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The Legacy of Raptor401: The Next Generation: Prologue

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MemberAllosaurusFebruary 24, 20141701 Views9 Replies

A special thanks for user Primal King for proofreading this. This is a direct continuation of the epilogue of Prehistoric Future: The Story of Raptor401, so if you have not already read the last story, chances are this story might not be good. If you wish to be a future proofreader for Chapter 1, claim for the position below and also only claim the position if you are on daily.

Enjoy!

THE LEGACY OF RAPTOR401: THE NEXT GENERATION

Prologue

In a place known as Area 401, there is a man named Thomas, who experienced a horrifying experience in his life where he lost all his friends, one by one. Through his experiences he had gotten quite mad. He decided to mess with Mother Nature yet again, and made some pet dinosaurs… but this time he took it to a huge extent. He snuck in to the lab that was restricted for only high-authority personnel. He decided that in memo ration of his lost friends, who were dinosaurs, he would make them dinosaurs that would morph from humans. When he snuck in, he used the advanced technology he was restricted to use, and used to create humans that could morph into dinosaurs. He gave life to 3 human-dinosaurs. One was named Levy, a boy, Katy, a girl, and Tom, a boy. He named one after his friend Levine, himself, and just decided he would name the girl Katy. Every day he would have to hide them in the old area where the previous super dinosaurs lived. What Thomas had done, though… was illegal. If the boss or the other workers found out, he would be killed along with the raptors. 13 years passed, nobody in Area 401 knew about the raptors.

But truth be told, secrets always get revealed sometime.

 PLEASE LEAVE A COMMENT ON YOUR THOUGHTS.

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Lord Vader
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Nice start.

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Raptor-401
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Thank you! I hope the dino-human thing was TOO far-fetched, though...

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Gojira2K
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This sounds good. Can I be the proof reader for Chapter 1?

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Lord Vader
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Considering the year it takes place in, not too much.

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Raptor-401
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@Gojira, yes, you have claimed it first!

@MR. Happy yah, but some people still might find it far-fetched.

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UCMP 118742
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Nah, it doesn't sound that far-fetched (mainly because of the year as Mr.Happy already mentioned).

Keep in mind that many people have died for their beliefs; it's actually quite common. The real courage is in living and suffering for what you believe in. -Brom-

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Elite Raptor 007
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Wow, it sounds really cool, can't wait for the next, can i also proofread it also.

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Raptor-401
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You can proofread ch2 Elite raptor, Gojira already asked before you, sadly.

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DinoSteve93
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Haha, great start.

PS. Here's a proofreader for ch. 3 ;)

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