JP: Plotchangers: S1E1- Muldoon Survives

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Sci-Fi King25

MemberAllosaurusJun-30-2014 7:07 AM

Robert Muldoon, Jurassic Park's game warden, aims his SPAS-12 at a Velociraptor. He knew that they were hunting, so he sent Ellie Sattler to go to the power shed while he stayed to fend off the raptors. Right when Muldoon is about to shoot, another raptor, the Big One, bursts her head out of the clearing and snarls.

"Clever girl" Muldoon says as the Big One is about to lunge. However, before she can, a green glob lands on her cheek. She hisses and looks in the direction of which the glob came from. She sees a Dilophosaurus whth its frill open. The smaller carnivore hisses and leaps onto the Big One, but the other Velociraptor comes in and attacks the Dilophosaurus. As Muldoon runs off, both raptors quickly finish off the Dilophosaurus.

“Banana oil.”- George Takei, Gigantis: The Fire Monster

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Sci-Fi King25

MemberAllosaurusJun-30-2014 7:08 AM

What did you guys think? Mr.Happy, I knew you would like this one.

“Banana oil.”- George Takei, Gigantis: The Fire Monster

Lord Vader

MemberTyrannosaurus RexJun-30-2014 7:11 AM

Nice. Perhaps, next time, you could elaborate on how it would change the plot. Still, nice job on this, it saves Muldoon without changing the Rex's epic finale.

Originally, the scene was supposed to have Hammond shoot the Raptors, not Rexy taking them out. It would have been better if Muldoon had taken out the Raptors (as opposed to Hammond). If they had Muldoon kill the Rex in the movie, I'd have mixed feelings about it, but only a badass can kill a Rex.

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Sci-Fi King25

MemberAllosaurusJun-30-2014 7:13 AM

Thanks for the advice. I heard about the original ending once. The writers and director changed it because they felt Rexy needed to be in the movie one last time.

“Banana oil.”- George Takei, Gigantis: The Fire Monster

Something Real

MemberTyrannosaurus RexJun-30-2014 7:21 AM

SCI-FI KING25 - That was fun! I've always felt that Muldoon's death in the movie was a cop-out - he was one of my absolute favorite characters in the book! :)

Lord Vader

MemberTyrannosaurus RexJun-30-2014 7:21 AM

I know, and you're welcome.

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MemberCompsognathusJun-30-2014 8:36 AM

I liked Muldoon, but I'm content with the ending they had. It's really hard to beat this...

But I like how the Dilo pulled a Rexy and saved someone from the raptors :)

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