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X_PADEN_X - You are most welcome! It is quite obvious that this was a labor of love for you as it was FANTASTIC! Keep up the excellent work! :)

Thanks you too.

but I would be WAY better on computer.

Nice, I have seen this on youtube, but from hips up, Paden is like lwgs little too thick so is tail...

Your welcome, thanks for writting! :D

Can't wait! Good luck Paden! 

JPCerato

Nicely written...you have got good points.

legs & arms actually look pretty good...what one would ecpect from a large living creature..i like this one

I say the carcaradon wins because of its abnormal bulk.

tarbosaurus is like a t.rex but smaller, less robust and gas a more slender skull.

this is not like a small scale t.rex vs giganotosaurs.

I picture them to be like a orange-brown with a few bright colours, maybe the alpha have like a toocan beak, not sure, an yeah, dilo style Paden ;)

Your very right there, its just to me, once you in its mouth, game over, also the bacteria, I think claws would play part, but not that big of a part, just my op.

Legs look a little thick... As does the tail, But the head looks right, As are the eyes. 

With it being a Sunday and a weekend, It's going to be a tad slow. 

I've posted things that don't get replies, But it's alright, People got there own lives too. 

I think it's pretty Interesting... I know that in the EU Of JP, They had Dimorphodons, And If I recall, they did kill a few people. (By EU I mean some of the Comics that were realeased, You can read some online, Others have to be bought from stores, but they never fail to disapoint, I read one about a drug lord taking over Nublar, and one of the old lab workers who didn't leave the island had to stop him. It was great. )

It's kinda the Dilo concept again, Where, they use a deception of calm and stupid to lure you in.

Can't wait to learn whats in store for them. 

Thanks for the encouraging words guys!

I do also want to point out it's not for a month, But thanks regardless, 2 Years is kinda a big thing. 

Something I want to do in my third year on the forum is help new writers out. 

@Mr.Happy9097

I'm eager to see what you've got in store... We've also got an FBR Anniversary or something coming up too... Somewhere...  Maybe we should look into what we're gonna cook up for that, Eh?

@Tyrant-King

Unfortunatley, I don't comment as Frequently as I once did, But I must give you an Applause, That's a good acheivement. (someones got like 3000+ posts on one of the forums, I think It might be Chris, but I'm not sure)

@Sci-Fi King25

I look foreward to it man. I forget if I extended a Congradulations on one year or not, So, Congrats on a year and like, a half now! *Claps*

@Gojira2k

14 Months is still impressive.

@JPCERATO

I'm getting a feeling of continuing this writing style a little. Thanks for the Congrats. I've been motivated to right a new chapter friday or earlier (As school will dictate with homework)

@Something-Real

If there's something I look for in a post, It's your comments S-R, They're always nice. Thanks for the Positive feedback its greatly appreciated. All fan works are great labors of love, I stuns me a little at how much effort is put into the fandom. 

@Alphadino65

Thanks! That's really kind of you to say that. I Suppose I'll move on more with this writing style perhaps. Michael Crichton has been one of my favourite authors, you can just absorb yourself into his writings. I come nothing close to him, But I like that someone felt that from one of my works... Thanks, I means a lot.

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Thanks for taking the time to reply, Authors usually use this to gauge there work and connect with someone outside of their head. keep in mind whenever you read something, that It means a whole lot to the authors or groups behind the post when you reply. 

Thanks, I'm really pumped for this next chapter, Expect these to be on my Site too, Expect a Friday update. 

-Paden out-

@Primal King

I've seen some of the work that goes into it, A hand definatley has to be given to the folks who've got the patience for that. Definatley. But again... It could be better then what they've presented. Right now, we're in the "Nostalgia" stage, where, some people are like "I was a kid when that came out... No way, I'd better read the books and watch the movies before it comes out"

Some won't pay attention to the SFX, However, Many critics tear apart films for poor CG. Some of their first judgements coming from the starting trailers.

To your restaurant point, it makes sense... The inital bit might be a little Underwhelming, But the Meal to follow will be Great. 

I see the point made there indeed.  But why not give them Equal experiences?

