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It's odd that Wong would blatantly suggest he isn't returning but have Marshall suggest he is. Perhaps Marshall means InGEN will be back, the company, rather than Dr. Wu specifically.

Interesting, thanks for this! I mean Sy's character was left in the jungle so who knows what became of him. He probably got eaten by a Dinosaur.

thanks,

There's a plus side to the horrible ending: Humans never exist!  >:D

GORILLAGODZILLA - You are most welcome! :)

Thank you so much SR. Tyrant the only other one I like besides the canon is the horrible ending--cause that was how the story could've ended at one point.

^Good additions

Gar growled gutturally as he confront this suchomimus. He didn't mind the rising water, both Spinosaurus and Suchomimus are comfortable in the water. The Suchomimus flayed her arms out as she starts grunting her territorial display but the Gar wasn't intimidated, he roared at the Suchomimus before attempt to slash at her with his claws. But the Suchomimus wasn't no push over, she snapped her jaws at the larger spinosaurus. A large wave crashed upon these two beasts as they continue their squall.

The female Suchomimus bit the Gar's hand as she started to pull him and herself closer to the open water. Gar raised his free claw and slashed at the Suchomimus's eye, she released her grasp on his hand, Gar charged at the suchomimus. The Suchomimus made a break for it towards the open water, Gar roared triumphantly as the suchomimus left his gaze, now he turned his attention back to the jungle; to rest.

Tarnoc signaled his fellows to zerg rush the blind Plateosaurus, they leaped on to its back, biting and tear at its flesh. The Plateosaurus made its last groans as its herd abandons it to its fate. Tarnoc turned his head as a strange smell caught his attention, the clouds began to make crackling noise as thunder was fighting itself in the clouds. The wind picked up more as rain began to pour down hard and like a showering wall it moved across the great open water before it hit the beach.

Visibility was decreasing rapidly as Tarnoc attempts to make it back to his pack, the wind was blowing harder on him then it was mere minutes ago before he felt the water crash into him. Before he knew it he was submerged, he desperately swam to the surface as he hoots for his packmates. The heavy winds and tide pushes him further away from the shore. Tarnoc again tries hooting for his packmates, he heard some of them calling back, he attempts to swim to their vocal location but something big fell into the water causing Tarnoc to be pushed further away; the big thing approached Tarnoc, it was a fell tree.

Only ending I like is the canon one

SCI-FI KING25 - That was a very interesting chapter! I greatly enjoy the choices you have made with regards to the animals in your story! :)

GORILLAGODZILLA -  Oh, wow! I very much enjoyed the alternate endings you have presented! Naturally, I prefer the Great Ending over the others! However, I feel that the story, itself, stands on its own quite capably! I am still extremely pleased to have had the opportunity to share in the adventures you created from the beginning! Thank you ever so much for taking the time to create this and share it with us! :)

DARTH TYRANT - This was exceptionally fun and engaging! I am very pleased with your descriptions throughout your work! How excellent! Thank you ever so much for sharing this with us! :)

SCI-FI KING25 - This is most excellent! I am very pleased with the way in which you have presented the opening of your new adventure! I am greatly looking forward to reading what you have in store for us next! :)

Junior returned from the coastline back in to the Jungle, he traversed the all too familiar forests and game trails he has known ever since he was an infant. Being a middle-aged Tyrannosaurus, he was lucky enough to even survive this long since he has competed with many large and larger carnivores that his genus wouldn't naturally be fighting against. But despite of all that he survived against Allosauruses, Carchardontosauruses, Suchomimuses, Spinosauruses, and Giganotosauruses but the genus he dislikes getting into confrontations with is another Tyrannosaurus.

Junior picked up the scent of his favorite prey, Parasaurolophus and Lambeosauruses. He liked hunting hadrosaurs since they lack Clubbed or Spiked tails like Ankylosauruses and Stegosauruses or a Kentrosaurus, they lacked a horny face like the Triceratops or a Torosaurus, or they aren't as massive as a Sauropod like Brachiosaurus Mamenchisaurus, or a Apatosaurus.

Junior carefully watched the hadrosaurs graze, waiting for the opportunity to strike. He stayed within the trees, his skin coloration and patterns allows him to blend in with the trees as the hadrosaurs graze in the yellow meadow. A sub-adult Parasaurolophus ventures to close to the forest as it chews the tasty pink flowers. Junior without provocation lunged out of the trees, his massive jaws crushed the young parasaurolophus's skull. He threw down the herbivore's lifeless carcass to ground, he released his jaws from the parasaurolophus's head as he moved his jaws to the herbivore's stomach. With one bite, he spilled his prey's guts; Blood, Intestines, and Bladders oozed out.

