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MemberCompsognathusApr-07-2014 12:52 PMChapter 4
The Plague
It’s now high summer. The weather has been more humid than usual. Synca is getting uncomfortably hot. He leaves his still sleeping family to try and find relief. After some walking, he finds a lake. At first, it’s a dream come true. He dives right in. He feels ten times better. As he gets out, he shakes his dripping body to dry. That’s when it happens. He feels an unbearable itch all over his body. He looks to see he’s covered in mosquitoes. Synca stares in horror as the lake becomes shrouded by thousands of the blood suckers. The unusually high humidity has caused mosquito numbers to skyrocket and the already swampy environment is not helping.
Synca takes off and runs as far from the lake of horror as he can. He’s got to find a way to get rid of the insects. He tries scratching himself against a tree. No good. They hold fast. He rolls all over the ground. Still nothing. Then, it hits him. He remembers a hot spring not far from here. He sets off for the spring.
When he finds it, the spring becomes the greatest thing in his life. He rushes into the steaming water. The boiling temperature has no affect on him. He doesn’t care how hot it is. But it does affect the bugs. The mosquitoes die instantly and he finally cleanses his body of them. Even though he is now clean, he stays in the spring for nearly an hour. When he finally emerges, he vows to steer clear of any body of water that is home to the vicious swarms of mosquitoes.
Now that he’s clean, he must find food. Synca begins to search for something that’ll satisfy him. The forest is unusually quiet today, except for the buzzing of the blood suckers. There’s barely anything moving. Finally, he finds the carcass of a young hadrosaur. Synca approaches it and does a quick look around. He’s alone. As he bends to eat, he senses something’s wrong. He sniffs the carcass. This hadrosaur did not die naturally. The smell of disease is quite obvious. Then, Synca sees it. He looks in the stomach cavity and finds thousands of mosquitoes. That’s when he realizes it. Malaria.
The high number of mosquitoes and humid air has made malaria a big problem. Hundreds of dinosaurs are dropping dead from it. Synca backs away from the carcass. He has to go back to his family. His parents will know what to do. He heads back in full sprint. When he enters the clearing they’re sleeping in, he stops dead in his tracks. They won’t be waking up. His entire family lies before him, their bodies articulated in their death throes and covered in mosquitoes. The site is too much to bear. It can’t be real. Synca looks away, then looks back, expecting to see his family playing and alive. But they aren’t playing and alive. They are gone. The plague has claimed five more victims. Synca looks from Fog, to Linea and Pratum. Then, his gaze falls upon his parents. His parents. The one’s that taught him everything he knows. The one’s that protected him. The one’s he thought were invincible. Gone. As a tear leaves Synca’s eye, he runs. He does not stop running. He must leave his home. He heads north, away from the plague. Away from Texas.
Miles away, Scarface watches as his parents riggle in agony as they become covered in mosquitoes. He almost grins as he watches them suffer. Diablo, the killer of killers, looks to his son for help. Scarface does not budge. Then, he and Ripper succomb to the disease and go limp. Scarface turns and walks away. He feels no remorse. He just walks. Like Synca, he too heads north. As both dinosaurs move on, it becomes inedible that their paths will cross again.
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexApr-07-2014 1:06 PMGood chapter as usual. Man, Scarface is an asshole, I hope something terrible happens to him.
Jack of all trades. Master of none
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MemberCompsognathusApr-07-2014 1:11 PMThanks. Diablo and Ripper had raised a born killer and a lover of suffering.
PS- I should note it's unknown how malaria would have affected dinosaurs. What was seen here is totally my imagination and own thoughts.
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexApr-07-2014 1:15 PMThat's what I thought.
See what I did there? With hoping something horrible happesn to Scarface.
Jack of all trades. Master of none
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MemberCompsognathusApr-07-2014 1:18 PMYeah, I got that ;)
Alphadino65
MemberTriceratopsApr-07-2014 5:00 PMThis is your best chapter yet.
Many times we forget that it isn't only other dinosaurs/creatures that kills our characters in these stories, or who let them live. The real world is very different than that. Disease is a large factor in survival for all organisms and you depicted it with a great style. Whether or not malaria really did affect prehistoric creatures this way or not is not known, but I'm willing to bet that it wreaked havoc on whatever dinosaur was in the vicinity, just like in this chapter.
I am truly surprised that Scarface could be that heartless. I know that he is a sadistic murderer like his parents, but to have him relish his parents' suffering and deaths is enough to send chills down my spine. I would have thought that Scarface would have felt sad that his parents died, but soon after felt the need to leave them in the past and head north.
This story is just getting juicier and richer the farther it goes.
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MemberCompsognathusApr-07-2014 5:58 PMThanks guys.
And Alpha, I truly appreciate what you said. I was gonna have Scarace simply kill his parents and put them out of their misery, but that seemed too merciful for him. Glad you like the story so far :)
Alphadino65
MemberTriceratopsApr-07-2014 10:01 PMYeah, killing Diablo and Ripper would have seemed a bit too merciful for him.
But if he did, wouldn't the mosquitos swarm Scarface as well?
Also, I just thought of something. When Diablo (and Ripper) were looking at Scarface for "help", could they have wanted Scarface to put them out of their misery? Just reading between the lines here, connecting the dots between your last comment and the story.
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MemberCompsognathusApr-08-2014 3:36 AMGreat chapter. Scarface really is an asshole.
Keep in mind that many people have died for their beliefs; it's actually quite common. The real courage is in living and suffering for what you believe in. -Brom-
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MemberCompsognathusApr-08-2014 1:21 PMThanks UCMP.
And Alpha, you're basically right.