Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusMar-08-2014 7:42 PMA thanks to Gojira2K for proofreading this before posting and for DRAWING THE PICTURES FOR THIS STORY. So if you wondered who drew them, Gojira did. This chapter is again rather short, but the next one will be longer, I promise. Enjoy!
CHAPTER 3
Tom and Levy bolted to Thomas’s room. Tom opened the drawer and grabbed Thomas’s keys and diary. He also grabbed his pocket knife as well.
“If he had used the knife against Nick and stabbed him, what if things might have gone, you know, um… differently?” said Levy.
“Look, right now we have to book it, so let’s just run to the graveyard!” said Tom.
“Hey, you’re holding a book, and you said to book it. Get it!?” said Levy.
“Oh, Lev, you always thought every moment was an opportunity for some dumb-a*s pun.” said Tom, as he started to run away. Levy followed.
They arrived at the entrance to the graveyard. Tom got the keys and saw that there were 5 keys, all having words on them. Tom got the key that had the word ‘graveyard’ on it and opened the door. They locked the door behind them, hoping that by any chance at all the people who were coming wouldn’t have a key for the graveyard. In the graveyard were 7 graves.
Levy noticed a grave with “Levine” inscribed on it. On the grave was a picture of a blond man with sunglasses. The man looked like as if he were in his early to mid-thirties. Next to it was another picture of him, but he seemed to be in his mid-twenties. He also had blue eyes. Levy realized that he looked really similar to this Levine guy, and even his name was similar, Levy and Levine. Next to Levine in the second picture was a young man with blackish hair, about the same age, and with brown eyes. He presumed it was Thomas, because Thomas has, well, had the same eye color. Tom and Levy walked to the other graves.
Behind Levine’s grave were 6 graves, and the one that was on the left, read “Spike.” It had picture of a dinosaur with spikes.
The next one read “Catore.” It also had a picture.
The next one read “Snake-eyes”.
The next one read “Raptor401”.
(This one was actually drawn by x_paden_x)
The next one read “Stardust.”
The next one read “Archfiend.”
Tom realized that they had wasted 2 minutes and should be escaping than looking at graves.
“Come on, let’s go! Now!” yelled Tom.
Levy came to him. The whole graveyard was surrounded by a barbed-wire fence. Whoever built this place didn’t do too much to keep it safe from intruders. The fence was really loose. Tom turned into Dino-form. He started to bite the fence and tear it apart. After less than a minute, he ripped a giant hole big enough for him and Levy to escape. They started to run very quickly. They finally got a glimpse of what it was like to roam outside the walls of Area 401. Their expectations were high, because it turned out that Area 401 was located in the middle of a barren desert. After running for a straight 15 minutes, they looked back. No one had been chasing after them. They looked and saw that close to them a weird place.
http://grubshaw.deviantart.com/art/Future-city-91236562
They were about half a mile away from it.
Tom and Levy morphed back into humans.
“Tom, do you think that is… the… the-“Said Levy before being interrupted.
“The real world, yes, Levy, yes it is.” said Tom.
Chapter 4 might take some time, more things happening in my life now. If you wish to be a future proofreader, claim this positition in the comments section below.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
UCMP 118742
MemberCompsognathusMar-09-2014 5:54 AMNice chapter and good pictures.
Keep in mind that many people have died for their beliefs; it's actually quite common. The real courage is in living and suffering for what you believe in. -Brom-
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexMar-09-2014 6:57 AMGood chapter and good pictures indeed.
Jack of all trades. Master of none
Gojira2K
MemberCompsognathusMar-09-2014 12:39 PMDo you guys really think the pictures are good?
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusMar-09-2014 2:11 PMGojira, they were really good! From now on, pictures shall be in my story!
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Gojira2K
MemberCompsognathusMar-09-2014 2:22 PMYeah pictures make it more personnel.
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusMar-09-2014 2:26 PMAnd more detail and depth to the story.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Elite Raptor 007
MemberCompsognathusMar-14-2014 6:09 AMNice story and good picture, by the way, i wnat to proofread your next chapter.