The scent of blood would naturally draw other theropods to his kill. Several Nublar/Eastern Velociraptors apparoched Junior's kill, Junior has meet their kind before despite their small size in comparison to him, they can be more than a nuisance. Junior roared at them but the Nublar Raptors snapped back and hissed, Junior trotted over to frighten them off but another group of Nublar raptors leaped on to the freshly kill parasaurolophus carcass. 

Enraged Junior bit into one of the Velociraptors and swallowed it whole, the Nublar Raptors all turned round furious and began to leap on to Junior all while biting his hide. Junior was in trouble, he tried his best to bite away the ones that his neck could reach but there was too many. He thought he was done for, done in by a carnivore smaller than him but he heard the sound of another tyrannosaurus.

A Female Tyrannosaurus grabbed the velociraptors were Junior couldn't get and slung them into the trees. The remaining velociraptors quickly leaped off of Junior as they retreated. The female licked Junior's wounds and nudged him up off the ground.

Savage bro! Also on The End chat (so  no one would be spoiled) we'll tell GG about....the project..

Well The central hub of The End which is the Golden-Land is in Montana I believe.

^I haven't introduced the main antagonist yet. ;)

^Well the continents shifted, remember.  65 million years ago they looked like this:

Very good job xD. I just realized though that The End takes place in North America, so if this takes place on Isla Nublar we have some plot issues. But who cares?

Chapter 3 up

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Chapter 2 is up

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Awesome! I love how you portrayed the dinosaurs and Hook the Megaraptor seem to be the protagonists.

MAN ALL THESE CHAPTERS ARE PHENOMENALLLLL!

Firestreak defiantly left the safety of his nest, his peers who where brooding their eggs, just stared at him bewildered to were the young velociraptor was going before ignoring him completely as he grew further away from their senses.

Firestreak decided to follow the hunting party's scent trail, his light protofeather covering protected his skin from dripping tree water as he occasionally shakes himself dry if his protofeathers gets too soaked.

Several small herbivores were grazing on the jungle ferns, among them were Dryosauruses and Homalocephale. Firestreak was very excited, his very first hunt.

Indeed

^This new series is phenomenal.  Brings back memories of the JP films

Tigerfang like all males of his subspecies, he sports a tiger stripe pattern with a white underneath in contrast of his western counterparts who are grayish purple with a red line streaking from there eye down to the tip of their tail and pronounced crest knob in the front of its eyes. Tigerfang looked over and spot a few females of his subspecies which were a plain dark gray in stark contrast with the western subspecies's bone white with gray stripes and like their males they have a pronounced crest near their eye. Tigerfang remembers these other raptors, he encountered them several times over the coarse of his life. He is a rather old Raptor and he has lived a long life, nearing his 20th year of life and he still has the strength to survive. 

He turned away from the females as he headed out of the Tall Grass. He then made his way up a hill before turning back to the tall grass below, his home. He fears that this may be the last time he would ever see it again. the call of prey refocused attention back to the deeper recesses of the jungle.

^It is the best!

Jurassic Park is definitely one of the best dinosaur movies. I was able to find it on TV today.

^Great start

^Great addition

Darkness came with Night, the clouds began to fused together as they grow ever so darker and swollen. Winds started to pick up as the waves violently battered the waters between the islands but this didn't concern Gar as he swam like an over grown crocodile back to the southern coast of Isla Sorna. His sail broke through the watery surface before the top part of his snout then head, back, and tail surfaced. Gar placed his feet firmly on the shallow water's ground, lifting the rest of his body save for his feet out of the water. Between his crocodile-like jaws was a modern day Pacific Salmon, he quickly gulped it down like a pelican as his gaze met with a hungry Suchomimus.

Also being the most realistic portrayal of dinosaurs of that era!

Well the most realistic you can get with genetically altered dinosaurs, :P

^Noice

The afternoon sun begins to set, clouds gather above the southern coast to isla Sorna's sister island, Isla Muerta. A pack of Dilophosaurus gather at its beach hunting for a herd of Plateosauruses, the leader of the unorganized Dilophosaurus Pack, or at least he is the one with the most prominent and colorful crest; his name is Tarnoc. Tarnoc decided to move his pack up hill  to where he can both keep a head of the plateosaurus herd as well as potentially cut them off when they reach a conjuncture. He ran for minutes before seizing the opportunity as the hill and the beach converged into a sloppy valley. Tarnoc leaped in front of the heard, flaring the skin folds on his neck into a frill, he expanded his jaws as his tongue flapped violently emitting a snake-like hiss. The Plateosaurus dropped down to all fours to bellow at their attackers but Tarnoc and his pack stood firm and they spat a volley of their venom at their prey's eyes.