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MemberCompsognathusAug-15-2014 10:54 AMSpecial thanks to MrHappy for letting me to write this fight.
Giganotosaurus:
- nickname: Slayer
- lenght: 13m
- weight: 7t
apart from that he still need 1 or 2 year to reach it’s full size,Slayer is among the most deadliest predators.Only one predator bet with him.
Carcharodontosaurus
- nickname: Slasher
- lenght:13m
- weight: 7t
Slasher is and adult carcharodontosaurus, and he is the one who met with slayer and bet him. The only thing that saved his life is the experience that he got and his slightly bigger size,but that was a half year ago.
Begin!
This afternoon Slayer the giganotosaurus trying to catch his meal.He’s chasing an andesaurus that lost it’s herd.One bad step,and the sauropod slipped, and fall on the ground.The sauropod doesn’t move,it brobably broke it’s neck.Slayer walked to it and started to eat it.He just opened the andesaurus’s belly when he heard a familiar roar.He turned back and he saw that a carcharodontosaurus standing at the border of the jungle.
Slayer met with this carcharodontosaurus before,but he was only 12m long and 6t.He got the scars on his face from him,but he was lucky because that hit could easily blind him to one eye.The carcharodontosaurus was Slasher,he doesn’t met with Slayer since he luckily bet him.The two look at each other for a moment,examing the other.Than both start to run toward the other.
Before they could hit the other Slayer dodge and hit the side of Slasher.Slasher fall over and roll on the ground.He quickly stood up and growling at Slayer.He recognized that Slayer become stronger than him.He decided to use the same tactic that he used previously.He started to run in zigzag,trying to confuse Slayer,but he recognized what Slasher doing and rushes him.Slasher just dodged him and grabbed his tail.Slayer roared in pain.
Slayer freed his tail and hit Slasher’s head with it.Slasher get dizzy for a few moment.Than suddenly Slayer pushed him to a tree and than charged into Slasher’s side.Slasher roared in pain,he broke a few of his ribs.He need to do something,or Slayer will kill him.During that Slayer tried to grab Slasher’s neck, but he sidestepped and quickly grabbed Slayer’s neck.
Slayer roared in pain,but he quickly freed himself.Slasher made some bleeding wound,but because he grabbed Slayers neck in the wrong position he can’t make serious damage.Slasher is tired and seriously injured.Now he fight for his life.Slasher charged to Slayer,but he sidestepped and grabbed his neck.Slayer pushed Slasher to the ground while his teeth cut deep into Slasher’s neck.Slasher roared in pain.
Slayer wanted to finish Slasher when he heard noises around the Andesaurus carcass.Slayer turned back and saw some balaur eating from the carcass.The balaurs didn’t noticet that Slayer coming.He grabbed one of the and throw it into the jungle.The other balaurs ran away.He turned back to finish his job,but Slasher lost.
He saw some blood and footprint that lead into the jungle.He didn’t wasted the time to follow Slasher.He was hungry so he walked back to the carcass and enjoy his meal.
Winner:Giganotosaurus
The Carcharodontosaurus survived the encounter,but if the few Balaur don’t disturb the Giganotosaurus, the carcha dead.
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MemberCompsognathusAug-15-2014 10:56 AMNot bad. Little hard to follow though.
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexAug-15-2014 10:59 AMNice fight, wasn't rooting for either.
Paragraphs are nice for fights, as is spelling and grammar.
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MemberCompsognathusAug-15-2014 11:00 AMLord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexAug-15-2014 11:02 AMIf you just copy and paste it in, you have to add the paragraphs in before hitting start discussion. I know, it's inconvienient.
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Sniper
MemberCompsognathusAug-15-2014 11:03 AMLord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexAug-15-2014 11:06 AMWell, at this point, just hit edit discussion and then add the paragraphs and hit update. Not a problem, and now you know.
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MemberCompsognathusAug-15-2014 11:10 AMOh, and pics are always nice.
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MemberCompsognathusAug-15-2014 11:10 AMLord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexAug-15-2014 11:14 AMLooking forward to the updated version.
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Allotitan
MemberCompsognathusAug-15-2014 11:35 AMNice rooting for slayer
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MemberTyrannosaurus RexAug-15-2014 11:35 AMHe doesn't post much. He's been here since last summer or fall.
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Hiphopananomus
MemberCompsognathusAug-15-2014 11:37 AMNice fight, was rooting for slayer, exited to see the updated version.
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MemberCompsognathusAug-17-2014 3:30 AMFight updated,pictures and pharagraps added.i hope it's better now.
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexAug-17-2014 3:34 AMMuch better sniper, great work.
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