Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-29-2014 6:46 PMBefore you read, note that this is not the end of the story alltogether, it is merely the end of Part I.
Chapter 6
Fernando waited at home for Ryan. In his hand, he was holding 500 dollars, money he stole from the school’s donation box for the Rice Foundation. He knew that this money could have been used to save all the hungry children in India, but natural selection had to take its toll, he thought.
Ryan walked in and opened the door to see Fernando waiting for him.
“Hello, Ryan.” Said Fernando.
Ryan did not respond back.
“Well, I happened to, uh, overhear your conversation with the others today.” He said.
No answer.
“I am very disappointed that you’d betray me. Furthermore, I am sorry to say that you mustn’t be able to tell mom and dad of my endeavors. And I am quite sad that you guys didn’t believe me and my accounts of Jesus oh so misfortunate incident.” Said Fernando.
“I cannot allow you to hurt people.” Said Ryan.
“Oh, you see I don’t hurt people.” Said Fernando.
“Yes, you do, you sick bastard.” Said Ryan.
Fernando merely laughed. He pulled out the money and was about to offer it as a bribe to Ryan when Ryan slapped the money out of his hand, the 20 dollars bills flying around Fernando like a shower.
Fernando got rid of his grin, as he put his right hand into his right pocket, and pulled out a knife.
“Now listen, bud, I really cannot let you get me into trouble right now. As coordinator of The F of the A-” Said Fernando, before being interrupted.
“What the hell is the F of the A!?” Said Ryan.
“Let me show you.” Said Fernando. He held the point of the knife towards Ryan as with his grin he forced Ryan to lead him into Fernando’s room. There Fernando sat down, and started up the computer.
He pressed some keyboard buttons and said:
“Initiate Fight of the Ages Simulation, First Series.”
Then the screen of the monitor went black, and then a screen showed up:
Welcome to First Series, Play As:
1- Ozzy
2- Captain2K
3- Storm
4- Scarface
5- Rexy
6- Bright Eyes
7- Major General 9097
8- Captain Paden K.
-OR-
9- View as ‘401’
10- View as Guest
Fernando then clicked on Option 10.
The Screen went Black.
Then, white text appeared, and along came the narrating voice:
It shall soon began. 8 competitors shall fight till there is only one victor. Why are these people fighting? Well with new technology, we have analyzed characters from stories and fights and put them in a simulation fight. They are exactly the way they would be in real life. It will take place in a forest-type environment. Who is competing!?
Welcome Ozzy, a male Acrocanthosaurus. He is mean and has a special technique that can make her tougher than he seems!!! Whoever encounters this beast is not in for an easy time!!!
Welcome Captain 2K, an evil lunatic, with heavy armor and TOUGH weapons, even the biggest dinosaurs ain’t going to want to f*ck with this Samurai!!!
Welcome Major General 9097!!! This lunatic has some guns with him, and while that may seem not too strong with his enemies, well you are wrong!!! Good aim and strong guns will make him a worthy competitor!!!
Welcome Rexy, the biggest baddest T-Rex you will ever see!!! Ruthless, he will kill anything in his way!!! Watch out!!!
Welcome Storm!!! This tough Rex has had a tough life, but she can take on anything!!! But he is very intelligent and caring, so be careful!!! Sometimes Brains conquers strength!!!
Welcome Scarface!!! This is one TOUGH and MEAN Gigantosaurus. He has over 50 scars, and a dozen scars on his face!!! He has been in hundreds of battles and only 3 others dinosaurs have come even close to defeating him!!! Whoever faces him is indefinitely in for a TOUGH TOUGH TOUGH time!!!
Welcome Bright Eyes!!! This is a raptor, now don’t laugh!!! She is fast, she is as smart as a human, and she has a secret DEADLY weapon. She can also set traps!!! Look into here eyes and she may smell fear!!!
And Last but not least, welcome Captain K., also known as Paden!!! He is extremely smart, and has TONS AND TONS of training, he also has training to KILL dinosaurs, to KILL them. The dinosaurs better watch out for him!!!
Then, again, black screen, more text:
Part I: One Foot Leads to Another
For the next hour and a half, Ryan watch the F of the A: First Series.
After it was all over, Fernando turned off the monitor displaying the F of the A.
“Now, do you see why you can’t stop me, or no?” Asked Fernando as he held the tip of the knife against Ryan’s face.
END OF THE KING: PART I.
More of what happens next will be revealed after F of the A Riders. After all, wouldn’t want to give away all the mysteries of the F of the A.
I really do hope you enjoyed Part 1 of this backstory.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Lord Vader
MemberTyrannosaurus RexAug-29-2014 6:56 PMNice job on this. I guess my theory was right, about them not truly dying because it's a simulation.
Looking forward to Riders.
