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MemberCompsognathusMay-09-2014 7:40 PMBecause the Challange is to start in a mere four hours... I thought I would add this. It will help your overall score, If you can shape your story to follow hammonds visit. *Don't worry, We'll see plenty Of hammond of the next few days*.
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Hammond and Patel, Walked through the doors of the new visitor center, Hammond, Was astonished.
"My Boy" Hammond said, Gripping Patels shoulder "You've done a marvelous job..."
"Thank you sir, We kept some of the original designs, And bits from the Original Centre, However, We did unfortunately have to demolish it..." Patel said, Leading hammond into the Large Futurist Visitor Center.
Hammond sighed, He truly Did love the old visitor center, A fair amount of it, had been modeled after his own home.
"However... You'll be quite excited to see what we kept" Patel said, With a childish smile.
Hammond was shocked. Before him, Stood the same T-rex and Apotasaur Skeleton, From the original Centre. Aswell as many other aspects. Hammond had seen the original designs... They were completely White. The colour scheme of the new Centre Matched the old one.
"By god Patel... " Hammond said, Awestruck
"I knew you'd be impressed John... Come, I need to show you Our staff..."
As hammond entered the Cafeteria, The staff rushed out of there seats and Lined up near a wall.
"Do you invest as much time Training your staff as you do Training dinosaurs?" Hammond asked, Purposely trying to sound like and ass.
"Yes. Now, Lets look at who you'll be seeing out in the field today!" Patel said, Clapping his hands together.
"Here we have our: Head Game warden, One of our Lead Animal Handelers, Our Park bioligists, and Head keepers,." Patel Said "We'll be seeing more, But these are our Usuals..."
Hammond was Giddy as a Child, About to go to the Dinosaur Museum. But this time, There was actual Dinosaurs.
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Your stories should tie in from here... Or the Prior Chapter of Hammonds visit.
Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way
Gojira2K
MemberCompsognathusMay-09-2014 7:48 PMDo we have to follow the order in which the staff are listed? And are the staff all there or is he just listing who they are going to be seeing on the tour? I have almost finished mine, so it will be easy to fix.
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.
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MemberCompsognathusMay-09-2014 7:54 PMNah, You can do whatever.
I stated that, hammond was introduced to some of the "Regulars" For a reason, They are the ones that get around the park more...
You can do whatever, It'll just be bonus points, If it fits in with the prequels.
Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way
Gojira2K
MemberCompsognathusMay-09-2014 8:03 PMI will tie it in, because it will add more detail to my story. One more question, did Hammond go see Dinosaurs first or did he visit the staff first?
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.
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MemberCompsognathusMay-09-2014 8:15 PMHammond, Goes on a VIP Staff only tour.
I will tie hammonds Tour in all together, with what you, {The challanged} Write.
Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way
Gojira2K
MemberCompsognathusMay-09-2014 8:20 PMCool, I will post mine in the morning. Maybe noon.
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexMay-10-2014 4:08 AMNice. Anyhow, decided to use Hamada in my story.
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