Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-08-2014 10:53 PMI hope everyone enjoys this chapter. Took a coupel of days to make, but I tried the best I could. Please comment once done, if you aren't that lazy...
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THE ADVENTURES OF TOM: CHAPTER 5: THE GUEST
Raphael was looking at Tom, noticing that Tom was off thinking away at something. After a very tense and awkward 60 seconds, Tom looked at Raphael in pity. Raphael looked sort of like Thomas did when Thomas said he felt excluded from Society. Tom couldn’t help but pity the poor bastard. Tom then turned back into human form and took a step away from Raphael.
Tom then felt a surging pain in his heart, it was like boiling hot coffee came into his heart and went throughout his whole body. He rolled on the floor, writhing in pain.
Raphael looked at the others, confused, of what to do.
After about 30 seconds, the pain stopped and Tom felt fine again. HE got up, only to fall back down again, where he vomited. He got up again, and then felt fine again, just like normal. That was weird, though… He didn’t recall eating anything recently… He then remembered he hadn’t eaten anything in days by now… God was he hungry…
“Okay then, I have now decided what I will do to you as punishment for your actions.” Said Tom.
Raphael and the others widened their eyes and stared back at each other, surprised by this statement. After all some boy transformed into a dinosaur thingy, was about to kill Raphael, then turned back into a human, and then started to go through what looked like extreme heart pain, then got up, fell, vomited, then got back up again like nothing had just happened.
"I ssssaaiiidddddddd that I decided what your punishment will be. I want you to take me to your tribe, as a GUEST, not a MURDER VICTIM. Now, I want to be treated with respect and food. And water. And a bed. And entertainment. And… supplies. And possible medical treatment… yeah… please… I MEAN NOW!” Said Tom.
The others were still very confused on what the hell was going on, they looked at Tom, dazed at what just happened. Maybe this guy needed some sleep and food… Yah that was a good idea. After all, Raphael and the others had no choice to say no to him, so they agreed to take Tom to the Tribe.
While walking, they said nothing to each other. Raphael knew he couldn't lie to his father about how they failed to complete the task to adulthood, and that he, George, and Katy would become “dishonorables” from the tribe. Tom was, of course, going to tell the story to the chief… the chief was his dad… This was going to be bad…
During the short but awkward walk, Raphael thought about what had happened to Tom… He had heart pain and then vomited…
And there was only one condition of how that could happen… They called the disease the Devil’s Sickness. It was incurable… Anyone who had gotten it was doomed to die…
But it couldn’t be…
“I’ll just wait for things to flow along…” Thought Raphael.
Yah, that’s what he would do…
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
DinoSteve93
MemberCompsognathusJul-09-2014 1:47 AMGreat chapter, it seems like the poor Tom is doomed :(
Good job
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MemberTyrannosaurus RexJul-09-2014 3:55 AMNice job, looking forward to what's going to happen.
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JRR
MemberCompsognathusJul-09-2014 6:23 AMgreat job raptor, tom has his days counted
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-09-2014 10:00 AMThanks guys. yes he does, now the question is WHEN it's all gonna happen...
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-09-2014 10:07 AMI hope chapter 6 may be posted before I go to bed, in about 12 hours.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-09-2014 9:17 PMChapter 6 will hopefully be posted in about 12 hours, when it will be 9 AM for me.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Gojira2K
MemberCompsognathusJul-10-2014 7:25 AMGreat chapter. Poor Tom, I liked him.
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