JP Carnotaur
MemberCompsognathusMar-24-2014 12:22 PMThe jeep sped along the road. Nedry had calmed down after the attack and everything started going smooth. Their where no signs of any dinosaurs and things where quiet,to quiet. Then a rumbling sound filled the air. Muldoon stopped the jeep. "What the hell is that?" Then, out of the jungle came a heard of about seven or eight Triceratops. They were beautiful. The animals payed no attention the them what so ever until the juvinile came along. It was about four years old. It went up to the jeep and rammed into the door,probabley mistaking it as a odd looking tree or triceratops.Without thinking Muldoon honked the horn and then thats when the mother got involved.
The Triceratops came out of nowhere it charged into the car. It's horns impaled the doors and it lifted the jeep into the air. Then it threw it into a tree crippling the jeep. Then their was a panick. The whole group left except for the juvinile Triceratops. When Muldoon and Nedry came to their sences they saw what was happening. Out of the jungle came three dinosaurs. They where red with black stripes and glowing green eyes. They where maybe four feet tall. "What are they?" Asked Nedry. "Herrarasaurus. Their enclosure was by the raptors what are they doing out here?" Wondered Muldoon. One of the animals attempted to jump and the trike, but it got stabbed right through the stomache by the Triceratops' horns. That only created a distraction and the other two attack. Eventually they killed the trike and feasted.
The animals left into the jungle and Muldoon and Nedry climbed out of the jeep. "Now what are we going to do we can't just walk to the visitor center it's maybe a mile away from here." explained Nedry. "I'm not sure, maybe we can... Muldoon was interrupted by the voice of Richard Kelly. They looked behind them and a half destroyed tour car was approaching them heading back to the visitor center. They climbed in and listened to the naration. "Thank you for visiting Jurassic Park,we hope you enjoyed your tour. Remeber to visit the gift shop for all you Jurassic Park merchandise and check out the other attractions." Spared no expense " said Muldoon.
The giant gate that read Jurassic Park was ruined. The gates where torn off and their where pieces of them all over the ground. Muldoon saw herbivore foot prints maybe Parasaurs or the Trike herd W
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexMar-24-2014 12:54 PMGood chapter.
If you don't mind, I've already started a story in similar idea to this one. The title is "Jurassic Park: The Game Warden's Story." If you're interested in the first chapter, PM me since there seems to be an issue with you being PM'd.
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JP Carnotaur
MemberCompsognathusMar-24-2014 1:01 PMThat's fine Mr. Happy how do Ill try to PM.
The giant gate that read Jurassic Park was ruined. The gates where torn off and their where pieces of them all over the ground. Muldoon saw herbivore foot prints maybe Parasaurs or the Trike herd W
UCMP 118742
MemberCompsognathusMar-24-2014 1:46 PMNice chapter. Loved the part at the end.
Keep in mind that many people have died for their beliefs; it's actually quite common. The real courage is in living and suffering for what you believe in. -Brom-
Rex Fan 684
MemberCompsognathusMar-24-2014 2:01 PMGood job.
Gojira2K
MemberCompsognathusMar-24-2014 6:44 PMGood chapter. I like the part at the end.
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.
Primal King
MemberCompsognathusMar-24-2014 6:48 PMGreat chapter as always.
"If you can't see it... It's already too late."
-Jurassic Apocalypse (by Paden)