosaurus to wait and let her kill the prey-she did just that. Dashing out from the conifers the Tyrant bellowed alerting the herd. As she ran she spotted her target-a weakly Edmontosaurus who had strayed from the herd, this was the prey. The female Rex inched closer to the Edmontosaurus, and finally clamped onto his neck- snapping it. The Rex indulged in her prey and signaled for the Spinosaurus to join in.
Later that same day, one of the most heinous things to ever befall the dinosaurs happened, the Spinosaurus and Tyrannosaurus mated. Breaking the laws of the nature, the two behemoths mated-this would birth a demonic being, so powerful even the toughest dinosaurs alive couldn’t even pierce it’s skin.
Five months later, the female lays an egg. She notices something absurd about the egg, it was entirely golden, with patches of silver. For the next four months the parents watched over the egg closely, awaiting it to hatch. On one of these days filled with watching, the Rex and Spino decided to abandon the egg in search of a meal, little did they know something was watching them. In the dense bushes, an Utahraptor had been stalking the absurdly golden egg, it had no idea what this egg was, but it desperately needed a meal. The Utahraptor slowly made it’s way towards the egg, avoiding the eye of the parents, when it did make it to the egg it attempted to crack it; the Utahraptor was left in shock as this egg wouldn’t break, it attempted to smash it on to a boulder, with it’s claws, even on a jagged rock. Nothing could break this egg. The Utahraptor decided to scurry away, he didn’t want to deal with the parents-and to be clear the egg wasn’t worth his time and patience.
Two months later, the female Rex still watches over the egg. She began to fall asleep, but just as she drifted off she hears a cracking noise, she lifts her massive head up and watches as the golden egg’s shell begins to fall off. This is not of nature, the baby isn’t breaking the egg, the shell’s are just falling off. The Tyrannosaur watches confused, in all her time she has always seen the baby break the egg, not the egg break itself off.
Five minutes later, the whole egg shell fell off, leaving only a creature completely silver. The Tyrannosaur and Spinosaurus both stood up and watched as the creature began to lift it’s head up, they were shocked at what they saw. An uncountable amount of horns riddled the creatures tail all the way to it’s head, some of which were risen up in crude ways on it’s back, something was awfully wrong with this creature; what shocked the parents the most however, was the fact that this creature wasn’t even crawling. No, it stood up immediately, directly vertical- no hunch like a Tyrannosaurus or Spinosaurus.
Finally, the being turned it’s head around to face the parents, and red eyes lit up their souls. How could this be? How could these two mating create something so horrible as this creature? Well, you see. When these two mated, it wasn’t meant to happen they were two different species, It shouldn’t have happened. And when it did all possibility’s for this embryo awakened, most of which ended up going into it’s strength, appearance, posture, durability, and speed, all things that make an Alpha Predator. But this turn of events was not directly due to it being an Alpha Predator, most alpha’s maintain a visible appearance to their parents, it’s just genetics, but this creature- something went awfully wrong with it. A conclusion is genetic mutation, these two were not meant to mate in any circumstances, but they did and it succeeded somehow, a new genetic disease created this creature? Or maybe even something much worse.
The creature began to wobble towards it’s parents. Jagged claws, four fingers including the thumb, steak knives for toes, this creature even scared the Tyrannosaurus. Nonetheless, the two were determined to raise it as if it was a normal child, they didn’t know any better.
Three years have passed since the being’s birth, it was now an astonishing height of fifteen ft, larger then the female Tyrannosaurus and nearly the same height as the male Spinosaurus. The female had begun to teach this creature her hunting techniques, she didn’t know she was raising a demon, in-fact her whole observance of it being strange wasn’t even their anymore, it was her child, and it must be raised to survive. The Tyrannosaurus and this being, cleverly named Nequit Dominum due to his unstoppable appearance began to hunt a herd of Triceratops. The Tyrannosaurus bellowed to awaken the herd and let them scurry, she then signaled to her child to chase after them, she was surprised with what she saw.