Paden, I truly believe that this story of yours is in the upper echelon of all JP fan fiction, and definitely the best I have read since I got on here.  It is really deep and thought-provoking so far, and I know that you will keep raising the bar in terms of quality.  It really blew me away, so much so that I felt I was reading a Michael Crichton novel that he would have written long after The Lost World (if he chose to, and if he was still alive).

Well veteruiptesaurus has a very powerful bite too.

so there is no advantage in terms of bite since both can easily kill the other with a single good bite to a vital area.

and arms do matter. The veteruiptesaurus can just simply rear up. But if the tarbosaurus attacks the veteruiptesaurus. He can just start slashing  the attacking tarbos face and then come down on the tarbo with his jaws.

So, all that aside, what do you think Dimorphodon will look like?

Thanks! Means a lot coming from you Mr. Happy! Delta lived like you asked, can't wait for yours!

:D

Great fight, possibly your best yet. Wasn't sure who to root for, not disappointed with the result.

Yeah I agree teeth are more important (jaw) than claws, like Happy said you would have to be almost underneath...

Frankly, I don't have time to post on everything. I'll be reading, but can't guarentee I'll post.

I know like I said, no research just off the top of my head, but like I said Tarbosaurus or tyrannosaurs in general were more advanced.

With the information provided, I'm leaning towards Tarbo. They're roughly the same size, roughly the same strength, speed won't really play a huge role in a 1 vs 1 rock 'em sock 'em knock 'em out street fight, Tarbo has a slight bite advantage while Veteruip has larger arms.

Personally, I'm of the opinion that arms do not play a major role in carnivore vs carnivore combat because the opponent would have to be practically underneath said dinosaur for its arms to do any damage. Sure, said predator could rear up, but that puts it in a dangerous position.

I think Tarbosaurus would win due to its teeth. They were a combination of crushing and slashing. That would be a deadly combination should it hit a vital. If it hit the back or neck, Tarbo would have a better shot at doing some serious damage than Veteruip.

X_PADEN_X - That was exceptionally well written and exceedingly fun to read! The concepts you have couched within your plot were thought provoking and beyond the norm of what is typically seen with regards to the Jurassic Park topic! As such, I found this to be one of my absolute favorite pieces of Jurrasic  Park fan fiction! Please continue this wonderful work! Thank you ever so much for taking the time to produce and present this to us! :)

Well this opponent is very powerful too. His bite was most if not just as strong as tarbosaurus.

I don't know more general knowledge, haven't researched, I just think Tyrannosaurs were so advanced, stronger bite, bulkier and more size intimidation... 

Nice job!!!! Congrats! BIG ACHIEVMENT! Nicely written, can't wait for the next!

Nice like stated 3 times, but yeah not much happening with replies, I have posted on almost everything this morning, I hate not getting replies... :O

Here is my fight, got 3 replies...

http://www.jurassicworldnews.com/community/forums/topic/39410 

I know what you mean, But I can't be bothered to repost...

I agree  with GMAN

Nice!!! I love the new design! :D

Why do you say tarbo wins.

I see you put whi....I know how you feel, for me the worst is i instead of o it always happend!!!

Yeah think Tarbosaurus would win!

So does my IPod...I have only ever posted on that thing twice...I'm using the computer for this :P

Welcome! Good to see new people, I'm JPCerato :D Nice to meet you!

I would say yes! PLEASE YES! JPOG is my favourite game, I hadn't even pleayed and I said that, but now, I have, got it for free, so fun!!!!

Welcome!

Christ, i never thaught i would have to defend jp's effects on a jp fansite. The most recent time i saw jp was last summer, i'm 34 (not a child) and the effects are still amazing.

Great job! Can't wait to read the rest!

Congrats on being here two years! I've been here a year and two months!

Can't wait to see the winners of the DWC.

I know what you mean.

several of latest threads have gotten no replies.

but I read your thread. And looked at the website.

Nice job Paden! :) I can't wait to find out what the thing is. (My two year anniversary is in November. :P)

Sorry, I wasn't getting replies and thought no one was listening. 

Not a lot to it, but it's pretty much the textbook answer you would expect from a film composer. I wouldn't fear whether or not he'll be using the old themes, I'm fairly sure we'll hear them in the film.

You have posted this 3 Times already.