Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-01-2014 3:24 PMWell since my new story is coming soon, I have decided to start today and just post a chapter after I'm done. I think it's better this way, because then I get to see what the readers want to see happen, which charcater sthey want to see alive, etc. Now, I hope I can release today or tomorrow, but here is kep oints to help you remember more of the story.
-Levy has just died moments before the story even starts.
-Gary and Derek, the officials working at Area-401, were arguing. Derek accidentally killed Levy, meaning to sudate him, and they were supposed to keep Levy ALIVE. So Gary was yelling at Derek. What happens to them will hopefully be told soon enough.
-Tom ran into a forest after Levy died.
-Tom still has Thomas's diary, so we will see what he does with that
Charcter Descriptions
I am doing this to remind you more of how the characters are.
Gary- Very serious guy, and he co-works with Derek, mainly because he feels bad for Derek. He is most of the time silent.
Derek- Very young, he joined the government because he had no other options sicne his family disowned him, he is also considered stupid by the others at Area-401.
Tom- Very realistic tyoe of person. He never falls into false security and hope, and never gets into self-denial when he has the chance. He also gets very emotional a lot of times. He is named after Thomas.
And many new characters to come. This story will be ling, mind you.
Please comment on your thoughts, it really does help when I know people would like to rea dmy story!!!
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
JRR
MemberCompsognathusJul-01-2014 3:28 PMtom should fall in depresion affter his friend died and that he killed a security guard so he tries to kill himself, but something in the diary has made him like life again
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-01-2014 3:31 PMAll will be revealed soon. Thanks Catzilla for giving me an idea of what some readers want to see happen.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
JRR
MemberCompsognathusJul-01-2014 3:45 PMwhy do you post them on your site instead of here, that whay more pepole will read it so far im the only one that has comented on your story
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-01-2014 3:47 PMNo, those two stories were written months ago. I was just re-posting them so people could read them all at once if they haven't or just wanted to re-read it.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-01-2014 3:47 PMLook at my older discussions, I post chapters on this forum.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-01-2014 3:51 PMAlmost done with chapter 1.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Gojira2K
MemberCompsognathusJul-01-2014 4:04 PMCan't to see the next chapter. This all sounds good so far.
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-01-2014 4:05 PMThanks Gojira. A couple more minutes to Chapter one is done. I ahve messaged PRimal King via e-mail if he wants to be the first to read it since he doesn't have many chances to visit the forums.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexJul-01-2014 5:41 PMLooking forward to the nect story.
Jack of all trades. Master of none
Sci-Fi King25
MemberAllosaurusJul-01-2014 5:48 PMThis could be interesting.
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Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-01-2014 6:11 PMThanks guys. CHapter 1 is now ready, will post it tomorrow when everyone is active.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexJul-01-2014 6:13 PMLooking forward to tomorrow then.
Jack of all trades. Master of none
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-01-2014 6:14 PMThanks for your support.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-01-2014 11:37 PMOkay well got 2 chapters done and will tyr to start chapter 3. It's midnight for me right now.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-01-2014 11:43 PMAlso, just to let you all know, this story will have a much darker tone, especially chapter 2.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
DinoSteve93
MemberCompsognathusJul-02-2014 12:06 AMDefinitely looking forward to it :)
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Something Real
MemberTyrannosaurus RexJul-02-2014 2:07 AMRAPTOR-401 - This sounds very neat! I'm looking forward to having a read when it's finished! :)
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusJul-02-2014 10:49 AMThanks Something Real and DinoSteve. Chapter has been posted a couple of minutes ago, actuallly.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
DinoSteve93
MemberCompsognathusJul-02-2014 12:44 PMWait wait wait..... wheeeeen did yoou beat me at it? I had faaar more than you.... this is sad... :'(
Now on a serious note, well done. I should keep up now :P
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