Jack of all trades. Master of none
Gojira2K
MemberCompsognathusAug-29-2014 6:58 PMPart 1 was amazing! Great job! Can't wait for more. Can't wait for Riders as well. When will we be able to create our characters?
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-29-2014 7:01 PMThanks Mr. Happy! Yes, it is most likely your theory is correct!
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-29-2014 7:01 PMGojira, thank you. AS of right now I am typing the official guidelines for it!!!!I would say next week!
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Gojira2K
MemberCompsognathusAug-29-2014 7:03 PMYes! I really enjoyed creating characters for this, and can't to do it again and read them fight each other.
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-29-2014 7:05 PMYes, thank you!!! I hope you guys are really excited for this!!!
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
JRR
MemberCompsognathusAug-29-2014 7:06 PMnICE I TOUGTH FERNANDO WOULD GO INSANE AND FINISH THE FOTHA IN AN INSANE ISYLUM
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-29-2014 7:07 PMOkay, first of all, calm down. Second, the story isn't over, third, multiple F of the A's.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
JRR
MemberCompsognathusAug-29-2014 7:09 PMSorry only the 1st letter in the text whas gona be caps but i accidentally did it the oposite with the 1st letter beeing lowercase
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-29-2014 7:10 PMOh, okay, glad to know you weren't mad at me or anything!!!
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Allotitan
MemberCompsognathusAug-29-2014 7:11 PMgreat as always Raptor. Think I might have sent you my registration already. How many parts are there?
When life gives you lemons, don't make lemonade. Tell life I don't want you're damn lemons, and then squeeze them into life's eyes!
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-29-2014 7:13 PMThanks Allo. Like I said before, you could send me the outlines, but I will ask again for offical drafts.
I plan to make a trilogy.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Allotitan
MemberCompsognathusAug-29-2014 7:14 PMOk can't wait for the next ones
When life gives you lemons, don't make lemonade. Tell life I don't want you're damn lemons, and then squeeze them into life's eyes!
JRR
MemberCompsognathusAug-29-2014 7:14 PMOh forgot to tell thats a good story
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-29-2014 7:16 PMThanks Allo and Cat, hopefully the guidelines will be posted by the end of the week. Like I said, it's possible I may not be here much on the forums for Labor Day weekend.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Gojira2K
MemberCompsognathusAug-29-2014 7:19 PMI probably won't be on much tomorrow either, being my birthday. Sunday I will be, probably not Monday.
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-29-2014 7:20 PMWell I hope you truly have a good birthday Gojira2K!!! If you want, and If I am able too, I could post a special post for you as a Happy Birthday!!!
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Carnosaur
MemberCompsognathusAug-29-2014 7:20 PMGreat job as always. Nice seeing ozzy mentioned again! :D i should really continue her story on the site..
Nature doesn't deceive us; it is we who deceive ourselves.
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-29-2014 7:22 PMThanks Carnosaur!!! Yes, it is nice to see the competitors from the first F of the A be re-mentioned!!!
Do what you feel like, I would finsih it!!! Need to finsih my Tom story, as well...
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Gojira2K
MemberCompsognathusAug-29-2014 7:36 PMYeah, that would be great!
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-29-2014 7:38 PMOkay, hope I will be able to come up with something!!!
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Gojira2K
MemberCompsognathusAug-29-2014 7:42 PMI am confident in your ability to suceed.
"There is nothing noble in being superior to your fellow man; true nobility is being superior to your former self." - Ernest Hemingway.
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-29-2014 7:48 PMThanks for the compliment!!!
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Hiphopananomus
MemberCompsognathusAug-30-2014 4:02 AMGood chapter. Sad to see part 1 is over but, looking forward to riders!
"Somewhere on this island is the greatest predator that ever lived. Second greatest predator must take him down."Roland Tembo"
"Jurassic park: The Lost World"
Sci-Fi King25
MemberAllosaurusAug-30-2014 6:35 AMNice chapter! When can I register for Riders?
“Banana oil.”- George Takei, Gigantis: The Fire Monster
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-30-2014 8:31 AMThanks Sci-Fi King!!!! Hopefully today, actually!!!
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Sci-Fi King25
MemberAllosaurusAug-30-2014 8:34 AMIs it going to be on a new discussion or do we PM registrations?
“Banana oil.”- George Takei, Gigantis: The Fire Monster
Raptor-401
MemberAllosaurusAug-30-2014 8:38 AMI'm going to post a discussion and then you guys PM me your entries.
IT'S TIME TO DU-DU-DU-DU-DUEL!!!
Sci-Fi King25
MemberAllosaurusAug-30-2014 8:40 AMOkay. Thanks for clearing that up.
“Banana oil.”- George Takei, Gigantis: The Fire Monster