JP Carnotaur
MemberCompsognathusApr-01-2014 1:01 PMMuldoon beckoned the others to head towards the elevator. They slowly crept towards the elevator. The raptor was sniffing the air to catch a scent. Then two others came around the corner. They managed to get to the elevator and pressed the button. The doors opened and made a ringing noise. That got one of the raptors attention. They ran a full speed and one tackled Muldoon. The Barbasol can fell out of his pocket and Nedry ran and picked it up. Muldoon thought he was a dead man when the raptors eyes rolled to the top of its head. Muldoon turned and saw Arnold with the pistol in his hand. Gerry and Wu helped him up and to the elevator. The other two raptors charged at full speed. With all of his strength Muldoon shot the glass of the Mosasaur exhibit and water gushed in the doors closed and the elevator lifted before the water got in.
"That was close",Muldoon said with a sigh of relief. They walked to the jeep which stopped at the marine exhibit. The jeep that was in front of it was tossed into the building. They climbed in and the tour started again. "The tour is now ending we are now returning to the visitor center." Everything was calm till then their where only few dinosaurs and they where herbivores. The sun was just starting to set. Muldoon was a little banged up from the attack. Gerry and Jess bandaged his cuts. The tour vehicle stopped and the doors opened in front of the visitor center. They walked in and headed towards the helipad in the back when they where interrupted. The two Carnotaurs from earlier came through the gap in the wall the Rex made earlier. They cornered the group and snapped at them. Muldoon and Arnold had their guns at ready. The sound of an approaching helicopter filled the air. If they could run they may make it thought Muldoon. One of the Carnotaurs got in attack position Nedry was terrified. He tried to make a run for it, but the Carnotaur picked up Nedry and ripped him to pieces. Then out of nowhere the Tyrannosaur picked the Carnotaur up and slammed it into the ground. They stood in shock as the Rex instantly killed the Carnotaurus. The other attacked the Rex and it fought back. Something fell out of Nedry's pocket and it was the Barbasol can. Muldoon picked it up and they ran up to the helipad. They climbed in and listen to to Carnotaurs last roar. "Are their anymore survivors?" asked the pilot. "No just us." Said Muldoon.
The helicopter took off and they saw the last of Isla Nublar. The herds of herbivores where by the lake and their where carnivores stalking them. "We'll where going home" said Muldoon. The helicopter pilot spoke up " Mr. Hammond will be waiting for you at the base" Then two military jets flew towards the island and huge burst of flames covered the Island. "What are they doing?" Asked Muldoon. "Mr Hammond thought it was unsafe to keep them around he'll explain more when you arrive at the base.
The giant gate that read Jurassic Park was ruined. The gates where torn off and their where pieces of them all over the ground. Muldoon saw herbivore foot prints maybe Parasaurs or the Trike herd W
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MemberTyrannosaurus RexApr-01-2014 1:07 PMNice Chapter, looking forward to the next.
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MemberCompsognathusApr-01-2014 1:17 PMSame here.
Keep in mind that many people have died for their beliefs; it's actually quite common. The real courage is in living and suffering for what you believe in. -Brom-
JP Carnotaur
MemberCompsognathusApr-01-2014 1:23 PMThanks guy the next chapter is the last for part one but part two will be out shortly
The giant gate that read Jurassic Park was ruined. The gates where torn off and their where pieces of them all over the ground. Muldoon saw herbivore foot prints maybe Parasaurs or the Trike herd W
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MemberCompsognathusApr-01-2014 1:44 PMNice. Served Nedry right for betraying JP in the first place, haha.
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MemberTyrannosaurus RexApr-01-2014 2:04 PMNice, looking forward to part 2 then.
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