Hiphopananomus
MemberCompsognathusJul-12-2014 7:07 AMChapter 2
It had been, several months since the gailmimus incident, Scarface had gained many hunting skills since then. He actually managed to take down several galis in the past few months. Scarface's mother has been gone for almost 5 hours, he was starting to get worried. But, it wasn't like he could do anything if she was in trouble.
Then out of the blue, Scarface's mother appeared. She had a small hadrosaur in her mouth. As she dropped it the ground started to shake. Scarface, looked behind his mother and saw a stampede of hadrosaurs. Scarface was terrified he'd never seen so many hadrosaurs at once.
Scarface's mother didn't understand why they were doing this but, then she saw 2 large tyrannosaurus chasing them. She knew, that they would kill her family if they didn't leave. She started to move her children but, was interrupted when the two rexs roared at her. Now that the hadrosaurs were gone she was the only meal in sight.
Scarface didn't want his mother to have to fight these two monsters on her own but, scolder grabbed him and pulled him into a large tree trunk. Scarface's mother stood tall ready to fight to the death. The larger of the two rexs charged, Scarface's mother side stepped and then head butted the rex in its flank.
The other rex charged Scarface's mother went for a side step but the other rex bit her ankle. She roared in pain and the pain got worse when the other rex grabbed a hold of her shoulder. She roared in agony Scarface needed to stop them but, there was nothing he could do.
"Somewhere on this island is the greatest predator that ever lived. Second greatest predator must take him down."Roland Tembo"
"Jurassic park: The Lost World"
JRR
MemberCompsognathusJul-12-2014 7:24 AMnice story HPP, with that child hood scar face will hate trexes for ever.
Hiphopananomus
MemberCompsognathusJul-12-2014 7:30 AMThanks Catzilla
"Somewhere on this island is the greatest predator that ever lived. Second greatest predator must take him down."Roland Tembo"
"Jurassic park: The Lost World"
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexJul-12-2014 8:57 AMNice job, looking forward to the next chapter.
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Hiphopananomus
MemberCompsognathusJul-12-2014 9:00 AMThanks, MrHappy
"Somewhere on this island is the greatest predator that ever lived. Second greatest predator must take him down."Roland Tembo"
"Jurassic park: The Lost World"
Alphadino65
MemberTriceratopsJul-12-2014 11:45 AMThat was a decent cliff hanger. Any unusual plot twists in the third chapter that can be expected?
Hiphopananomus
MemberCompsognathusJul-12-2014 1:54 PMmaybe.....
"Somewhere on this island is the greatest predator that ever lived. Second greatest predator must take him down."Roland Tembo"
"Jurassic park: The Lost World"
UCMP 118742
MemberCompsognathusJul-13-2014 1:30 PMGood chapter. I personally would make them a bit longer, but that's probably just me.
Keep in mind that many people have died for their beliefs; it's actually quite common. The real courage is in living and suffering for what you believe in. -Brom-