JP Carnotaur
MemberCompsognathusApr-03-2014 11:51 AMJurassic Park San Diego
It's been 22 years since the incidents on Isla Nublar. Hammond has passed away, and InGen went bankrupt. Turns out the embryos Muldoon delivered where dead and Hammond lost control of InGen. Peter Ludlow took control of InGen and sent a team to Isla Sorna to get the dinosaurs,but they failed and Ludlow and almost all the crew where killed. Now a man named Patel of Patel Corp. had taken control of InGen. He is rebuilding the San Diego park and renaming it Jurassic World. Wu had managed to clone more dinosaurs after Site B was turned into a nature preserve and Patel made Robert the game warden. Arnold was back with the parks engineering and Gerry was now the vet.
The park was opening in a few days and they had all the issues of a zoo and a theme park. The animals were acting out, and the rides and other equipment weren't working right. Arnold had his hands full and Patel kept threatening to fire him. "Muldoon your needed at the raptor paddock. Their attacking each other." Muldoon got in his park jeep and drove over to the raptor paddock. This time they built the fences different. They dug a moat in the ground deep enough so the dinosaurs couldn't escape but Patel made sure the visitors could see the dinosaurs. Their where several workman surrounding the exhibit. Two of the three raptors where jumping on and biting each other and they couldn't get a good enough shot. The men reminded him of Rick. He worked at the original Jurassic Park and died saving many lives. He was given a memorial at Jurassic World and they had a photo of him and Hammond in the visitor center.
Muldoon aimed his tranq gun and shot one of the raptors in the back of the neck and after that shot the other in the chest. The raptors fell and he tranqed the other one so Gerry could get in their and check the wounds. Gerry arrived in a few minutes after that and looked at the raptors. Muldoon left and made sure the men stayed to watch Harding. He took one last look at the raptors and drove away.
The giant gate that read Jurassic Park was ruined. The gates where torn off and their where pieces of them all over the ground. Muldoon saw herbivore foot prints maybe Parasaurs or the Trike herd W
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MemberCompsognathusApr-03-2014 1:01 PMGood first chapter. Looking forward to the rest.
Keep in mind that many people have died for their beliefs; it's actually quite common. The real courage is in living and suffering for what you believe in. -Brom-
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MemberCompsognathusApr-03-2014 3:43 PMGood start, I'll have to keep a tag on this one ;)
Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way
Primal King
MemberCompsognathusApr-03-2014 4:14 PMGood start. Keep them coming. :)
"If you can't see it... It's already too late."
-Jurassic Apocalypse (by Paden)
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MemberAllosaurusApr-03-2014 4:19 PMNice start, willd efinetely read this story.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
JP Carnotaur
MemberCompsognathusApr-03-2014 5:36 PMThanks everyone. I hope you'll enjoy this continuation. I wanted to incorporate some JW concepts but don't want to copy everything. Thanks for reading!
The giant gate that read Jurassic Park was ruined. The gates where torn off and their where pieces of them all over the ground. Muldoon saw herbivore foot prints maybe Parasaurs or the Trike herd W