Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusFeb-25-2014 6:39 PMChapter 1 is going to take QUITE some time for these main reasons:
-I want to give more depth in the story
-I want to give more background info to the whole story, like giving a name to the place where this story takes place
-I want to give more depth to the new characters in this story.
-Have to study for some tests coming really soon, and I have to do some homework, so yeah.
Well that's it, hope you all understand. also here is a fun fact I forgot to include with my previous lists.
In Chapter 3 of the last story, if you remember, the raptors pulled off a prank on Stardust by giving her a whole bottle of Pepto Bismal.
Well you see, that comes from a true story.
You see, I won't pull the WHOLE story, but my dad wanted to get revenge on his friends for making my dad pay literally 700 dollars as a joke. My dad is the type who gives a chance for the people to take their joke back. My dad asked his friends several times to give his money back, I mean it was 700 freaking dollars. And this was yaers ago, so don't forget about inflation. So my dad let them know that he was going to get revenge much worse. But instead his friends just laughed about it. At that time Petpo Bismal came with some new tablets to help settle heart burn. My dad took some because him and his friends were going to a trip to the airport, and they were not old, but getting at the age where heart burn is quite common. So he gave one to all of his friends and one to himslef. MY dad was a very good friend with a doctor, and my dad realized that after he took the pill, he was you know, contsipated and was releasing black feces. The docotr told him that it was coming from the Pepto Bismal pill. My dad left and his friends asked him for another pill. My dad then came up with a plan. His friends kept on asking for more and more of the pills. That's all I shall reveal because the NEXT THINGS he does with the prank are hilarious, but it would take an hour to write it all down.
PLEASE LEAVE A COMMENT!
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexFeb-25-2014 6:54 PMLooking forward to the chapter.
Jack of all trades. Master of none
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MemberCompsognathusFeb-25-2014 7:33 PMIs this still the tale of 401?
Life cannot be contained, it breaks walls, crashes through barriers sometimes painfully, but uh... Life uh, finds a way
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusFeb-25-2014 7:36 PMNo, this is the SEQUEL. I have the whole story on my Scified site.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Primal King
MemberCompsognathusFeb-25-2014 8:06 PMSounds good!
"If you can't see it... It's already too late."
-Jurassic Apocalypse (by Paden)
UCMP 118742
MemberCompsognathusFeb-26-2014 6:29 AMLoking forawrd to it.
Keep in mind that many people have died for their beliefs; it's actually quite common. The real courage is in living and suffering for what you believe in. -Brom-