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Terrance's Story: Jurassic Park Chapter 17

Lord Vader

MemberTyrannosaurus RexMarch 29, 20141117 Views7 Replies

This Chapter and the next one are kinda short, but the two part finale is good length.

 

Terrance's Story: Jurassic Park Chapter 17

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Terrance and Thorn are lying down in the cement room. They are both making a quick recovery, and they are growing used to being fed and sleeping in the small room.

Hammond was walking with Muldoon. They were discussing what should be done with Terrance. "I say kill him before the park opens and sell his teeth as souvenirs. As for the rest of him, feed the parts to the other carnivores. They don't care if the meat comes from a farm animal or another dinosaur. Hell, I wouldn't be surprised if the little one were to dig in if we killed him now." "Robert, why do you want to kill him? You've been pretty touchy about the situation, and no matter what's said to you, you want him dead." "Just look at him. He's huge, he's got scars everywhere, and the left side of his face will scare just about anyone. One of the soldiers I was talking to even got freaked out when he saw him." "Have some sympathy Robert. He did save your life after all." "I know, but he was just as quickly ready to kill me instead of tackling one of the Sauropods." "That's just him being a predator. You should know that, predators will go for the easiest meal they can find." "I guess you have a point."

Terrance didn't understand a word that either of them said, but he looked at Thorn and went to sleep. Thorn was listening to the conversation, understanding simple words such as dead and kill.

"What makes you think the big Rex is male anyway?" "He's stubborn, won't take no for answer, he was a complete asshole to me when he first found me, and he does what he wants, when he wants." "Some females are like that." "Not to the degree that the Rex is. Male or not, that Rex is one tough son of a bitch, and it only cares for that little Rex." "Then why not have them both in the park? Look at them, it shows that the big, mean looking one has feelings, and that's what I want. I want to show that these dinosaurs are living things, that they care for one another, and that they are magnificent creatures."

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Good chapter. I had to laugh when Muldoon described why he thought that Terrance is a male.

Keep in mind that many people have died for their beliefs; it's actually quite common. The real courage is in living and suffering for what you believe in. -Brom-

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Great Chapter I hope Muldoon will decide to let Terrance live.

The giant gate that read Jurassic Park was ruined. The gates where torn off and their where pieces of them all over the ground. Muldoon saw herbivore foot prints maybe Parasaurs or the Trike herd W

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Thanks guys.

 

Carnotaur, Hammond wants Terrance to live, Hammond is the boss, so Muldoon has to do what Hammond wants him to. That and it wouldn't be much of a Terrance story if Terrance wasn't in it until the very end.

 

I'm doing sneak peek of JP: The Game Warden's Story at the end of this one.

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Great chapter. Can't wait for the sneak peek.

"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.

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Good chapter, as always. But I do have some advice. You should do what I did with my stories where everytime a different character said something, I presed eneter and made a new paragraph, and put "He/she said" at the end. It just makes it more simple and easy for people to read, you know what I mean? Just a suggestion.

IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!

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I know what you mean, but I'm pretty sure everyone can figure out who's talking, and pressing enter after EVERY SINGLE time someone says something just adds unnessesary length, and I can't use CTRL+V or whatever the shortcut is because I use an IPad. With the dialogue from this chapter, it would make it go from two or three minutes to post it, to ten minutes or more to post because I'd have to separate all the dialogue. If I had that kind of time in the morning, I'd either be sick or the weather was just plain miserable.

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Okay, just a suggestion.

IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!

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