Nequit Dominum didn’t run like a dinosaur, in-fact he ran like a man, vertically up-right and swinging his arms madly, to his mother he looked psychotic like this. He dashed at the Triceratops not even giving them a chance, he was running 40 mph, impossible, no giant dinosaur can run that fast. He easily made it to the triceratops and with ease grabbed one and flung it to it’s back, with ease he snapped the creatures neck. The female Rex was somewhat scared with what she saw, it ran so fast, and invoked so much fear by it’s mere presence, was it a hunter or a demon? Nequit bellowed psychotically, the Tyrannosaurus noticed that his eyes were spinning in near circles, but nonetheless she ignored the front of it and carried the Triceratops to the nesting grounds for the family to enjoy.
One year has passed since that spectacular hunt. The two parents rest in a forest shaded by conifers, they begin to fall asleep but are awoken by the tremblings of a giant. The Spinosaurus stands up and watches as his own son, Nequit Dominum, smashes through the trees carrying an Alamosaurus carcass. Nequit Dominum is now twenty-three ft, just as tall as his father if not taller. The Spinosaurus watches in shock as he carried the carcass with ease, Nequit then proceeded to lay it down and gorge on it, not offering any to his parents. The Spinosaurus and Tyrannosaurus both began to tear off a piece of the meat, but Nequit didn’t let them, he bellowed at his parents and dragged the carcass closer to him. This severely angered the parents, they had raised him to get here and he isn’t even offering them a meal? The Tyrannosaurus bellowed at Nequit, her royal roar alerted all the creatures in the forest, Micro-raptors, even Deinosuchus heard this bellow.
Nequit bellowed back, but instead of just a bellow he clawed his mother in the face, in-sighting her wrath. The Tyrannosaurus charged Nequit and bit him on his neck, the demon grabbed her by the throat and with ease lifted her up, preventing her from biting him- this forced the Spinosaurus to act. The Spinosaurus bellowed and charged Nequit Dominum ramming into him, this knocked him over but caused no severe damage. The Female stood up and charged Nequit, the demonic being pushed back her skull with one hand, and with the other snapped her neck, he had killed his own mother. The Spinosaurus bellowed angrily and charged Nequit again; Nequit Dominum bellowed as if he was laughing, he circled around his fathers charge, grabbed his spine, and clamped down on it with 18,000 pounds of pure force, he broke the spine, killing his father.
Nequit Dominum had killed a Tyrannosaurus, and a Spinosaurus, let alone them being his parents. He began to walk away, but suddenly, some sort of sense came back to him. Nequit looked back at the bodies of his parents, they lay dead, he had killed them. Nequit attempted to walk away from the bodies but he couldn’t, he collapsed because of his own guilt- and he began to bellow psychotically almost like crying, his only friends lay dead. Nequit Dominum began to run at his max speed, ramming into trees and knocking over a few, he stumbled and fell on a jagged rock, it didn’t even pierce his skin.
Nequit Dominum continued his bellows, it turned from agony to insanity. He began to bellow insanely again, almost as if he was laughing maniacally at what he had done, he didn’t know that he was alerting a pack of the most powerful predator’s in the world.
In a forest almost exactly at Nequit Dominum’s position, a pack of four Tyrannosaurus Rex prowl for food. This Pack is lead by an Alpha Tyrannosaurus known as Tyrance, he is much more powerful then the average Tyrannosaurus due to his status of alpha, he had to adapt and become stronger; he boasts a height of eighteen ft, a bite force of 22,000 pounds, and a max speed of twenty-seven mph, he is an incredibly powerful T.Rex, but his power will be tested.
Tyrance leads his pack through the canopy, over a small river, around a muddy passing, and finally by a cliffside. Tyrance signals for the pack to rest, he tells his mate, the second Alpha, to be ready for any predators to come by as this dense jungle could house anything from Giganotosaurus, to packs of Allosaurus. The others begin to rest, but Tyrance can’t, something has caught his powerful scent, something he has never smelled before, he is worried it’s another predator, so he stays awake and on the ready to defend his family.
