Utahraptor519
MemberCompsognathusJul-28-2014 10:49 PMFire and his brothers were learning how to hunt down their prey because today they were going to learn how to hunt.Soon his parents called him and his brothers were called by their parents.They started first started searching and then they found a group of iguanodons.The parents told the juviniles to stay back and watch.They soon charged at one of the iguanodon.
Razor and Sharp leaped at iguanodon.Razor wastearind the neck an Sharp wag piercing the back legs.Soon the iguanodon weakended and fell down Razor and Sharp got away.They soon called their juviniles..They all started eating the dead iguanodon but only after 20 minutes of that.An acrocanthosaurus named Fang tooth.He roared at the utahraptors.Razor and Sharp stood in front of their juviniles to protect them.
Fang tooth attacked the utahraptors.Razor and Sharp tell their juviniles to take cover.Sharp tried to attack but Fang tooth bited and grabed her in his huge jaws and throwed her in a tree.Fire,his brother and his father had no choice exeept of running away.They ran away leaving the body of Fire's mom behind.
Something Real
MemberTyrannosaurus RexJul-29-2014 5:35 AMUTAHRAPTOR519 -Very interesting! I greatly enjoyed the emphasis you placed on the family unit within your story. It's extremely sad that Fire lost his mother! Thank you ever so much for sharing this with us! :)
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexJul-29-2014 6:36 AMNice chapter, looking forward to the next one.
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Hiphopananomus
MemberCompsognathusJul-29-2014 6:47 AMNice chapter
"Somewhere on this island is the greatest predator that ever lived. Second greatest predator must take him down."Roland Tembo"
"Jurassic park: The Lost World"
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MemberCompsognathusJul-30-2014 6:30 AMNice chapter.
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