Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexJan-22-2014 4:25 AMHere's a chapter that's been pretty anticipated. I apologize if some of the events are in the wrong order, I haven't seen Jurassic Park in a while.
The Fall of Jurassic Park Part 1
Ten years after the Spinosaurus incident, Thorn is asleep in her favourite spot. The fences have been upgraded to 10 000 volts because she managed to break out one time, and scared away a vendor and ate all the food, and some cardboard containers.
It's a sunny day, and Hammod decided it would be a good day for some people to take the first tour of the park. The tour vehicles went past the Dilophosaurus paddock and saw nothing. It went past Thorn's paddock next, but she was asleep, so nothing again. It went past the Triceratops enclosure, and the people found it was sick.
A storm was about to break out when the tour vehicles started to come back the way they came, and they died in front of Thorn's paddock. It got dark and started to rain, the thunder waking her up. She walked around the enclosure, and eventually came across a goat that was chained to a post. She picked it up and ate it, ripping off a leg, which landed on a tour vehicle. She heard a scream, and looked where it came from, brushing her hand against the wire. She didn't feel anything, so she decided to check out the strange vehicles in front of her.
She stepped out of the enclosure and roared, wondering if the vehicles would be scared by it. When the nothing moved, she began to look at them, wondering why the vehicles weren't moving.
A random beam of light got her attention, and she walked towards it. The light was moving around when she got there, and she leaned in for a closer look. The light stopped moving, and it was shining in her eye, which bugged her and she stood up again. She was about to walk away when the door slamming shut got her attention. She growled at it, and saw movement inside. She tried to bite through the sunroof, but the glass was in the way, and the kids screaming didn't help her anger.
She got tired of trying to get at them that way, so she flipped the car over and stepped on it. She bit the tire and pulled it off, and before she could do anything else, someone yelling got her attention. She looked where it came from, and saw a man, Alan Grant, holding a flare. He waved it around, and similar to the pizza incident, she didn't take her eyes off it, and when he threw it, she chased after it. Another man, Ian Malcolm, got her attention by yelling and waving a flare, and she heard Grant yell, "Ian! No!" She knew that the other man didn't want the guy she was chasing to do that because she knows what no means. She attacked Malcolm, but missed and knocked down the bathroom that Donald Gennaro, InGen's main attorney, was hiding in, and she attacked after a brief moment.
She turned and walked back to the vehicle that she flipped over, and a scream got her attention. Thorn heard Grant say, "Don't move, they can only see movement." Thorn didn't understand what he said, but she looked at them and saw they weren't moving for some reason. She pushed the car and it started to spin, and when she got bored with it, she pushed it off the edge. She still didn't understand why the two people had stopped moving, and if she was hungry, she would have taken the free meal. She walked away from the scene after the car was over the edge, and she disappeared into the forest.
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MemberCompsognathusJan-22-2014 7:20 AMI love the part where she doesn't understand why they stopped moving. XD
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Gojira2K
MemberCompsognathusJan-22-2014 8:09 AMGreat chapter and don't worry you got every thing in the right order.
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.
Carnosaur
MemberCompsognathusJan-22-2014 8:41 AMgood stuff :) excited for part 2
Nature doesn't deceive us; it is we who deceive ourselves.
DinoSteve93
MemberCompsognathusJan-22-2014 2:25 PMHaha, really great chapter. Good job, I enjoyed that very much. :)
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