TyrannoWright
MemberCompsognathusMay-02-2015 7:37 PMPROLOUGE
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She panted in exhaustion and bleeding from her wounds. She had eliminated her competition, but what about the others who had left in a hurry? She ignored the fact and made of the jungle, carrying a rather large raptor in her mouth.
The sun set as she arrived at her new territory with the dead raptor. She dropped it to the ground and and ate it as she hear a distant sound. She rose her head and looked for the origin of the noise, only to see a helicopter fly by toward the ocean. She always wondered what was beyond that great body of water.
She finished consuming her kill and went for a drink at a nearby river, cleaning of the blood of her kill and her own. She then went for a resting place to sleep off the sore pain of her wounds. As she fell asleep, the jungle fell silent. Only the Brachiosaurs of the inner island could be heard. She felt ever so content. She had claimed her own kingdom.
TO BE CONTINUED
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexMay-03-2015 4:13 AMNice job. Perhaps a tad short, but very good just the same. Looking forward to seeing more of this.
Jack of all trades. Master of none
x_paden_x
MemberCompsognathusMay-03-2015 10:05 AMI've got to side with Lord vader on this one. (Seasoned vets think alike, Eh?)
It was a well Composed story... The Images, Well,They were a bit of a suprise, Haven't seen one with pictures in a while.
Good Idea, But perhaps aim for a longer chapter.
-Paden
Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way
TyrannoWright
MemberCompsognathusMay-03-2015 10:20 AMIt's a Prologue, not a full-on chapter. The point is to highlight the most interesting parts of Rexy's life. This is only the beginning, as it lifts off where the movie ends. I'm sorry if this seemed too short, but the chapters will be much longer than before.
Sci-Fi King25
MemberAllosaurusMay-03-2015 12:37 PMNice job! I can't wait for the next part. :)
“Banana oil.”- George Takei, Gigantis: The Fire Monster
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