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Scarface's 90 MYA ancestors story: Chapter #1

Hiphopananomus

MemberCompsognathusJuly 27, 20141317 Views9 Replies

An egg is steering, it shakes from side to side. The mother of the egg watches in joy, she decides that she will give her son a hand. She picks up the egg in her mouth, she puts the egg in between her teeth, she slowly applies a small amount of pressure.

 

She stops when the shell cracks, she lowers her head and uses her tong to gently roll the egg back in the nest. The egg shell breaks open, the little Giganotosaurus stumbles out, his name is Blade for his blade like teeth. He looks up at his mother, her name is Flor. Blade stumbles around the nest, Flor looks at him in joy, Blade surveys the nest he notices another egg.

 

Blade looks at the egg for a moment. The egg starts to move around, Flor picked up the egg and using her teeth she cracks it open. Flor lowers her head and rolls the egg back into the nest. The Giganotosaur pushs her way out of the egg, her name is Pradera. Suddenly, the ground started to shake, pebbles bounce up and down over and over again, the sound was getting closer, Blade and Pradera looked around in fear.

 

Flor stood up, she looked around she sighed in relief as she saw it was just her mate, Crusher. Crusher nuzzled Flor, Crusher lowered his head and spits out some chewed up flesh for Blade and Pradera. They gobble up the meat fast. After they finish eating they fell asleep. Blade woke up, he stood up he saw that Pradera was still asleep, Crusher was gone and Flor was sleeping under a near by tree.

 

Blade heard a high pitched screech, he knew it wasn't far, Blade's curiosity made it to tempting not to investigate, he started to walk in the direction were the noise was coming from. He walked through a bush and he saw the local gang of Buitreraptors their leader FangClaw looked at Blade and hissed Blade looked at FangClaw in confusion he didn't know what a hiss meant, he hasn't learned the signs of aggression Yet.

 

Blade walked over, FangClaw gave the order for his pack to charge! One of the raptors leaped at Blade but, was stoped dead in her tracks when, Flor grabbed the raptor in her jaws and smashed the raptor against the ground. FangClaw and his pack ran off. Flor picked up Blade and returned to the nest.

"Somewhere on this island is the greatest predator that ever lived. Second greatest predator must take him down."Roland Tembo"

"Jurassic park: The Lost World"

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JRR
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Great Story Adam, But the name pradera dosen't seem apropiate

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Hiphopananomus
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Thanks!

Why doesn't the name seem appropriate?  

it means meadow in Spanish.

 

"Somewhere on this island is the greatest predator that ever lived. Second greatest predator must take him down."Roland Tembo"

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I speack spanish and pradera is never used as a name, in fact i bealive its one of the baned names in a state, i would preafered if she whas called Rosa, Azusena, Violleta, Margarita, clavel, but its your story you can do whatever you whant :)

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Hiphopananomus
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I'm going to stick with Pradera!

"Somewhere on this island is the greatest predator that ever lived. Second greatest predator must take him down."Roland Tembo"

"Jurassic park: The Lost World"

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Nice start, looking forward to more. 

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Good start.

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Thanks Rex Fan And MrHappy!

"Somewhere on this island is the greatest predator that ever lived. Second greatest predator must take him down."Roland Tembo"

"Jurassic park: The Lost World"

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Good start. Looking forward to the next.

Keep in mind that many people have died for their beliefs; it's actually quite common. The real courage is in living and suffering for what you believe in. -Brom-

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Stick with Pradera all ya want, it's your story! It's see,s peaceful and pretty and all that mushy stuff. I like it. And you're apparently an outlaw, so have fun trying to escape the country running from the law. ;)

I didn't know your name was Adam.

GREAT JOB...um, ADAM!

*I say insecurely*

Youre fat, and I'm not sugarcoating it cause you'd probably eat that too.

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