Sniper
MemberCompsognathusFeb-09-2014 4:58 AMThe first chapter of my strory is arrived!
1994,one year after Jurassic Park.
Since the events of Jurassic park,Isla nublar slowly become forgotten.
Dr.Sorking fixed the dinosaurs lethal gene,and after that the dinosaurs take possession of the island.
Southern territory:Isla Nublar
this territory controlled by the giganotosaurus pack.Their leader,Diablo is the biggest carnivore in the island along with his brother Redeye and Scarface,Diablo’s big rival.Nothing is safe when this pack going to hunt.
This morning Redeye lead the hunting group while Diablo take care of the eggs.Last week Sunlight ,Redeye’s mate made a nest and laid her eggs.Everything is normal,so Diablo lie down and fell asleep.
A hour later something sparked Diablo.Diablo quickly stood up and sniffing the air.Five minutes later this thing still here and now it looks like it isn’t alone.Then suddenly a herrerasaurus emerged between the bushes but it quickly stopped when it saw Diablo.
While Diablo watching the herrera an other run out of the bushes behind Diablo.The second herrera running towards the nest,but before it could grab one egg Diablo quickly turn back and grab the second herrera.The herrerasaurus roaring in pain,then Diablo finish it with one bite and throw opposite the other herrera.The herrerasaurus look at Diablo,and then quickly turn back and disappear behind a tree.Diablo started to eat the died herrerasaurus and after that he continiue to protect the eggs.
A few hour later the pack returned from the hunt with a dead juvenille parasaurolophus.Two hour later only the bones left from the para.The pack sleeping in the shadow.Sunlight is the first who wake up and walked to the river to drink.Halfway to the river Sunlight met with the herreras too,but she just ignored them and walked toward the river.It’s 3pm when Sunlight reach the river.She started to drink,but she felt that something wrong.A few seconds later a sarcosuchus jump off the water trying to grab Sunlight.
Fortunately Sunlight quickly jumbed back and roared to the giant crocodile.Sunlight trying to lure the crocodile from near the water,where she could handle it.The sarcosuchus try to grab Sunlight again,but it missed it’s target.Now the crocodile is enough far from the water and Sunlight attacked it.Sunligth grabbed the crocodile’s back,but the crocodile hit her head with it’s tail,and Sunlight released the crocodile.She couldn’t made much damage,but made enough to scare away the sarcosuchus.The scarcosuchus hissing and going back to the water.
Sunlight returned around 5pm,and lie down near Redeye.Redeye get up and bring a herrerasaurus carcass to Sunlight.While Sunlight walked to the river the herrerasaurus returned,but Redeye grab it’s head and crush it with one bite.The pair started to eat the carcass.Suddenly Scarface want to take away the carcass.Redeye get up,but before the two titan begin a fight,Diablo quickly intervened and gave back the carcass to Redeye.Around 8pm Sunlight heard noises.She know that those are her kids,and going to the nest.
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexFeb-09-2014 5:11 AMGood chapter, looking forward to the next.
A little advice: Title the chapter. It gives a little insight to what the chapter is about.
Jack of all trades. Master of none
Sniper
MemberCompsognathusFeb-09-2014 5:22 AMThanks Mr.Happy!
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexFeb-09-2014 5:34 AMYou're welcome. If you'd like, read a chapter or two of one of my stories, such as Thorn's Life: 65 Million Years Later Chapter 28, I just posted it.
Jack of all trades. Master of none
Killadj2012
MemberCompsognathusFeb-09-2014 2:33 PMThis is a good chapter that talk about a pack of titains.
If I could be anything I would be a Trex.
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