Tyrant king
MemberCompsognathusAug-15-2014 4:26 PMdagger walks around, looking for an apponent. he is still steaming mad about the loss of his mate and he will stop at nothing to sink his 7 inch claws into something. a male allosaurus is on the hunt, he hasnt eatin in weeks and he is 32 feet long and 3 tons . he finally finds something, a edmontosaurus he runs to it and bites it then finally kills it, but before he can dig in he is interupted by something...... he is in the utahraptor's turf and he looks around to see the raptor sraring down at him. and with out warning or hesitation he jumps at him then lands on his side and begins cutting through the diffrent lizzards tough hide
and the allo shakes then throws his smalller opponent off in then charges but the raptor is to fast and sidesteps and then leaps onto the side again then begins slashing and causing deep wounds,but alloturns his head and bites the side of the raptor then takes him off then throws him away but the raptor lands on his feet. and the allo charges, and dagger sidesteps but the allo expected this and lunged at him the bit his snount. dagger then pulls back his head, trying to free himself and begins slashing and then kicks out and drives the killing claw into his arm, allo roars in pain! dagger shakes the blood from his head. rhe allo attemps another charge but this time dagger stays put and the allo continues charging but dagger slashes him square in the face. allo roars in terror as he stands upright.
dagger takes advantage of this and leaps into the air and lands on the side of the allo then bites down on the back and begins slashing , tearing gaping wounds in the allo's side. the allo shakes him off then bites down on the raptors back and shakes, dagger screeches then begins slashing. allo then headbutts the raptor to the ground. dagger kicks him, sending his killing klaw into the chest. the allo takes a few gasps then falls over, dagger gets up then walks over to the dowend allo then puts his foot on the allo's neck. but dagger hears several bird like chirps, the allosaurs babies and they look very skinny
. this is a father allosaurs. dagger remebers when he was just 4 inches long and being a father once he knew it was diffucult and he gets off of him and lowers his head in signs of respect. and the allo gets up and limps away but gives one last glance back at dagger then nods, dagger nods back. he drags the ewdmonto carcas back where his mate and offspring await him. withe their care he will survive........dagger watches and vows to never let an enemy survie no mattes what...............................
Carnosaur
MemberCompsognathusAug-15-2014 5:26 PMNice improvement here..
however...
You stated before this thing is"Going on a rampage", which means it will win most - if not all of its conflicts, am i right? that being said, we already know the outcome, and that doesn't make these as fun to read
Nature doesn't deceive us; it is we who deceive ourselves.
Hiphopananomus
MemberCompsognathusAug-15-2014 6:08 PMI agree with carnosaur..
"Somewhere on this island is the greatest predator that ever lived. Second greatest predator must take him down."Roland Tembo"
"Jurassic park: The Lost World"