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the Tyrant of Alberta: Ch.1

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MemberCompsognathusMay-05-2014 5:54 PM

A new Beginning

The incessant pecking woke the emaciated tyrant. She opened one bleary eye, revealing the harsh sunlight and the silhouette of a pterosaur. It squealed at her, resuming its attempt to eat her. She stood up, the small animal was determined, though. It pecked at her long skinny legs. The strong beak beating against her scaly flesh made a dull thudding sound with each determined peck.

the thing was becoming a nuisance, and looking more like a meal with each passing second. She had not eaten in at least two weeks. 

She eyed the tiny flying menace, and with a quick lunge, grabbed it by the head. She shook her snout violently from side to side, ending its life. The Albertosaurus swallowed it in one impressive movement, and eyed the terrain around her. 

The lava had cooled, leaving behind a layer of coal grey earth. The carcass of the Lythronax  she had killed lay half buried under the solidified mass.  

The lava glowed an angry red just below the surface, steam ushering itself up from small fissures. 

Gingerly, the Albertosaurus got off the boulder. She put one foot on the scoria, and seeing it did not collapse, put her full weight on it. She took careful steps over to her dead rival, and nibbled at his flesh.  

It had become rancid and decomposed over the two week period, but it was a meal. She swallowed it down as fast as she could. 

For miles, all she could see was barren gray. The lava had taken out her valley home. 

A warm, sticky liquid was oozing its way down her neck, the bite wounds of the Lythronax had reopened. She shook her head, the blood flinging onto the cold grey earth. The rhythmic dripping danced in her ears.

She knew she needed to find a water source, or she would not last much longer. She remembered the small stretch of river by her nesting area and gingerly, she walked back the way she came. Before this nightmare unfolded.. 

Nature doesn't deceive us; it is we who deceive ourselves.

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x_paden_x

MemberCompsognathusMay-05-2014 7:18 PM

*Claps hands together once*

 

It had the name Alberta in the title...

 

Had to read it.

 

 

Good job, Kinda dark, Not the usual start to a story but hey? Good start.

 

-Paden (Acting with an Eleventh Doctor Outlook on this post)

Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way

Lord Vader

MemberTyrannosaurus RexMay-05-2014 7:21 PM

Nice job. Thank you for being the first person (besides myself) who DIDN'T give Albertosaurus a slow, painful death after a fight. 

Jack of all trades. Master of none

Carnosaur

MemberCompsognathusMay-05-2014 8:06 PM

thanks guys. The tone of this one is gonna be kinda dark, but it's something new...you guys will like it!

Nature doesn't deceive us; it is we who deceive ourselves.

Alphadino65

MemberTriceratopsMay-05-2014 9:06 PM

A very well-written start to a new story.

The dark tone will be a nice angle.

UCMP 118742

MemberCompsognathusMay-06-2014 1:05 PM

Great start, I like the dark tone.

Keep in mind that many people have died for their beliefs; it's actually quite common. The real courage is in living and suffering for what you believe in. -Brom-

Rex Fan 684

MemberCompsognathusMay-06-2014 2:25 PM

Bandwagon, DARK TONE! Haha, nice way to kick it off.

"Men like me don't start the wars. We just die in them. We've always died in them, and we always will. We don't expect any praise for it, no parades. No one knows our names." ―Alpha-98

Carnosaur

MemberCompsognathusMay-06-2014 2:42 PM

thanks guys! i'm enjoying writing this one.

Nature doesn't deceive us; it is we who deceive ourselves.

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