Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusFeb-24-2014 7:01 PMA special thanks for user Primal King for proofreading this. This is a direct continuation of the epilogue of Prehistoric Future: The Story of Raptor401, so if you have not already read the last story, chances are this story might not be good. If you wish to be a future proofreader for Chapter 1, claim for the position below and also only claim the position if you are on daily.
Enjoy!
THE LEGACY OF RAPTOR401: THE NEXT GENERATION
Prologue
In a place known as Area 401, there is a man named Thomas, who experienced a horrifying experience in his life where he lost all his friends, one by one. Through his experiences he had gotten quite mad. He decided to mess with Mother Nature yet again, and made some pet dinosaurs… but this time he took it to a huge extent. He snuck in to the lab that was restricted for only high-authority personnel. He decided that in memo ration of his lost friends, who were dinosaurs, he would make them dinosaurs that would morph from humans. When he snuck in, he used the advanced technology he was restricted to use, and used to create humans that could morph into dinosaurs. He gave life to 3 human-dinosaurs. One was named Levy, a boy, Katy, a girl, and Tom, a boy. He named one after his friend Levine, himself, and just decided he would name the girl Katy. Every day he would have to hide them in the old area where the previous super dinosaurs lived. What Thomas had done, though… was illegal. If the boss or the other workers found out, he would be killed along with the raptors. 13 years passed, nobody in Area 401 knew about the raptors.
But truth be told, secrets always get revealed sometime.
PLEASE LEAVE A COMMENT ON YOUR THOUGHTS.
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Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusFeb-24-2014 7:04 PMThank you! I hope the dino-human thing was TOO far-fetched, though...
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Gojira2K
MemberCompsognathusFeb-24-2014 7:09 PMThis sounds good. Can I be the proof reader for Chapter 1?
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexFeb-24-2014 7:09 PMConsidering the year it takes place in, not too much.
Jack of all trades. Master of none
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusFeb-24-2014 7:10 PM@Gojira, yes, you have claimed it first!
@MR. Happy yah, but some people still might find it far-fetched.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
UCMP 118742
MemberCompsognathusFeb-25-2014 1:04 AMNah, it doesn't sound that far-fetched (mainly because of the year as Mr.Happy already mentioned).
Keep in mind that many people have died for their beliefs; it's actually quite common. The real courage is in living and suffering for what you believe in. -Brom-
Elite Raptor 007
MemberCompsognathusFeb-25-2014 7:48 AMWow, it sounds really cool, can't wait for the next, can i also proofread it also.
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusFeb-25-2014 5:07 PMYou can proofread ch2 Elite raptor, Gojira already asked before you, sadly.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
DinoSteve93
MemberCompsognathusFeb-26-2014 12:24 PMHaha, great start.
PS. Here's a proofreader for ch. 3 ;)
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