What caught Tyrance’s scent was something he never could have anticipated however. From the nearby trees Tyrance hears a sound, he immediately lifts his head in preparation. He watches closely as a enormous shadow inches closer, he awakens the pack with his loud bellow, preparing them for battle. From the conifers, a demon has been waiting to kill Tyrance and his pack, this being is Nequit Dominum. Tyrance bellowed with his kingly roar at the demonic being who was nearly six ft taller then him, this creature was no joke to Tyrance, he will use all his power, he must.
Nequit Dominum just stared at the pack, attempting to analyze their skills, he also hoped that they were his parents, but his powerful scent knew they weren’t. Beginning to feel enraged at what he had done to his family, Nequit Dominum began to bellow menacingly again, and Tyrance wasn’t having it. He charged Nequit and rammed into him; Dominum grabbed Tyrance’s massive skull and flung him away, clawing him all through out.
Tyrance was now enraged, he told the remaining members to wait as he charged at Nequit Dominum. Nequit attempted to claw Tyrance, but Tyrance dodged this and retaliated with a bite to Nequit’s neck, he clamped down with 20,000 pounds of force, piercing Nequit’s skin. Nequit had never felt pain before, this feeling scared him and made him even more angered, he pushed Tyrance’s skull away from his neck before proceeding to bite Tyrance with 18,000 pounds of pressure forcing the Alpha to bellow in agony; the pain wasn’t over though, Nequit grabbed Tyrance and smashed him into a tree. Just as he was about to kill the Alpha however, Tyrance’s mate rammed into Nequit ramming him into the sharp edge of a pine needle, it didn’t break his skin but it angered him. Nequit bellowed profusely as he was being tag teamed by the female Alpha and the fourth member of the pack, he wasn’t having this. Nequit grabbed the fourth members foot and slipped him up before grabbing Tyrance’s mate and throwing her into a tree.
Nequit Dominum proceeded to smash the neck of the fourth member killing him and also biting the third in commands neck, snapping it. He then moved towards the immobilized female. The Demon lifted up the female alpha and prepared to snap her neck, before he did this he caught a scent of pheromones coming from both her and Tyrance, Nequit knew she was his mate- he decided he will torture Tyrance more. Nequit Dominum walked towards Tyrance who was in so much pain he could do nothing but watch the horror. Lightning clashed in the background as Nequit Dominum looked at Tyrance. He bellowed psychotically showing him his mate one last time before breaking her neck, he threw her body to the ground and looked at Tyrance menacingly.
Tyrance found the rage inside of him to stand up, he bellowed at Nequit Dominum and charged. He bit Nequit on his leg forcing Dominum to back up, but Tyrance wouldn’t let him. He charged and clamped onto Nequit Dominum’s neck forcing Nequit to grab Tyrance and throw him, Tyrance had done all he could do. Nequit Dominum lifted up Tyrance and stared at him with pure anger, he then threw him off the cliffside, believing it to be a worthy demise to the Alpha, he didn’t know Tyrance had survived the fall due to landing in water.
Feeling satisfied by his killing spree, Nequit Dominum began to ravage through North America. He eradicated entire herds of Alamosaurus, destroyed Giganotosaurus, and murdered countless Anatotitan and didn’t eat them, he was a demonic being- and as it looks he isn’t going to be stopped.
Nequit Dominum began to make his way north-east towards what will be Europe and Africa. Along the way, he stumbled across a swamp and a Deinosuchus launched out grabbing him on his neck. Nequit Dominum laughed psychotically as the Deinosuchus attempted to drag him into the water, it’s teeth barely pierced his skin. Dominum grabbed the Deinosuchus, threw it off, and then proceeded to ravage the creature with his jagged claws, he killed the Deinosuchus.
Nequit Dominum made his way down the Ivory Coast. As he continued walking however, he looked in the distance to see a pack of Tarbosaurus in a canopy, five of them. A new creature for him, he must kill it to satisfy his lust for power. Nequit walked to the pack’s resting grounds, he bellowed psychotically at the tyrannosaurs. The Alpha male and female of the pack charged Nequit; Dominum wasn’t even scratched, he grabbed the males head and broke it with his elbow before lifting the female and smashing her spine into sharp rock. The rest of the pack charged ferociously, Nequit bellowed laughing through all of this. He grabbed all three of them with one arm and smashed them together into a wall, breaking all three’s spine. Nequit wiped the blood from his claws and continued on.
