Utahraptor519
MemberCompsognathusJul-31-2014 4:53 AMFive years have passed since Fire and his brothers left their parents forever.One day,it was a dark night.Fire,Slash,Stinger and Scare got hungry during mid night.They soon had gone for hunting.They soon found an iguanodon but he was an only lone one and he was a complete adult.Fire and his pack made a plan.The plan was Stinger,Scare and Slash would ambush the prey and then Fire will come and they all will form a like that position from which the iguanodon would be surrounded.
Slash,Scare and Stinger charged at the iguanodon and started chasing it.Soon Fire came and they all formed the surrounding position.The iguanodon was completely surrounded.They all attacked together Slash attacked at the neck and the others attacked by the side.Soon Slash tore open the neck with his claws and the iguanodon fell down.
They all started eating it.Soon one acrocanthosaurus came but it was not Fang tooth.His name was Brow.It seemed to be that he is hungry and battle marks were showing he was having a bad time.Fire told Brow to come and have a bite.Then they even saw the he was having a broken jaw.Slash tore open a huge part of the skin and Brow came and started eating.Soon the sun rised.
Fire and his brothers and Brow were going some where going some where.Brow asked Fire where we are going and he said to Brow that you will know soon.They plucked some flowers from the way.They reached the cliff where his father had done his final battle.Foot prints told marks were going to the cliff's edge.His father's were there too.At the end of the cliff,one half foot print showed that Razor had died.The flowers which they had plucked.They threw those flowers down the cliff and Fire and his brothers sent their messages down with roar wjich echoed through the cliff.
Brow asked that what happned down there.Fire and his brothers told that Fang tooth sent his father at there.Brow told that he could help and Fire sent another message to the heavens for his father and the message was that he will kill Fang tooth.
JRR
MemberCompsognathusJul-31-2014 9:38 AMgood chapter utha :)
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexJul-31-2014 2:10 PMGood chapter as usual, looking forward to the next one.
Jack of all trades. Master of none
Hiphopananomus
MemberCompsognathusJul-31-2014 2:40 PMgood chapter.
"Somewhere on this island is the greatest predator that ever lived. Second greatest predator must take him down."Roland Tembo"
"Jurassic park: The Lost World"