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MemberTyrannosaurus RexJan-25-2014 6:52 AMBasic Commands
After several months, Muldoon had taught Thorn basic commands such as stay, lie down, and attack. Thorn enjoyed having someone around, and she enjoyed learning new things. Muldoon had found a way to strap his SPAS 12 to her back, next to where he rode around on her, and it was always there when they weren't hunting.
They were walking towards the dock because Muldoon wanted to see if there were any supplies that could be scavenged. Before they got there, Thorn had seen a Jeep and went to check it out. "Alright, down." Thorn leaned down, and Muldoon climbed off to look at the Jeep. When he opened the door, he saw a body. "Haha, so there is a god, I thought the fat bastard escaped with the rest of the work force. Lazy asses, couldn't even be here for one of the most important days of the park's existence. Almost got me killed, and now my only companion is the T-Rex."
After looking at the Jeep, they got to the docks and didn't see anything. They continued looking around, and Thorn was drawn to some brightly coloured shipping containers. "I wonder if there's anything in them. How could we check?" Thorn heard Muldoon talking to himself, and wondered what it was about. "Alright, down, I have an idea." Thorn let Muldoon down and he pointed to one of the shipping containers. "Attack!" Thorn attacked the container and ripped it open. "Stop!" Muldoon climbed up and looked inside. "Damn, nothing." He pointed at another one, "Attack!" Thorn tore that one open, and same thing happened, nothing. He pointed at the next, gave the command, and then said, "Same?" Thorn didn't understand, and Muldoon pointed at the two previous containers. "Same. Is that one like those two?" Thorn looked at it, and then the other two, and got an idea on what "same" meant. She nodded yes, they were the same. This process continued until the last one was destroyed. They didn't find anything, but Thorn learned something new.
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Carnosaur
MemberCompsognathusJan-25-2014 10:46 AMgood chapter. Don't get discouraged by the lack of replies! i think people are just busy with their every day lives. keep 'em coming!
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MemberTyrannosaurus RexJan-25-2014 10:52 AMThanks. I figured that's what it is. Monday is the halfway point of the story, and Tomorrow has a fight.
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DinoSteve93
MemberCompsognathusJan-25-2014 11:36 AMGreat chapter MrHappy, I really love this story.
Sorry if I don't leave a comment on every of your chapters, but I'm very busy on finishing, my tasks for the JG Tech Demo, as all it's up to me now, hehe.
I'll try to comment as much as possible though.
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Killadj2012
MemberCompsognathusJan-25-2014 11:36 AMGood job MrHappy cant wait for the next one.
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MemberCompsognathusJan-25-2014 11:38 AMDinoSteve Id like to test it when the demo comes.
If I could be anything I would be a Trex.
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DinoSteve93
MemberCompsognathusJan-25-2014 11:48 AMHaha, everyone will test it when it comes! ;)
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MemberCompsognathusJan-25-2014 11:55 AMIm trtying to Syndicate to test it but hes with Kat right now and he said hes in minecraft.
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MemberTyrannosaurus RexJan-25-2014 12:07 PMThat's fine DinoSteve, can't wait until I can actualky play the game.
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Killadj2012
MemberCompsognathusJan-25-2014 12:09 PMMrHappy gone hunting lately.
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MemberTyrannosaurus RexJan-25-2014 12:11 PMNo, I haven't. I have exams, and I'm low on ammo after my friends came over for a few hours (I had almost 200, now I have about 50). That and it's been too damn cold and I've been feeling sick.
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MemberCompsognathusJan-25-2014 12:24 PMThat sucks im just using my crossbow and my front pourch and im going to be covered in snow.
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MemberCompsognathusJan-25-2014 1:15 PMGreat chapter. I wish I was Muldoon. Then I get to ride a T-Rex. Hope you feel better MrHappy. Dinosteve I also want to test it when the demo is out of Jurassic Genetics.
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MemberCompsognathusJan-26-2014 5:54 AMGood chapter, sorry i couldn't read it earlier
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