The Demon finally found a grounds he deemed worthy to house him. A gloomy forest, sheltered from sun and the elements; he would first eradicate all who inhabited it making the forest his resting grounds. Nequit did just that, and by nightfall the forest was clear of any large predators or herbivores. Micro-raptors flew above Dominum’s head as he lay in a sort of meditation- there was no sunlight in this forest, it was pitch-black, but not for Nequit Dominum.
*Present day*
Egypt the Spinosaurus began to make his way towards the tip of Europe, it was the only way to escape any potential danger and be safe, little he knew. Egypt looked at the sky, barely any light shined through the clutter of debris filling the air, but this wasn’t even the worst of his fears. Egypt turned behind him to see pure horror in the form of Nequit Dominum, he had followed him. Nequit engaged Egypt in a chase, although being much faster then Egypt, the Spinosaurus knew the way of the land. Egypt ran with all his might around passings, over small hills and atop dunes to escape Nequit Dominum who stumbled on all of these. Egypt had finally made his way to a dead-end, at the edge lay a cliffside that lay cut-off from the Atlantic Ocean, he turned back to see Nequit inching close, this was his final chance.
Egypt looked to his side to a see a crumbling side of the passing, he used his powerful arms to tear down what was holding it from falling hoping it would block Nequit for a little bit. Egypt ran with all his might towards the edge of the cliff, he looked back in pure fear as Nequit bursted through the blockade with ease and was right up on him. Egypt ran with all his might, he finally made it to the edge of the cliff but he was beginning to feel anxiety, he looked back and Nequit Dominum was only 10 ft away from him- it was his only choice. Egypt rolled off the small cliffside landing directly into the ocean, he submerged himself and believed to have escaped Nequit’s wrath.
Nequit Dominum also reached the passing, he couldn’t let this creature out-maneuver him, so he followed Egypt by rolling into the water. Nequit was not well adapted to swimming, he did the best he could to follow Egypt but he was in a Spinosaurus’s favorite territory, there was no way he could equal him in speed. Nequit did his best to follow Egypt across the sea, but his efforts were halted, as from beneath a humongous Liopleurodon grabbed Nequit and swung him deep beneath the ocean, was this the end of the Unstoppable Lord?
Part 2 end.
Good grief.
Something Real
MemberTyrannosaurus RexSep-23-2015 12:58 PMGORILLAGODZILLA - Well, that was certainly an unexpeted twist! Nequit Dominum is without a doubt one of the strangest beings of which I have ever read - I like it! I am pleased with how bizarre this series is becoming! Thank you ever so much for sharing this excellent work with us! :)
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MemberAllosaurusSep-23-2015 1:32 PM^Thank you! Dominum is quite the terror, we haven't even seen the front of what he is going to do in this series! Stay tuned.
Good grief.
ScienceHerWay
MemberTriceratopsSep-23-2015 6:09 PMI loved this so much! I don't know which is more amazing, two different dinosaurs of different species mated and created this monster, or that this thread was awesome, seat gripping, shocking AND amazing at the same time! How do you do it :P. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for part three :D
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MemberAllosaurusSep-23-2015 8:22 PM^ Thank you, it means a lot! Chapter 3 will be on Saturday.
Good grief.
Godzilla316
MemberBrachiosaurusSep-24-2015 1:05 PMYeash!!!! I didn't see that one coming!
This is one of the beat fan-fics I have read in a long, long time :D
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MemberCompsognathusSep-25-2015 8:23 AM"Nequit Dominum didn’t run like a dinosaur, in-fact he ran like a man, vertically up-right and swinging his arms madly, to his mother he looked psychotic like this."… i can't even …
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusSep-26-2015 6:20 PMCool fight, about to go read chapter 3 now and I'm exicted to see what happens next!
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!