The Dwarf Dragon-Upcoming story

So, for keeping you guys fresh until JW comes, I`m writing a 10 chapters story. It will be featuring the rise to the power of a young Balur growing in the Cretaceous Transylvanian landscape. It will be named The Dwarf Dragon because of the name Balaur Bondoc, that in the romanian language literally means: well, dwarf dragon. List of characters: Bright eyes: [img]http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs71/i/2013/271/4/5/balaur_bondoc_by_moricemonkey93-d6oazq6.jpg[/img] He has very bright eyes, because of his superior intelligence. He is the principal character in the story. Black terror: [img]http://th07.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/i/2013/271/f/8/bradycneme_by_moricemonkey93-d6oazuh.jpg[/img] He is the main villain, a mutated 7 feet tall and 20 feet long Bradycneme. Also, other characters are: Bright eyes`s family, an Eleopteryx named Shaggy, a couple of Tarascosaurus, and other species like Hatzegopteryx, Magyarosaurus, Telmatosaurus, Paludititan, etc... So, what are your thoughts?