Utahraptor519
MemberCompsognathusAug-05-2014 4:43 AMNotice:
Because a didn't wrote a story from two days that's why i am writing two chapters today.If you did not read the seventh one go to my profile and click topics.
Right now Slash has been thrown away by a tornado and he is right now he is falling down.He saw a lake was there.Slash dived right toward the lake and with a huge splash he landed.Slash came out of the water and started searching for his pack.Slash is first time alone but it does not mean that that he is afraid of being alone.Slash looked around if there is any sign of his brothers.
Fire's pack is looking for Slash all around.Fire saw a cliff.The echos will be heared through the area.Fire quickly ran till the cliff's edge.He roared as loud as he could.Slash heared it and ran towards the voice as he knew it can only be Fire's voice.He soon came at there and Fire's pack again came together.
Fang tooth also heared the noise and he also came.Fang tooth attacked.Fang tooth said to Fire that this would be your final battle and Fire told that why don't you say that to yourself.Fire's pack also attacked.Brow swiped his tail and now Fang tooth's jaws have started to bleed.Slash,Stinger and Scare where ripping,tearing and slashing through his skin.Fang tooth's whole body was bleeding now.Fang tooth ran away and it seems that he will not battle with Fire's pack for years.
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexAug-05-2014 11:09 AMNice chapters (yes, I read the other one, just commenting for both here), looking forward to the next.
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