Dynamosaurus Imperiosus/ Raptorexxx 700
MemberCompsognathusAug-03-2015 7:34 AMAs I woke up from my slumber, I could feel the beach’s scorching sun warming my face which was mostly covered in wet sand. I carefully lifted my head off the ground, , realizing I have lost all my memories I can’t remember anything in order to scan the landscape, there was a gigantic forest about 90 feet ahead of me, but as I turned my head to the side I saw… 3 people, at first I thought who the hell are these people. Then I was grateful I wasn’t alone, the to my right one was a beautiful girl in her early 20s with pearl white skin, ocean blue eyes, and light brown hair wearing a red silk T-shirt and blue skinny jeans, the one beside her was a teenage boy with similar hair and complexion but with honey eyes he was wearing a tank top and track pants. About 6 feet to my left there was one with a dark complexion wearing a grey tank top. He was probably in his mid-40s and was quite a tall man. I cautiously nudged each one of them and slowly backed away, the first one to wake was the blonde girl, she looked at me, in panic and whispered “who are you” she then realized where she was and started to shiver “wh…where are we” she whimpered. “I don’t know” I answered. I asked her about her name and if she recognized any of the people around us. “she didn’t answer, she just held the teenager’s hand and put his head on her lap… we stayed like that, looking awkwardly at the ground for the next 20 minutes, she would look at the boy and cry, she thought he was dead …that was until he woke up, she hugged him hard as he looked on, confused. After the reunion the other two woke up minutes later. The man in the grey tank top seemed to be the calmest, reacting to the news that we were marooned on an island, he then said “if we’re stuck together then it’s no use being shy, so could everybody please tell me their name, my name is Walter” he then pointed to the girl “Emma” she muttered, then to the teenager,” Oliver” he said, then they all looked to me…. “J-Jack” I said, it was the first name that popped up in my head. Then the girl said “since we’re all going to wind up dead anyway, this is my little brother.” To this day I still don’t understand why they initially weren’t going to tell me and Walter this. Then we noticed the sun was setting, something that is a welcomed event…or so we thought. We started exploring the island; “I can see the outline of a destroyed ship” said Emma, pointing west, “Where?” I asked while squinting my eyes.” About 3 miles or so away” Emma said. “We better start moving then” said Walter immediately. One thing I noticed is that Oliver barely talked.
We reached the ship about 40 minutes later but something was clearly visible a dozen meters away… a carcass of a man ripped in half. Emma then closed her eyes and hid behind Oliver. As we passed it by Walter told us he’d check the body then follow us to the wreckage. A few minutes later he came to me and said “what happened to this man is beyond human comprehension. There is nothing on earth that can cause such damage to a human being...” I looked at him mid-sentence and shushed him, I then threw him behind a bush and quickly followed what we saw…was shocking.
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MemberTyrannosaurus RexAug-03-2015 3:11 PMDYNAMOSAURUS IMPERIOSUS - Hahaha! That was extremely fun to read! I greatly enjoyed the way in which you described each individual within your work! Not only that, but I very much liked the "cliffhanger" ending your presented! Thank you for taking the time to create this and share it with us! :)
Dynamosaurus Imperiosus/ Raptorexxx 700
MemberCompsognathusAug-03-2015 3:24 PMSOMETHING REAL - thanks for such kind words, i will post the next part after 2 days in order to give people time to read it! cause if I post the next part tommorow most people won't have time to read it, I believe you will really like the "Cliffhanger" I have in store
Something Real
MemberTyrannosaurus RexAug-03-2015 3:28 PMDYNAMOSAURUS IMPERIOSUS - Excellent! I am looking forward to seeing what you present! :)
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MemberBrachiosaurusAug-04-2015 9:32 AMThis is awesome!! Cant wait to see how this unfolds (just to be clear is this JP related or just dinosaur related, like are they stuck on Isla Nublar or Isla Sorna)
Dynamosaurus Imperiosus/ Raptorexxx 700
MemberCompsognathusAug-04-2015 10:31 AMGODZILLA316: Guess you'll just have to wait and see!