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Arjan Bos
MemberCompsognathusSep-18-2013 8:03 AMAmong others, I too wrote my own version for JP4, and continued it into JP5.
For those who like to read it, you can find them here:
JP4: [url=http://www.scribd.com/doc/153103825/Jurassic-Park-IV-Screenplay-JP4]http://www.scribd.com/doc/153103825/Jurassic-Park-IV-Screenplay-JP4[/url]
JP5: [url=http://www.scribd.com/doc/156249155/Jurassic-Park-V-Screenplay]http://www.scribd.com/doc/156249155/Jurassic-Park-V-Screenplay[/url]
It's fan made, so no real thing or anything, but I included many ideas that I found in books, screenplays and ideas mentioned on forums.
Hope you like it. I'd be very interested to read your reactions here...
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Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexSep-18-2013 7:34 PMHoly S*** those are long. I only read the first one, I doubt I'm going to read the second one, I can't stand to see the islands destroyed.
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Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexSep-18-2013 9:30 PMI read the second one. Good story, good writing, but for a different movie, I just don't see Jurassic Park in it.
I still can't believe I read both!
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Arjan Bos
MemberCompsognathusSep-18-2013 11:37 PMThanks for reading and the comments. It's true there is no park concept (yet). But the events are in my eyes in memory and building on the legacy of Jurassic Park. Maybe the park feeling could be brought back within these stories... Thanks for your feedback anyway. I'd really wish Sir Richard Attenborough would be in a state to reprise his role as John Hammond. Just to hear his voice would be cool :)
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexSep-19-2013 5:34 AMI wish that Hammod would be in it too. Did you read my plot ideas?
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DinoSteve93
MemberCompsognathusSep-19-2013 6:30 AMI read the first one a while ago, a good plot. I don't think I'm going to read the second one, because, as MrHappy said, they're very long!
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Arjan Bos
MemberCompsognathusSep-19-2013 6:31 AMI just read a few on this website as well. The one with the T-Rex rampage included from someone else was yours right? I did read that, which would need to be worked out a bit more. I do not really believe in a happy ending for a park setup. The whole point of the park is that it would fail eventually.
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexSep-19-2013 6:38 AMYeah, that was mine, and I was trying to set up a sequel, and then another, because Jurassic world is supposed to kick off another trilogy, and I plan on doing a third.
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Arjan Bos
MemberCompsognathusSep-19-2013 6:52 AMSo did I, which would continue with a new park on Nublar in the sixth after the events in my 4th and 5th ;-)
SPOILER:
rich buyer of Nublar in the end of my 5th = Biosyn.
But I started writing on another project. So maybe after JP4 comes out.
Arjan Bos
MemberCompsognathusSep-19-2013 8:04 AMAbout the comments on the length :)
Screenplays are written to represent the amount of time the movie will take. True, my JP5 screenplay takes about 2,5 hours of screentime, but I feel Jurassic Park deserves this time. I read and re-read the script myself too and I have the idea it is not too much.
If you feel let down by the ending of JP4, which was supposed to be dramatic, and more real than the crying mercenaries as seen in JP3, I'd hope you'll take the time to read JP5 too, as this will most likely have a more satisfying ending ;-)
DinoSteve93
MemberCompsognathusSep-19-2013 8:38 AMIf you referred to me, I don't feel let down by the ending, on the contrary, it's very interesting and very authentic.
But you have a point. Jurassic Park really deserves 2 hours or maybe a little more. Probably I'll make a try and I'll read JP5 too. :)
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Arjan Bos
MemberCompsognathusSep-19-2013 9:19 AM:) Thanks. No, on the "feel let down" part I wasn't particularly referring to you DinoSteve93. I've read discussions about the particular ending I used. I noted not just MrHappy9097 feels that way. So I re-wrote it a bit to make it more dramatic and create the feeling that it was not the ideal solution.
Anyway if you do decide to read it, I hope you like it ;)
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