JP Carnotaur
MemberCompsognathusApr-09-2014 3:48 PMMuldoon never really thought about having a good friend, especially that he was a hunter and Nick was a documentarist and photographer, but they got along great. Sometimes they would leave the park and go a club or a restaurant. They had fun. The good thing was Patel loved his work and offered him a a full time job at Jurassic World. Nick took it and got a suit next to Muldoon's.
The parks grand opening was tomorrow, and all the staff had their hands full. Patel was testing the tour cars and Arnold was fixing some electrical issues. Muldoon was taking his jeep around the park followed by his team to check the fences. Nick was keeping watch on the dinosaurs from one of the viewing towers and documenting their activity. Muldoon pulled up to the Carnotaur paddock. The fences had been tampered with. Ever since Wu found out the Carnotaurs had a chameleon ability their was nothing but trouble. They weren't being picked up by the motion sensors and attacking the fences. Muldoon's team went in and put trackers on them while they were tranqed so they could monitor their movement. Suddenly one woke up and started chasing the men. They screamed as the dinosaur snapped at them Muldoon signaled them to run faster and started closing the heavy gate. Thankfully all the men made it and the job was finished. The Carnotaur slammed into the gate which was now electrified and got shocked. "That's what you get for attacking my men you stupid animal,"said Muldoon. Nick signaled him on the radio. "Is everyone okay?" "Yeah everyone made it out." Alright call me when you need me.
That night Muldoon got in his suit at about 10:30 p.m and he went to sleep right away. The Carnotsur attack wasn't the only thing that happened that day. They had to retrieve the carcass of the pterosaur from the Spinosaur exhibit, the metal stairway in the Rex exhibit and the fallen tree the stegosaur smashes earlier. It was a long day and Muldoon needed his sleep, tomorrow would be the busiest day of his career.
Sorry for a short chapter tommorows will be longer
The giant gate that read Jurassic Park was ruined. The gates where torn off and their where pieces of them all over the ground. Muldoon saw herbivore foot prints maybe Parasaurs or the Trike herd W
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MemberCompsognathusApr-09-2014 4:34 PMNah, I like Long chapters (which is why Most FBR things take either a really dedicated weekend, Or a strand of weeks working on it)
But short, Daily chapters, Are better then long, Monthly Chapters...
Good chapter, Even though it was short...
Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusApr-09-2014 4:38 PMGood chapter. It was a bit short, buy it's your story do whatever is more convienent for you.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexApr-09-2014 4:53 PMGood chapter as usual.
Jack of all trades. Master of none
UCMP 118742
MemberCompsognathusApr-10-2014 2:55 AMGreat job.
Keep in mind that many people have died for their beliefs; it's actually quite common. The real courage is in living and suffering for what you believe in. -Brom-